Date: 12/18/11 06:22 pm Title: 52 Card Pick-Up
This was a cool story. That had to feel crazy for Bill to suddenly be in a different time and then to find out everyone he knew was dead. :( Crazy for Tom too to suddenly get a real person when he though he was getting a doll. Even with the little tiffs between them, they're so good together!
Author's Response: Yeah, there had to be quite a lot of "wtf"ness going through their heads, especially at the beginning. *nods* They ARE really good together, aren't they? Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 12/17/11 08:23 pm Title: 52 Card Pick-Up
Oh my goodness! Okay, where to start, where to start... Hmm... Well, normally I don't read anything twincest. I really don't. But this story really did caught my eye, and I thought that I should give it a try. I was hooked by the end of the first chapter!
Wow. This story is so good, so original. I really loved and enjoyed reading all 8 chapters of this story. I think that you did a great job of writing, too. I would've commented on the other chapters too, but I was too caught up too stop and take a time to review. So, when I finished reading, I thought I'd leave you a huge review lol :D
I really loved the general idea of this story of how Bill's from the past, the box related to him, etc, etc.
When I came to the last chapter, I was horrified :P I thought that this was too short, but after reading the end notes, I felt really relieved. Now I can't wait to read the "sequels" that you've mentioned about. I hope you post them soon enough. I really would love to read the rest of them.
Author's Response: Ack, I just realized never replied back, which is strange because your review made me grin for 15 straight minutes, no lie! I will warn you (if you haven't already seen it) that the first chapter of the sequel stuff is pretty heavy with the twc. The second chapter is lighter on that note. I'm so glad you took a chance on reading something you wouldn't normally, and even more glad that you liked my fic! Thanks so much!! :D
Date: 12/15/11 06:31 am Title: 52 Card Pick-Up
As much as I would love to love the ending (after all that hype and expectant drooling), I found it a little underwhelming. Not your fault though, my imagination became a live doll.
A one-shot is simply not enough! This deserves an epic SEQUEL!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I appreciate honest opinions about how I'm writing. What do you think I could've done to make it amazing rather than underwhelming? What sort of things were you expecting so maybe I can improve my next one? Admittedly I wrote the ending at 3am, so maybe I wasn't as clear about the goings on as I should've been. I'm hoping the next bit clears up some stuff. :) Thanks for reading! :Drn
Date: 12/15/11 03:41 am Title: 52 Card Pick-Up
this was such a good story!
i am sad that it is over!
so are u makeing a sequel to this??
if so this then i cant wait!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's not a full sequel, since there's not too many other places I can think to take it now that Bill's not a doll anymore, but it's definitely a continuation of this storyline. Hope you enjoy! :)
Date: 12/15/11 01:18 am Title: 52 Card Pick-Up
*is dead*
For srs. This is one of my favorite things!
Author's Response: Don't die too soon on me, you haven't seen what I've got in store. ;)
Date: 12/14/11 11:40 pm Title: 52 Card Pick-Up
ha, totally got it. almost. :) awesome, i'd love to see how Tom's friends react to the real Bill!
Author's Response: I'll let you in on a secret- the other part of your prediction comes in the "bonus"bit. ;) Thanks for your reviews and thanks for reading! :D
Date: 12/14/11 11:15 pm Title: 52 Card Pick-Up
Huh. A little anticlimactic. A lot of questions left unanswered. A lot of possibilities to explore!
Author's Response: You think so? What sort of questions were you hoping would be answered? Maybe I can work some of those into the "bonus content". Some of the gaps may already be filled in with that. rnMaybe writing the ending at 3am wasn't such a good idea. XD Stuff happens, but maybe it's not described well? I'd love to know what I need to do to make it better!
Date: 12/12/11 10:22 am Title: Playmates
I've taken a slight delay from the site for a little while and I returned and saw so many updates, I honestly think I died in excitement :D May I mention how wonderful amazing this story is! I honestly don't think I'll ever get enough off it. I'm upset it has to end soon but I'm going to look at your other stories before you're becoming one of my favourite authors. I'm so excited about the last chapter! You've done an absolutely amazing job with this you really have.
Author's Response: You really have no idea how much your review makes me smile. For real, it totally made my week! I'm just hoping the last chapter (not counting bonus stuff) doesn't disappoint too badly. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 12/12/11 07:52 am Title: Playmates
Um. Tom will open his Pandora box and any of the below might happen:
1) Bill remains human even in the presence of everyone else and BT live happily together for the rest of their human lives.
2) Bill and Tom turn into dolls and live happily ever after with intermittent awakenings. They die of old age about 20 million years later after being transported to the other end of the galaxy.
3) Bill turns into a real doll and Tom pines for him the rest of his life.
4) Tom turns into a doll while Bill regains his fully human form.
5) Nothing changes, everything remains status quo.
6) David "Genie" Jost appears.
7) Tom wakes up.
Author's Response: Nice theories! Since I know you've read the last chapter,yeah #4 almost/would've happened, but ultimately Bill saved him so I guess it was #1 that was right. :) Maybe I can play with some alternate endings,heh.
Date: 12/12/11 03:15 am Title: Playmates
Tom really must seem like a weirdo to the outside world. ......what if all of this is happening inside Tom's mind, and he really is crazy?
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm pretty sure Georg thinks Tom's nuts. Gustav at least seems to recognize that there's something else going on.XD
Date: 12/12/11 02:21 am Title: Playmates
i think bill's soul's in the box...and then he'll be alive and get a tattoo of that star...:)
Author's Response: *makes the 'I'm watching you' hand signal.* XD
Date: 12/12/11 01:49 am Title: Playmates
Well, since I already know about the last chapter, I will just tell you how much I love you. Even if we already had a lovefest this evening. ILY LIZ!
Date: 12/11/11 11:12 pm Title: Playmates
Poor Bill
Date: 12/11/11 11:08 pm Title: Hide and Seek
Only two more chapters?!? But this story is so good!
Author's Response: All good things must come to an end? Thanks though! :D
Date: 12/10/11 11:58 am Title: Hide and Seek
Neat! I'm kinda pleased that Bill is only alive around Tom, cuz then Tom can keep Bill all to himself. Even if it does make Tom appear a little crazy.....
Author's Response: Yeah, although it's my opinion that you have to be a little crazy to deal with Bill in the first place. ;) They do make a good pair though, don't they?
Date: 12/10/11 11:54 am Title: Make Believe
Bill's soul is in the box! It's the human part of him. Something happened so Bill's humanity was trapped in the box, huh! I wonder if I'm right.
Author's Response: Interesting theory! I won't say anything though, you'll just have to wait and see what happens. ;)
Date: 12/10/11 11:46 am Title: Snakes and Ladders
I love that Bill loves sliced bread. Man, it's so weird to think sliced bread wasn't always around. It's so convenient!
I find it highly amusing that Bill plays dress up. He may be human (I think) but he's for sure got some doll qualities at heart~ I wonder if Bill would consent to a tea party with me. He could dress up, and I'd serve sweets and peppermint tea... X)
Pfft, well duh, Tom. But having Tom be smart about connecting moaning Bill in a bathroom and porn on the tv would make this story less funny!
Author's Response: It's fascinating to look around and realize how many things we use in our daily lives that have only come about in the last century. Even a lot of the things they had back then weren't mass produced by machines like they are now, since they didn't have robots or the technology to do the work. So interesting!rnrnI'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! If you do ever end up at a tea party with Bill, please invite me! You just have no idea how much that would make my life, lol! I'll wear bunny ears if need be!rnrnAnd no, Tom doesn't always think before he does stuff, heh. If he did this story might not exist! ;)
Date: 12/07/11 10:56 pm Title: Make Believe
Haha xD Aw I was waiting for when the clothes arrive to see Tom's reaction :D Poor Bill, he can't go out to show everyone his new look. Luckily Tom is allowing Bill to keep some of his new stuff.
Author's Response: I don't think Tom was expecting nearly what Bill got. He'll look good for Tom if nothing else. I wonder where Bill's gonna put all that stuff...
Date: 12/05/11 04:10 pm Title: Snakes and Ladders
He was soooo jacking off, you dirty boy ;) watching porn like that, you 'ought to be ashamed of yourself.. tsk tsk LOL
Author's Response: I don't think they had porn like that back in the 1930s. It was good stuff! He had to do something about it. ;)
Date: 12/05/11 09:15 am Title: Snakes and Ladders
hahahah.. Liz i love it :) i just read all 4 chaps, and can't wait till you post the next ones ^^
See you on FB
Author's Response: Thanks! More are up. Hope you enjoy those too! ^_^