Date: 12/17/11 05:15 pm Title: I love you, I hate you
well
you play this guy that drank some stuff that made him loose his memory and you wake up in this castle and have to find clues about who you are and find this guy that is killing people and its really creepy
Author's Response:
You're right scary and creepy
Date: 12/17/11 03:40 pm Title: Counseling
oops sry Mark Mark is quite an ass.
I am so pleased that Bill is getting professional help. I am starting to wonder why Sarah hasn't brought up the Bushido convo that happened the day of the wrech yet though. I'm sure it'll come up eventually.
Wonderful chapter, can't wait for more! *huggles* Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I don't see the conversation as very important. I mean I suppose I could bring up but I don't really see a point. Maybe that will be his recovery.
Date: 12/17/11 07:10 am Title: Counseling
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it.
Date: 12/17/11 02:53 am Title: Counseling
i feel really bad for Bill
I am actually playing a game now called Amnesia, its really really good...and spooky.
Author's Response:
I feel bad for Bill too. Amnesia sounds very interesting. You'll have to tell me more about it.
Date: 12/14/11 06:31 pm Title: First Date
it's a relief that he at least is sticking to his guns about bushido...and having tom there to help him through isn't such a bad thing...
Author's Response:
Yeah I know. I'm glad he is sticking to his guns too. Thanks for the review.
Date: 12/14/11 05:19 pm Title: First Date
Tom's so sweet, and so patient with Bill, and I hope Bill and Tom will be really happy like before soon, but I don't think that will happen because you said that there is more drama coming in the next few chapter, but I love this story
Author's Response:
I am glad you like this and I would love to write Bill and Tom happy but we need to go through the drama first. I am glad you like this story. Thanks for the review.
Date: 12/14/11 05:58 am Title: First Date
nice chapter!
i would like to see less Bushido in this story!
an more of tom an bill!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Right now Bushido is a literary device so unfortunately we will be seeing more of him and his twisted ways. I am not sure how to write Bill and Tom when one half of the couple has lost all memory of the other half but I am working on redeveloping that relationship. I am glad you like it.
Date: 12/14/11 01:31 am Title: First Date
Oh god, more dramatic than an existential crisis of who he is? Lol. Can't wait.
Wonderful chapter. I am definately looking forward to a bit of Michael and seeing how his dynamic with Sarah works.
Can't wait for Thursday! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
You'd be surprised by what I can pull out of my hat of tricks. It's Mark and Sarah but you were close and I will definitely show some of them. Thanks.
Date: 12/10/11 10:06 am Title: Understanding is the Fastest Way to Win Someone's Heart
i love how tom's there for him no matter what...that's gotta count for something...and i hope bill realizes that...
Author's Response:
Me too and Tom is so sweet in this story. Thanks for the review.
Date: 12/09/11 11:58 pm Title: Understanding is the Fastest Way to Win Someone's Heart
yay a nice long chapter :D I love how you've portrayed Bill's sentiments
Author's Response:
I didn't think it was that long but I am glad you liked it. By Bill's sentiments did you mean his memories in his journal? I thought it was a very crafty idea and a bit of a cliche but not so much that it was boring and overused. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 12/09/11 11:13 pm Title: Understanding is the Fastest Way to Win Someone's Heart
please update soon
poor Tom..and Bill
Author's Response:
Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it. I will update ASAP but computer problems might interfere. I know poor Bill and Tom unable to reach each other its absolutely heartbreaking.
Date: 12/07/11 12:03 am Title: Back to Normal
i would not handle it half as well as bill...he's a far stronger person than i...and i really hope he stays away from bushido...
Author's Response:
Me either. I cried when I lost my memory. I hope he stays away from Bushido too.
Date: 12/06/11 07:10 pm Title: Back to Normal
gah ok...this is...weird
but i like it
cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks...I think. I am glad you like it.
Date: 12/06/11 03:10 pm Title: Back to Normal
Amazing chapter, can not wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/06/11 03:37 am Title: Back to Normal
this is soo sweet, i just love it
Author's Response:
Thanks I am glad you love it.
Date: 12/06/11 03:25 am Title: Back to Normal
nice chapter's!
i feel bad for bill an tom!
i wont bill to stay together with tom!
i do not like bushido at all!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh god I know so horrible right. I want them to stay together too. I don't Bu mush either. I enjoy writing the chapters so I'll get it done soon. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 12/06/11 01:00 am Title: Back to Normal
Wonderful chapter! I am so glad Bill realized his mistake before it was too late (hopefully, i still think Bu might try something)I think its great the Bill kept a journal, I'vealways thought it was cool, but I never could keep one myself, so it'll be nice to see more of that. I think I might like to see some more of Mark too, just to vsee whats going on there. Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to see more! *huggles*
Author's Response:
Me too I would have hated to see him hurt. I don't think Bu's role is over yet either. I think it's great that Bill keeps a journal too. I will try to see if I can up Mark's role in this. Thanks for the wonderful review and for the cuddles.
Date: 12/05/11 12:46 am Title: I Can't Remember
This is really kind of amazing so far. Bill is taking to Tom really well. Iwas worried he would run off back to Bushido ASAP. Now I'm more worried about Bushido finding out, and convincing Bill that this crazy person is lying to him, and Sarah is going alon with it 'because she never liked him' or some other BS.
You made a few consistancy errors though. You said in the first chapter that Bill sed to drink black coffee, Bushido got him hooked on coffee w/ cream and sugar. Bill mentioned that the girl at starbucks had screwed up his coffee after making it the same way for five years, but then in this chapter, where his meory had regressed 2 years, he didn't like the creamed and sugared coffee, he wanted it black. Sorry, I know its a bit nit picky, but I figured I would point it out. Also, along that same path, I would think Bill would stll know what he liked to drink, consistant with time period or not. I'v heard people know they like blueberries, or remember their favorite color, so I would think they would remember how they take their coffee...you know?
Anyway, totally enjoying this so far. Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response:
I don't mind you nit picking my story it means you paid attention. I probably should have clarified Bushido turned him onto it but only after he left him. I have to but I just want to highlight the differences in Bill's life now rather then two years ago. I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you will continue reading.
Date: 12/04/11 11:15 pm Title: I Can't Remember
it has to be hard when the love of your life can't remember anything...but it's a great idea to start on a date...hopefully it'll help...
Author's Response:
Yeah I know. I love it.
Date: 12/04/11 11:01 pm Title: I love you, I hate you
funny i have it in my sent mail, Ill resend
Author's Response:
It came through. Thanks.