Date: 12/05/11 01:14 am Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
I love Toms protectiveness towards Bill. It's so sweet. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad you like it :) I'll post more soon.
Date: 12/05/11 12:02 am Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
love it. mehr bitte
Author's Response: Danke! You'll get more quite soon. :D
Date: 12/05/11 12:00 am Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
Hmmmm *strokes chin musingly* Veeeery intersting. After seeing this second chaoter, I am starting to think Bill argues with himself a bit more than normal
I'm wondering who Bill lost, and in what manner, for him to not want to get close to anyone again. What does he ned to forgive himself for? Because despite what his mind says, te fact that his mind brought it yup at all says he hasn't in fact forgiven himself.
Wunderbar Kapitel. I am anxious to see more! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: This is a very interesting review! You're thinking exactly the way I wanted people to. It does seem like Bill dissagrees with himself alot, doesn't it? ;) rnrnOoh, you are getting quite close with that now! You'll find out all in due time :3 rnrnThank you, I'll give you more soon! And keep up the awesome reviews! :)
Date: 12/04/11 09:48 pm Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
Now, I'm thinking that Bill would just stay with Tom, he isn't gonna think of leaving. Which I would have thought, would have been Bill's first thought. Bill really is a lost teenager, he gaved no thoughts to what he would do once he lefted his father. If Tom wasn't there, what would he have done? Yeah, sorry XD, I'm thinking to much. Anyway, will be interesting to see how this story unfolds.
Author's Response: Teehee, it's okay, I love to know everyone's thoughts :) Bill really hasn't planned things out, has he? I think he was just desperate to get away first. It's lucky that Tom found him, but what will happen next? :3 Thanks for sharing your opinion with me, I shall try and update very soon :)
Date: 12/02/11 08:48 pm Title: I'm running, again.
oh me like c:
update soon?~
xx
Author's Response: Thank you :3 I'll try and post more today :)
Date: 12/02/11 12:21 pm Title: I'm running, again.
WOWZAA! i love how tom is so caring and sweet and bills all, Troubled , but i can FINALY SLEEP NOW lol, now they've met! yey shmiley :) thankyou
Author's Response: Teehee, no, thank YOU! I do love your reviews :) Bill is definitely one troubled boy. *shakes head* Hopefully Tom can help him with that. I'm glad you can sleep! Sleep is a wonderful thing :3 thanks once again for being awesome!
Date: 12/02/11 03:19 am Title: I'm running, again.
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll post more soon. :D
Date: 12/02/11 01:51 am Title: I'm running, again.
I think- this is pretty good so far. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this is going to go.
So far...Bill is kinda seeming like a stupid over dramatic teenager. I'm really hoping we will find out that there is a deeper underlying issue to his running away, other than mommy (who he still sees regularly) left, and daddy drinks too much and yells a bit. Cuz thats pretty much all we'v seen so far. NO physical/emotional abuse or anything. Apparently self imposed exile at school...yea...you know what I mean? The whole arguing with his concious is fairly nomal. I do that myself all the time, and I'm not considered crazy. But we are just in the very beginning nad haven't seen much of it yet...
I am looking forward to seeing more. Keep up the lovely work! Update soon bitte??
Author's Response: First of all, thank you for your amazing review! I'm glad you like it so far, and I hope you'll like the rest of it too :) rnrnThere is definitely more to Bill; you'll find out soon. But yes, you're right about all of most of those other things :) rnrnSo, I hope you'll like the way things go in the following chapters! Thank you so much, I will try and update as soon as I can, which will probably be tomorrow or Sunday. :D
Date: 12/01/11 11:48 pm Title: I'm running, again.
I like it! It's really good and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you like it, I'll be updating soon. :)
Date: 12/01/11 08:13 pm Title: I'm running, again.
I love Tom! He is so kind. It was a good thing Tom found Bill before anything bad could happen to him.
This was another great chapter and I will be (im)patiently awaiting the next. :)
Author's Response: For some reason, I always end up making Tom the nice, kind guy xD Bill should be very thankful that it was Tom who found him, and not some random old pervy guy or a REAL gangster, teehee. Thank you! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long :)
Date: 12/01/11 07:58 pm Title: I'm running, again.
I don't see the harm of telling anyone your first name. ^^ Since, if people describe what you look like, if their looking for you even more practicable.
“I don’t mean to sound creepy or anything, but...if you want, you can come and crash at my house for the night,”
Yeah, if a guy said that to me, no matter how kind or non-dangerous he looks, will still be creepy to me xD
Anyway I like it!
Author's Response: You have a point there. I guess Bill's just being a very paranoid person xD Ahah, I've realised how creepy Tom may appear in this chapter, but I swear he's not xD And I think Bill just doesn't really care, as long as he's got somewhere comfy to sleep. Thanks, I'm glad you like it! More coming soon. :D
Date: 12/01/11 07:45 pm Title: I'm running, again.
aww i liked it. Tom is nice and took Bill in, I like that! Haha, its really good so far and i cant wait for the next update! :3
Author's Response: Hehe thank you! Yes, Tom is very kind for taking Bill in! It's good that you didn't think he was creepy like most people did xD He's just a very caring person :) Thanks, I'll update soon! ^_^
Date: 12/01/11 06:19 pm Title: I'm running, again.
I love this chapter =) I can hardly wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update soon, I promise. :3
Date: 12/01/11 05:21 pm Title: I'm running, again.
For the record, going home with a stranger is damn dangerous XDD But it's Tom, so....
Author's Response: Lol, I know XD But I guess Bill doesn't really care, and we can make an exception for Tom :P I don't think he's that dangerous :3 And anyways, I think taking home random pretty boys from the street isn't that safe either, so I guess they're even XD
Date: 12/01/11 02:21 am Title: On top of the roof, the air is so cold and so calm...
this sounds like a good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll update soon :)
Date: 12/01/11 12:38 am Title: On top of the roof, the air is so cold and so calm...
This is good. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll post more soon :)
Date: 11/30/11 07:39 pm Title: On top of the roof, the air is so cold and so calm...
Great start sweetie. I don't usually start to read a story until it's finished but I love your writing so I think I'll take a chance.
I really like the start of this story and especially feel for Bill. How old is he? 16? Just curious. I really hope he can find a bit of happiness but I guess that won't happen anytime soon. Looking forward to chapter 2. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for making an exception for me! :) Bill's 15 in this one, and I'm sure he will find happiness in the end, but it's going to be a bumpy ride getting there! I'll probably post the next chapter today or tomorrow :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/30/11 06:37 pm Title: On top of the roof, the air is so cold and so calm...
i like it so far. mehr bitte
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll post more very soon :D
Date: 11/30/11 05:17 pm Title: On top of the roof, the air is so cold and so calm...
Great start!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/30/11 04:15 pm Title: On top of the roof, the air is so cold and so calm...
Ooh its really good so far, but it would be easier on the eyes if you spaced out the paragraphs more instead of making them so long, ya know? :3 Loved it by the way, i cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks , I was thinking that they were a bit long, hehe. I'll try and fix that and I'll make sure the next chapter has smaller paragraphs :3 I'm glad you liked it! More coming soon :)