Date: 12/10/11 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow, Bill's awkward line was just BRILLIANT! And 2/3 isn't a bad success rate at all ;D
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: finally! some love for the pickup line! lol and no, 2/3 ain't bad at all! thanks for reading!
Date: 12/10/11 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow, that has just as high a success rate as The Naked Guy routine? Thats pretty awesome.
This was a reslly good chapter. The mortification Bill must've felt when that came out of his mouth...I just...wow. And Tom was very gracious in his refusal, though I do wish Bill would;ve let him finish his sentance before he asked to forget about it.
Great stuff. Andi really was a genius for reminding Bill that Tom
Author's Response: bill just figured nothing good could come after tom's "but" comment so he just backtracked. thanks for reading! and i think part of your comment got cut off.
Date: 12/10/11 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh my word, Bill's come-on line cracked me up. I laughed so hard I was asked what happened to me. Combined with his deer-in-the-headlights look, that is priceless!
I also really like how you've continued with Andi's random French phrases, certainement! He and Natalie are great support characters for poor Bill.
I can't wait to see where Bill and Tom go from here!
Author's Response: don't ask me where i came up with that random little quirk of andi's but i'm going with it. thanks!
Date: 12/10/11 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just caught up the last two chapters and oh my god bills too much in it!
Author's Response: ain't he sweet? lol thanks for reading!
Date: 12/10/11 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bill was more put together than I would be. Props.
Author's Response: can bill ever really look bad though?
Date: 12/10/11 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
haha Bill is SO random lol, Im loving this
Author's Response: three cheers for random bill!
Date: 12/10/11 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMFG i can not believe bill asked that kind of question!
Author's Response: he just blurted it out! *hugs bill* thanks for reading!
Date: 12/10/11 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lol, gotta love awkward Bill. :3 Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: awkward bill is adorable! thanks for reading!
Date: 12/10/11 11:56 am Title: Chapter 3
That should be number 2 on the worst pick-up line list ever. LMAO.
Author's Response: it's the first thing he could think of! lol thanks for reading!
Date: 12/10/11 11:27 am Title: Chapter 3
*le gasp!* Bill, is that your best pick up line? ahahahaha, oh god, i litteraly LOL'd thankyou :)
Author's Response: hey! the pick up line works, dammit! it's not bill's fault! lol thanks for reading!
Date: 12/10/11 02:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Ohhhhhh my gosh, I'm already hooked =] when will you update next?
Author's Response: in about 2 seconds
Date: 12/08/11 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Haha! I love the awkwardness. Really enjoying this! :)
Author's Response: poor sweet crushed out bill!
Date: 12/08/11 08:21 am Title: Chapter 2
only 9 chappies D: awwww well this is really cute I cant wait for another update :D
Author's Response: yeah, its a short one. but it's really good, i promise!
Date: 12/08/11 02:41 am Title: Chapter 2
smiles
Author's Response: *big happy grin*
Date: 12/08/11 12:36 am Title: Chapter 2
that made me laugh when bill realized who was in his driveway...and of course you make an idiot out of yourself when someone you like is right there...
Author's Response: i know i do!
Date: 12/08/11 12:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Dorky Bill is adorable!
Author's Response: ain't he?
Date: 12/07/11 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
*roflmao* Omg that was beautiful! Hilariously beautiful. I love how Bill was gonna be all lazy and slouchy and comfy cz he thought it was gonna be some old garage band has been teaching him, and then it was sexy beast Tom, and he had to run around like a chicken with his head cut off to get all sexified before Tom saw him all 'slobby'.
Bill acting like a teenaged girl tickles me sometimes, when its not too overdone, which you didn't do, so congrats on that! Its a very fine line between acceptably girly, and over the top, and you treaded that line verry carefully.
So...umm...why shouldn't you lean a guitar against a wall/couch and only on a guitar stand? I think I would've been impressed with myself to just learn how to properly tune the guitar in the first session, so Bill is doing super awesome to know three chords already!
I loved Tom too. It qarmed my heart that he remembered Bill. ^_^
Looking forward to more! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: i'm so glad you said that about bill being girly. i often worry i'm overdoing it, so i'm glad i'm not with this one. he's still a man dammit! lol and i don't really know that there's anything wrong with leaning a guitar against a wall, but it just sounded like something tom might say, being all serious about guitars and stuff. so yeah, total bullshit on my part probably. but it sounded good! lol
Date: 12/07/11 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving Tom in here! He's such a cool vibe.
Looking forward to what's next!
Author's Response: cool tomi is cool!
Date: 12/07/11 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
...I can't remember if I asked this before or not, but what kind of work do you do? It's OK if you'd rather not answer. I'm just curious since you mention it quite frequently in your chapter end notes!
Bill's...so much like me T_T. Awkward beyond belief when he likes someone. I just hope he'll have more luck than I've ever had. I think it may be a sign that Tom remembers him? *sigh* I had more that I wanted to say but my brain thinks its bedtime. So goodnight and have a lovely day at work whenever you go again - I hope it's just as easy as the easy day you've referred to here!
Author's Response: i'm a deputy clerk at the traffic/criminal court near where i live. some days are good, others...suck big time! rnyeah, i think bill's luck will improve just a tad. thanks for reading! and good night!
Date: 12/07/11 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is absolutely my new favorite fic on here :)
Author's Response: *blushes* oh stop!
Author's Response: *blushes* oh stop!