Date: 12/07/11 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Two
And this keep being adorable, at the same time innocent, but it gives out hints of possible darker themes beneath the surface. Just keep up the good work!
Date: 12/07/11 05:59 pm Title: Chapter One
This was really good start, really good. Something very sweet and somehow dream like even. Not sapåpy, but tastes like life (with a twist). Definitely up to the next chapter!
Date: 12/06/11 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
I'm not so sure what I think about Tom.... He's nice and all, but kind of creepy. Can't wait to see where this goes :X
Date: 12/06/11 10:22 am Title: Chapter Two
I love this story! It has a lot of emotions in both characters. I like a story like that. Not just action, but also mixed with emotions. Really good. Please continue. :)
Date: 12/03/11 08:29 am Title: Chapter Two
nawwwwwwwww Bill is falling for Tomi soo hard.. sighzz the young heart, hmmmm but Tom is very smart and cautios about how he is around Bill and I like that, and LOL Gusti and Georg are worried sick about Bill its sweet :3 great chatper ^.^
Date: 12/02/11 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Two
This is very different, I like it!!!
Thanks for the new chapter!!!
Date: 12/02/11 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oooh interesting...in a good way. I can't wait to read more, this is good so far.
Date: 12/02/11 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Two
Aw, I feel sorry for Bill about his friends not liking Tom and Tom going out without him :( But they're really cute together, especially when Tom calls Bill 'sweetie' xD And it's so cute that Bill acutally memorised all the butterflies and gave them names! I'm sad that Rory died, now. But anyway, I do hope things get better for them, and I can't wait for more! :)
Date: 12/02/11 03:38 am Title: Chapter Two
this was a sweet chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 12/02/11 03:12 am Title: Chapter Two
this chapter....is so good. Bill here is so innocent and the way he and Tom are just drawn together is amazingly beautiful to read. it was like i was in the trance too. great job.
Date: 12/01/11 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Two
Tom is a little less creepy to me now, but I think it's because you told this chapter more form Bill's perspective; we didn't get to hear Tom's obsessive thoughts. But they're probably still there. I hope it everyone is ok, especially Bill. He is precious.
Date: 12/01/11 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Two
I seriously love this as well as Advent. Ur a wonderful writer with great ideas =) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12/01/11 07:37 pm Title: Chapter One
Awesome =) I'm on to the next!
Date: 12/01/11 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Two
I really identify with Bill's character in this, which just makes the whole thing so much more meaningful for me. He just seems so insecure and kinda lost...I truly love him as a character already!
Date: 11/30/11 05:07 pm Title: Chapter One
-applauds- Amazing job! I'm looking forward to see where you take this. It's clear Tom has problems- but there are many possibilities in front of you! Can't wait to see which path you take xoxo
Date: 11/30/11 04:37 pm Title: Chapter One
Strangely beautiful, and completely enthralling. I would like to see more please. :)
Date: 11/30/11 04:12 pm Title: Chapter One
Tom has a serious problem, he's kind of scary. ... (I know that's the idea you wanted to give us. Don't worry you made it perfectly) ;)
Date: 11/30/11 10:09 am Title: Chapter One
Seems nice!!
will for sure read the next chapter, looking forward to seeing where it goes!
Date: 11/30/11 09:38 am Title: Chapter One
One word: aawhhh! This is one of the cutest things I've read in a while and I loves it :3 The whole butterfly funeral thing was so adorable :) I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
Date: 11/30/11 09:24 am Title: Chapter One
hmmmm very intersting O.o I am wondering if this will turn out to be like those syco stories lol!! either way I am looking fowards to the next chapter ^.^