Date: 12/14/11 03:43 am Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
the internal battles and all remind me a lot of my first story (not that I've written many) which I am still in the process of finishing...but anywho, Bill's circumstances and mental state seems to be similar to mine :)
Author's Response: Oh hi! I've actually been meaning to read your story for a while now, but I never got round to it! :P I think I'll definitely read it now. I wonder if the reason behind Bill's angst in your story is similar to mine *thoughtful face* Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/14/11 01:52 am Title: A hurricane, from your tongue
So, is it just more or does it look like Tom is squeezing Bills arm awfully hard? Every time I see thst clip I think that, and wonder if I'm crazy. But either way,the gif really fits with the chapter.
Its a great chapter, just tantalizing little bits of info, and worried Tom. Loved it. Perfect. Can't wait for more! *huggles*
Author's Response: He does look like he's holding Bill's arm a bit too tightly doesn't it? O_o Lol. I did think it summed up Bill in this chapter :PrnrnI'm so happy you liked the chapter! I was worried that it would seem to rushed or not make any sense. But now you've made me feel better about it :3 The next chapter will contain alot of Angsty!Bill and more worried Tom. *huggles you back* Love you!
Date: 12/12/11 02:40 am Title: Somewhere out there, you've lost yourself in your pain...
Tom, tell it to Bill, he likes you too, I don't know how he will take it if you tell but yeah :) I love this story
Author's Response: Teehee, he'll tell him when the time comes ^^ Thank you! :)
Date: 12/11/11 04:05 pm Title: Somewhere out there, you've lost yourself in your pain...
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Date: 12/11/11 02:11 pm Title: Somewhere out there, you've lost yourself in your pain...
I just can't stop reading your posts...need....more....:D
Author's Response: You just made me smile so big :D I'll try and give you more as soon as I can!
Date: 12/11/11 07:29 am Title: Somewhere out there, you've lost yourself in your pain...
Woah woah woah... okay, so first of all the GIF at the end!! lol there on to us *shifty eyes* So they both kind of, love eachother then? i think its cute, especialy when they were sleeping at Bill woke first and Tom next, and they both kind of thought the same thing! awwwwwww, and Bill wears more make up when he's nervous...? thats really cute, he probably wore that much that if you poked his face, it would leave a dent! :) oh god that would be funny.. anyway! thankyou for a new chapter... i'm going to end this review now cause The GIF of Bill and Tom is scaring me... i think there going to attack me and take me to there leader... although i wouldn't mind ;) Byee!! *Hearts*
Author's Response: Ahah omg you make me laugh :') The gif is almighty! XD You gotta love it. Hm, I guess you could say that...;) I'm glad you thought it was cute :3 They do think of similar things, don't they? Lol yes, the more nervous Bill gets, the more OCD he is about his face XD Ahah, I love your train of thought, you should try poking Bil just to test that XD And thank YOU for the new review! :D Haha, I don't think I would mind being taken hostage by the twins XD Love you! *more hearts*
Date: 12/11/11 03:08 am Title: Somewhere out there, you've lost yourself in your pain...
Okay, so I love you, and this story, but I'm not sure about the believability of nail marks in your neck scarring, when they didn't bleed enough to need stiches, or other neosporin or something. I would think something minor enough to dab with a tissue, wouldn't scar especially with at heavily arteried as the neck s...you know what I mean?
But, that stpry was horrible and makes me want to kill Jorg.
It was great how Tom came out to Bill, and hes right, a good parent would just want their kid to be happy and healthy.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Can't wait for more!..oh and it wasn't a horrible wait. Perfectly acceptable. In fact, more than acceptable, stll quite quick.
ps love the gif
Author's Response: Wow, I love you too! First off, that was exactly the thing I was worried about in this chapter! I wrote it all out and then I was like 'wait...can nail marks even leave a scar?' So yeah, thanks for being observant and pointing that out. I just needed a way to get Bill to talk about his past, and for some reason that was the first thing that came into my head. Ah, well.
Anyways, I'm glad you still liked it! And oh, thank you, it always seems like a longer wait to me than it really is. It's just whenever I go out of my updating pattern, I get paranoid and think 'omg I'm making them wait so long!' XD So yeah. And the next chapter should be quite an important one...*hinthint*
thanks, that gif is just the cutest, isn't it? :3
Date: 12/11/11 12:22 am Title: Somewhere out there, you've lost yourself in your pain...
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awesome.
yum.
want moar :3
lol i love that gif <3
it's in my "favourite TH gif" folder xD
anywayyy, update again soon!
xx
Author's Response: Heheh thank you! I'll give you moar soon :3 Lol I know right? I have so many gifs of them XD I just felt like sharing that one with you because it's so adorable XD I'll try not to keep you waiting for long! *whispers* the next chapter is gonna be an important one ;) Thanks for the awesome review! :D
Date: 12/07/11 12:51 pm Title: The screams in my mind, I keep them a secret
YAAY! Bill finaly told Tom he's a runaway! i bet he feels better now its off his chest though:) Poor Billa having nightmares! Gosh i hate them..: I like how tom understood that Bill ran away for a good reason and he wasn't going to send him back, if he did send Bill back, i may cry just a little bit, i also hope Bills dad dosn't find him, but if he does i hope bill shoots him! ahahahaha! that would be funny in its own way! anyway thanks for the update *Hearts* A new chapter is a new smile on my face:) Danke:)
Author's Response: Ahaha your reviews make me laugh XD Yeah, Bill would be totally badass and randomly shoot his dad XD Aaanwyays, yus Bill finally told Tom! He may not have been planning to but he did :P Arg, nightmares are terrible aren't they :S I'm lucky I haven't had one that bad since I was little. And Tomi is a very understanding person *nods wisely*. You'll find out why soon ;) I don't think I could bear to send Billa back to his jerk of a dad! Thank you for another awesome review! *even bigger hearts* Aw, every review from you = an even bigger smile on my face :3
Date: 12/07/11 10:46 am Title: The screams in my mind, I keep them a secret
Aww yay for Tom not sending Bill back to his dad :D It wasn't short honestly, but it was good, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yay for Bill indeed :) Aw, thank you! The next chapter should be longer, though. I'll try and write it up fast for you :D
Date: 12/07/11 02:59 am Title: The screams in my mind, I keep them a secret
sweet chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks again ^_^ I'll try not to keep you waiting!
Date: 12/07/11 02:19 am Title: The screams in my mind, I keep them a secret
Yea, it was short...but for once, I didn't really think it needed to be any longer. It got what it ws upposed to accomplish, accomplished. It was wonderfully detailed, with good imagery. And it didn't leave me feeling disjointed and confused because it moved toofast.
Wonderful work. I love me some vulnerable!Bill and protective!Tom. I can't wait to see more! Keep up the spifftasmic work!
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me! I was worried that it would seem too rushed, but now that you've said that, I feel much better about it. :) I'm glad you liked the detail! I just had a really clear image of the scene in my mind and I wanted to try and share it with you :) rnrnAw, you always have the best compliments! Thank you so much ^^ We'll be seeing more of them soon enough ;) I'll try and get the next chapter up in a day or so!
Date: 12/07/11 12:05 am Title: The screams in my mind, I keep them a secret
cada capitulo q leo me encanta mās :D
Author's Response: Muchas gracias! :) Me alegra que te guste ^ ^
Date: 12/06/11 11:43 pm Title: The screams in my mind, I keep them a secret
aww that was cute :3
i liked this chapter!
again, I can't wait for more~!
xx
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ hehe. I'll try and post more before long :)
Date: 12/05/11 12:54 pm Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
Seems like Bill is very very slowly letting his guard down around Tom. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you can see that. It does seem that way, doesn't it? More coming soon :)
Date: 12/05/11 12:16 pm Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
i love this story! post a next chapter? :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll post more very soon :3
Date: 12/05/11 12:05 pm Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
I'm actually loving this story so far :) It's so sweet the way Tom's protecting him ^.^
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D Tom's getting quite protective over Bill, isn't he :3 I'll update soon, I promise! :)
Date: 12/05/11 04:10 am Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank youu, the next chapter will be up soon :)
Date: 12/05/11 02:30 am Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
yay an update! c:
lovely chapter ~
can't wait for more!
xx
Author's Response: Yay a review! :3 Thank you very much, more coming soon :)
Date: 12/05/11 01:56 am Title: And the snakes, they are slithering in
I like how there bonding now, and you can deffinatley see the attraction from both sides! when Tom said he felt protective over Bill i was like, N'awwww!! cutneesss! and i mean, telling Tom his name couldn't be that bad? as long as he dosn't say his last name he should be fine right? Or maybe they put a picture out and its like DUNN DUNN DUNN, woah i dunno anyway **Hearts!** PS, I'm glad i could make you smile! :)
Author's Response: Hey there! Aw, I'm glad you're liking it :) Tom's becoming a very protective person now ;) Haha, no, I don't think Bill telling Tom his name was a big deal, he just made it one. Bill's just a paranoid person like that. *even more hearts for you!* Aw, you make me smile every time you leave a review! I do treasure them :3 I'll give you some more fic soon!