Date: 12/01/11 08:52 pm Title: I Was Fifteen
I never even expected it to be Tom. This was really quite wonderful and with an awesome ending. I love this. :)
Author's Response: Glad my life makes for good reading... thanks for reading!
Date: 12/01/11 12:26 am Title: I Was Fifteen
this is really deep. i hate to think that there are people out there willing enough to stab their best friends in the back, but sometimes its unavoidable, unfortunately. i hope things go well with you hunny. *hugs*
Author's Response: :) things are good with me, thanks. thank you for reading this.
Date: 11/30/11 10:53 pm Title: I Was Fifteen
Something similar happened to me. This girl and I were close friends, not as close as you apparently were with this person, but yeah, we shared a lot and hoped to still be in each other's life by when we hit our fifties or so. Then with college coming ahead of us, it all changed. We grew apart and it didn't hurt so much how she, basically, exchanged me for "better" friends, but the things she said to them about me. Mostly Lies.
Anyway, I liked it and especially liked this line:
"You taught me not only that people change and not always for the better, but that friends will eventually in one way or another, screw you over for something they think is better."
Good job. I, somehow, share the sentiment you poured in this one.
Author's Response: Well I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this. i was almost in tears while writing it last night. Thinking about what happened then added on top of my entirely shitty night was just bad. It makes me feel better to have written it. Maybe I won't have such...bad feelings towards it now. Maybe I will, maybe I won't. Who knows, but thank you for reading and reviewing it hun.
Date: 11/30/11 06:42 am Title: I Was Fifteen
s'cute :) i would have loved it if you could make it into a long story , like start when he's 15 and explane everything , i don't usually go for one shots, but this one drew mee in! so thakyouu
Author's Response: thanks for reading it! but no, this is staying as is. i dont want to go through that all over again. Once when i was fifteen was enough. I don't want the details "imortalized" in text like that.