Date: 04/20/23 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 10/09/13 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh no, Bill you should have told him! :O Oooh, but I did enjoy the sex scene! ^^
Date: 10/09/13 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Daaaaaamn, that was hot! I do feel sorry for Tom though :C He must be so confused!
Date: 10/09/13 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sure, you're not gay at all, Tom ;) ;)
Date: 10/09/13 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is gonna be interesting!^^
Date: 03/08/13 02:14 am Title: Chapter 20
this was a really good story!!
is there a sequel to this???
Date: 04/18/12 06:02 am Title: Chapter 15
It makes me want to scream. Why is Andreas now living in the same city as Bill? I don't get it, I don't get why Andreas has to be in the picture at all. I am just finding him to be really annoying.
Date: 04/18/12 05:54 am Title: Chapter 10
While I like this story, I have come to realize, actually I have known for a while that this story was in serious need of a beta. You have so many grammar and spelling mistakes which are a pain in the rear end. But this is still a good story.
Date: 04/18/12 05:40 am Title: Chapter 5
Tom's a closet case. If I had a guy make out with me then take off like that, I'd probably be pissed, surprised that Bill isn't.
Date: 04/18/12 05:20 am Title: Chapter 3
So, everyone keeps saying Tom's not gay but yet he kisses Bill. I think he's confused.
Date: 08/01/11 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
I don't understand why Tom and Bill loathe their parents so much. I have read this far and can't find any reason for them to act like this. Sure Bill's parents didn't tell him that he was adopted but why should they? They could want to wait until he was 18 or something like that. And Tom was getting along with his mother pretty well at the beginning of this story. What caused such drastic change in his behaviour? Why Bill, once normal, turned into such spoiled, disrespectful brat? Adopted or not, he is still a child of his parents, nothing should change for him. It could be a shock at first but he should be sure that his parents loved him. I dislike him and Tom for being so thoughtless toward anyone else except each other.
Date: 02/23/11 07:09 am Title: Chapter 20
Loved your story. Made me cry in parts though for some reason. I just watched the Caught On Camera DVD and it helped me visualize your story alot more.
Date: 11/19/10 10:54 am Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for a great story. What will happen to Riley? She doesn't really belong with Tom's family. Will she pop up in the sequel? Guess I'll find out.
Date: 11/19/10 10:24 am Title: Chapter 19
OMG! Can't believe you wrote this @ school. Awesome! As soon as I finish reading this one I'll be soaking up the sequel.
Date: 11/17/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
Just read this chapter over a second time because it is so,so GOOD! I was looking forward to reading it again all morning. Very satisfying!
Date: 11/17/10 07:01 am Title: Chapter 7
God this is incredible!
Date: 11/17/10 06:30 am Title: Chapter 6
Oooooh, I think I'm going to explode! Must read on!