Date: 02/13/12 12:51 am Title: The Scar System
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: You're welcome!
Date: 02/12/12 11:24 pm Title: The Scar System
Omg I was SO stoked to see an update!! Wonderful work! Scar system bit was enlightening, and damn you for teaasing us with the 'master' thing and then just skipping the fun stuff THAT could've involved. Can't wait to see more. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry. There will be more. ;) I'm a bit of a smut slut so there will definitely be more. :D I'm glad you're still loving the story and I'm thrilled to be back to work on it!
Date: 02/12/12 09:46 pm Title: The Scar System
I'm so sad that I reached the end of the updates. I read this in one go. I really love where you've gone with this so far...I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I was too impatient to wait until the whole thing was finished to post it all at once. But I'm glad you've enjoyed the story! The plan is for weekly updates. :)
Date: 02/12/12 04:10 pm Title: The Scar System
1st: Bill, why must you be so damn hot! 2nd: Yessss; Tom's been claimed!
3rd: BotTom, even hinted, is always hot as fuck.
4th: You are AWESOME.
5th: I believe my review is complete.
Author's Response: 1st: Isn't he? -drools-rn2nd: But it only gets better!rn3rd: As if Tom hasn't gotten it up the ass several times already. ;P And yet there's more to come!rn4th: I know! XDrn5th: I believe my response is complete. :)
Date: 01/16/12 05:19 am Title: Meetings and Lying
More plot makes me happy too. =)
Author's Response: Good to know. XD
Date: 01/12/12 02:27 pm Title: Meetings and Lying
-licks lips- Fuck, baby, you're hot when you're being a hardass. -smirks, pecks his cheek- I see Tomi boy has been behaved for you. Maybe you can let him a little? -strokes up and down his arm- Hmm?
Author's Response: >.> I worry about you sometimes... XD
Date: 01/11/12 03:56 pm Title: Welcome to DUP
I really hope u keep Bill as the dominate one. I love the story though. It's amazing !
Author's Response: Thanks! And Bill is just dominating.
Date: 01/09/12 12:03 am Title: Meetings and Lying
While I don't doubt them not having cameras in the shower, I don't believe they wouldn't have cameras right outside to monitor who went in and out.
Hmmm what is the actual definition of a serial killer anyway? When Bill said 'you know they never would've caught me' does that mean he ended up turning himself in?
How was this person murdered? What was the announcement he gave at dinner that night?
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see more! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: All things will come to light. Well, a few might just be left up to your imagination. Thanks for reading! I hope you continue to enjoy. :)
Date: 01/08/12 10:25 pm Title: Meetings and Lying
:)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 01/08/12 08:33 pm Title: Meetings and Lying
I didnt think I would like this story at first, but I didnt even give it a chance until today. WOw was I wrong I love it and cant wait for more Good work
Author's Response: Well then thanks for giving it a chance! :)
Date: 01/08/12 04:40 pm Title: Welcome to DUP
Wow this is just.. amazing! You're such a great writer and I can't wait for the next chapter!! Love it, truly do.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 01/04/12 04:31 pm Title: First Scars
Ooooh I'm so looking forward for the next chapter!
Your writing is very good tbh, couldn't stop reading your story.
Keep up the good work! X
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 12/31/11 09:18 pm Title: First Scars
Oooh, I love this story. I can't wait for more, keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I'm glad you've continued to enjoy it.
Date: 12/31/11 08:10 pm Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy
very interesting. I want to know what Bill was thinking as well.
Author's Response: Bill's thought process is indeed an intriguing one.
Date: 12/31/11 07:35 pm Title: Welcome to DUP
Very very interesting beginning to a story. I'm hooked.
Author's Response: I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 12/31/11 01:31 pm Title: First Scars
*in rehards to end note* Why choose between the two? Lol
But holy bejeezus this was intense. You were right, we needed it though.
I am kinda wondering if the warden sent him after Tom, kinda don't think so, but I'm not ruling the possibility out especially consoderingstalking off!Bill when he heard it.
I loved seeing caring!Bill, it totally had more behind it than Tom being his responsibility. And he had druggie 'taken care of' even if it wasn't said in so many words.
Nice that the Gs have been introduced, will they be significant reappearances? Wonder what they're in for too.
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work, and have a spiffy New Year!
Author's Response: Oh wow! :D I love thorough reviews! I like to see that the reader is thinking. In all honesty, the story didn't have the G's in it then suddenly they appeared out of no where and I'm thinking, "o.O Okay, I can work with this." So their reappearance is totally up to them as characters. Even though Tom is our main character, the story really is about Bill. I love stories that I want to write so I discover more about my own characters! I'm so pleased to hear that others are enjoying the journey as much as I am! Thanks so much for reading and have a fantastic new year!!
Date: 12/31/11 09:29 am Title: First Scars
oh oh dear!! I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 12/31/11 03:37 am Title: First Scars
omg
Author's Response: wtf? XD
Date: 12/30/11 07:14 pm Title: First Scars
the end is...wow. i'm jus thinking what happened with Bill when he is with Tom and his behavior is as he has twa faces
Author's Response: I intend to perplex and induce thought. I feel successful. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/30/11 06:22 pm Title: First Scars
Dammit. It's not kind to tease like that. >.
Author's Response: Yes, well, Tom said something stupid and must pay for it. :P