Date: 01/13/16 07:39 am Title: Rust on the Gears
I'm running outta words. Let me just say....You're GIFTED!(sO GIFTED that it almost seems unfair)*+*
Date: 06/21/12 10:13 pm Title: Rust on the Gears
..... holyy... omg.. ok this was marvolou... i think i spelled that wrong.. but ur word patteres and discriptions are lovley ! i would like to see more from you :)
Date: 02/19/12 12:21 am Title: Rust on the Gears
I read this and got the feeling something was emotionally or psychologically off about Bill. The language and imagery was amazing and poetic!
Date: 11/27/11 04:57 pm Title: Rust on the Gears
This was really beautiful. Even when you said that you diagnosed Bill only afterwards, I think you got it quite right, believable and true. First person POV is not exactly my favoreite, but I think it worked okay with this kind of fic, which focuses mostly on mental structures of the main character. Really beautiful... bittersweet even. :)
Date: 11/24/11 12:14 pm Title: Rust on the Gears
i love the flow of this piece. it's low, and steady, even if it's not always pleasant. it is written with a tinge of innocence, the way Bill describes the sun and the flowers. and Tom is such an ethereal light within himself. guiding Bill the way he does. this is just so....light. but not. you know?
Date: 11/23/11 10:55 pm Title: Rust on the Gears
*glassy eyes transfixed to poster*
sooooooo PRETTY!
oh and i like the story. i figured bill had some mental problem. but ur banner is really nice. i give who ever made it mad props.
*tee-hee* ^^~