Date: 12/30/11 05:52 pm Title: First Scars
I'll take emotional confrontation for 200 please. :)
Author's Response: Alright. You must wait one week for said confrontation. :) rnXD This review made me crack up! Thank you!
Date: 12/30/11 05:46 pm Title: First Scars
wonderful! great job again!
Author's Response: thanks so much! I hope you keep enjoying it!
Date: 12/30/11 05:19 pm Title: First Scars
*frowns gently, laying head against his back, nosing into the skin under the shirt, whispers* Hey... You going to be okay? *strokes along his sides with gentle fingers*
-to Tom-
*holds up sign*
You dumbfuck! You could've gotten laid! And now look, you're stuck hard and alone! Better get your right hand working!
Author's Response: Me: Hey! Be nice to Tom, damn it! Poor kid doesn't know what he's doing wrong!rnTom: Hey! I'm not a kid! And maybe you, as the author, should throw a guy a bone here!rnMe: Where's the fun in that?rnBill: Would you three shut up? I've got a massive head ache thanks to Tom and none of you are helping.rnTom: -looks sheepish-rnMe: -shrug- You'll be fine. Ish. Okay, maybe not.
Date: 12/28/11 06:16 pm Title: Welcome to DUP
i know already now that this story's gonna' turn in to a masterpiece! Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! It means a lot to hear that. :)
Date: 12/27/11 11:00 am Title: Bill's Soft Spot
wow, really good. i can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! I wonder what bill did, does it have anything to do with his brother? xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks! But you'll have to just wait and see :P
Date: 12/27/11 01:34 am Title: Bill's Soft Spot
i cant wait for more :P
Author's Response: im working on it :P
Date: 12/25/11 09:20 pm Title: Bill's Soft Spot
-scrambles up and catches Bill's arm, presses a quick, rough kiss to his lips- Alright. I'll see you next month. -whispers- Love you. -sighs and watches Prison!Bill being drug off-
Author's Response: -shakes head- Relax. You'll get to read as Tom sinks his claws into Billa. Besides, you'll get your one shot! In the meantime, I need him for other things. ;)
Date: 12/25/11 08:42 pm Title: Bill's Soft Spot
I don't think 'sweet' billa can lose his grip, mosttly because I still doubt 4weet' bill exists in this fic... big bad bill might be losing it though...
Wonderful chapter, Bill's pov was a nice addition to the story. I can't wait to see more, this was amazing. Keep up the great work and have a belated merry christmas
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I see your point. XD We will see how much of his grip Bill loses. However, a happy new year to you, dear reader. :D
Date: 12/25/11 08:11 pm Title: Bill's Soft Spot
-sighs heavily- Oh babe.... -ignores the irritated look a drops head on Bill's shoulder- So many emotions to figure out. -tips head, presses kiss to the underside of his chin- But you'll get it sorted, promise. And you never know- Tomi boy just might be something good for you. -beams sweetly-
Author's Response: -drags Prison!Bill out of his cell and drops him in front of reviewer before disappearing-rnrn-sigh-rnBabe, I thought I told you to stay out of the prison affairs? What I do down there has nothing to do with you or the world above. -wraps arm around shoulder and kisses top of head- Just make sure our daughter is taken care of, okay? I got the pictures you sent me. She's beautiful. -smiles softly- Just keep your nose out of the prison until you come to visit next month. I'll update you on everything then, alright?rnrn-author reappears, 'aw's, then tears Bill away to drop him back in his cell with Tomi-boy- Sorry, hun. Your time's up! :D
Date: 12/25/11 05:27 pm Title: Bill's Soft Spot
Awh, it's so great I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 12/18/11 09:08 am Title: Protection and Family
Awesome. Tom's sister is so nice. I'm still hoping to see Bills brother in one of the chapters :DD. That would be epic ;D. And i think that this little attachment for Bill will grow into something huge.. :DD. We'll see. So far it's really interesting. Can't wait for the new chapter : ).
Author's Response: Thank you! Um. You'll kinda see Bill's brother but he's not going to be coming for a visit. You'll see why. They kind of had a falling out. XD
Date: 12/18/11 06:14 am Title: Protection and Family
I just thought I'd let you know that this is already in my top 5 favorite fanfics of all time.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you enjoy it so much! I'm super proud of this fic so it makes me really happy to hear others enjoy it as much as I do. :)
Date: 12/18/11 04:13 am Title: Protection and Family
i enjoy this story more and more
Author's Response: Yay! I hope that continues
Date: 12/18/11 03:20 am Title: Protection and Family
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/18/11 03:09 am Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/18/11 02:55 am Title: Beyond Scared Straight
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/18/11 02:43 am Title: Welcome to DUP
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/17/11 04:59 pm Title: Protection and Family
People outside the situation always do.
This was an interesting chapter. NOt quite sure what I thought of it.
Your totally right, can't have a prison fic without a shower rape, well ecept #815, that ones doing pretty good without one, but its totally an exception to the rules.
Umm, so Tom is visiting his ister for three days and isn't going back to his cell for the duration? Weirdness, how often are they allowed a visit like this?
Totally looking forward to more, Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I LOVE #815! I think it's a fantastically written tale. But you're right, it's an exception due to the fact that Tom isn't a prisoner like he is here.rnrnOnce every three months the prisoners in for life are allowed one family visit where they stay with the family member for three days. The rooms are rigged with cameras and mics for practical reasons. But no, the prisoners do not go back to their rooms. rnrnI'm glad you enjoyed the story and I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)
Date: 12/17/11 02:30 pm Title: Protection and Family
omg please udate soon
Author's Response: I'm trying to keep it weekly
Date: 12/14/11 10:13 pm Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy
Fuck that was awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter! I really love prison stories but hardly anyone writes them!
Keep it up :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad that I can be your drug dealer in this matter. XD I hope you continue to enjoy it! (and I also love prison stories and I wanted to have my own since there are virtually none aside from one whose title I can't think of.)