Date: 03/11/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
this is amazing keep it up :D
Date: 03/11/08 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
*0* this is SO great!!! I'm in love with this!
Date: 03/11/08 11:08 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG Tom is so mean :O!!!
Date: 03/11/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter 9
no ,i want them to be together again
i hope tom won't be a bitch for a long time
update asap
Date: 03/11/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 9
Ag shame. Tom don't be such a craphole.
Love your brother!
Love makes the world go round.
Mehr Bitte!
Peace!
Date: 03/11/08 08:28 am Title: Chapter 9
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh °-° well... Tom's over reacting I think, but this was fine :) guuuuh post soon!! :D
Date: 03/11/08 08:19 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh God ! Love it !:o More more more ;D
Date: 03/11/08 01:18 am Title: Chapter 9
the queen of cliffhangers you are guh now how am I supposed to survive untill the next chapter huh ???
oh and the scene with the girls I loved that you didn't make Bill all crazy, but rather a little...calculating *grinns*
totally awsome story one of my favourites :)
love lucy
Date: 03/10/08 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow! You updated soon! Oh no, what's going to happen to them now?! Tom will forgive him...right?
Update soon again! :)
Date: 03/10/08 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
ILU.
This story is love!
Tomi's reaction made me sad, though.
And I really disliked the stupid whores. D:
Good chapter, though! :D
Date: 03/10/08 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
*Sighs* Tom is so thickheaded lol
omg come on TOM WTF? this is sooo good, omg don't stop.
Your gonna make me comment like every chapter now
Date: 03/10/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
KLIING MEEEEEEEE!!!!! sooo cruel!!! omg....poor bill...tom is mean for saying tis sick.. gawd he is destrying bill...but what shall happen at the house?!?!?! ohh the suspense is intense!!! please update soon!!!!
Date: 03/10/08 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ohhhh my.... I love it! Absolutely love it!
And I can't wait for the next chapter.
My only real comment... is their last names. XDD Those are just too funny.
Unless there are people really with those last names.
Date: 03/10/08 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aww, I feel so bad for Bill. And Tom. Mostly Tom I think...I hope everything works out for them.
Date: 03/10/08 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
Gah!!!! You need to write MORE! Like now, woman! OMG.
Tom? Who cares if you and Bill are brothers from the same mother? You know you want to throw him down and repeatedly have mad hot monkey sex with him! I want to repeatedly have mad hot monkey sex with him, so I know you do too!
*bites nails*
And Sheila and Felicia need to get lost. Tom is taken even if he's going to insist on being stubborn about it. Ugh. Men. Idiots.
Did you write the next chapter yet? :D
Author's Response: Hahah... no. It's not written yet. I wrote this one at school. I'll try to write it soon though.
Date: 03/10/08 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
God damn it, Tom just stop actin' like a fool... I hope they will find ways 2 each other... this is so adorable & sad story
Date: 03/10/08 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
IIh.. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.. Hehe.. This story is greeeeat :D I really like the twin thing at the bar (those girls.. :P)
Date: 03/10/08 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
dats was amazing lol nein nein i h8 cliffhangers lol nnnnooooooo
Date: 03/10/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
Jeez, I love this story. Can't wait for chapter ten...which is while I'm be sleeping here today :3 *pulls up a bed* +10