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Reviewer: AussieGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/11 10:05 pm Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy

oh I like where this is heading. possessive Bill is rather hot.

Author's Response: thank you. this is my favorite Bill right now.

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/11 07:30 am Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy

I LOVE IT GIRL

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/11 01:58 am Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy

Hmm. And so the plot thickens. Very wonderful chapter. I am incredibly curious about what happened to Bill 8yrs ago, and why he seems to have such a...connection with Tom. Can't wait to see more keep up the wonderful work!... also umm...maybe you could keep the term 'shutcall' to a minimum? It seems kinda akward, to me at least. Catch ya next chapter!

Author's Response: The term I adapted from another story that inspired me. It's just second nature at this point to use it. Sorry if it bugs you. Otherwise, I'm glad to hear you enjoy the story so much. And everything will be explained in time. :)

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 11:13 pm Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy

Correction- that's supposed to say "shit" not "shut" X'D

Author's Response: I was wondering if that was your typo or mine.. XD

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 11:10 pm Title: Breaking in Tomi-Boy

"and now shut gets real..." Oh hell yes! shit better get real! ...I still want to marry Bill. I don't give two shits if he spends his time molesting Tom's bottom (which might I add, the botTOM is fucking HOT), I will spend my time enjoying the view ;) Lmfao!

Author's Response: LMAO!! Your reviews always make me smile and laugh. :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 12:51 am Title: Beyond Scared Straight

My opinion on Bill's brother is hes a gullible idiot. Enough said.

This is a really good fic so far. I can't wait to see what comes next. I love the mystery surrounding Bill's crime.

Why do I have the feelin the Warden is going to give Tom the drug smuggling thing? Hes either handing it over t Tom or going to make all evidence make it look like Tom was doing it if he is ever caught.

Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! However, I'm not telling you anything! You just need to read and find out. :P But I do love hearing your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 12:17 am Title: Beyond Scared Straight

First- I effing love you for not only have Bill/Tom as pairing, but Bill/Manzini. Damn, two hot pairings all in one story. Nom. Now, I has a question. CAN I PLEASE MARRY THIS BILL?! He can still do what he wants with Tom, but my god... He's so hot in this! Hell, I'll even do the whole letters and shit. But PLEASE! (you can marry us ;)) Lmao!

Author's Response: Well you're welcome for the pairings! XD However, Tomi gets to keep Bill for now. Although, Bill kinda owns Tom's ass. XD And the best part is, for once, I actually know what's coming next! :D

Reviewer: kramllew Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 11:56 am Title: Welcome to DUP

Ooh I really fell in love with the first chapter so when I saw that you had updated this story I got all excited!! Please keep it up!

Author's Response: Yay! Makes me happy that you anticipate an update! I'm trying to make it weekly so there'll be another chapter next week. :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 11:24 am Title: Beyond Scared Straight

Wow, this is well-written! Not what I usually read, but I'll give this a try :)

Author's Response: Thank you! That's probably the best compliment I can receive. :3 I hope I don't disappoint you!

Reviewer: moniixmoore Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 01:22 am Title: Beyond Scared Straight

Is his brother manzini that's who I imaged

Author's Response: Yup. His real name is Kristoffer. :)

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 05:09 pm Title: Welcome to DUP

Sounds interesting...

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 05:25 pm Title: Welcome to DUP

-squees, dances, throws confetti, and parties-

Author's Response: Lmao! I love you, Rae. XD So I take it you're excited that I'm finally posting it? I'm going to try to make it a weekly posting thing. :)

Reviewer: twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 11:22 am Title: Welcome to DUP

Well I loved it well written it's great :D

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 10:47 am Title: Welcome to DUP

Was this fic based on a manga? Is it just me or was this inspired Mika Sadahiro's Under Grand Hotel?

Author's Response: Just a little bit. XD I'm impressed you know that! But it's not going to be an identical story line. Though a few elements will probably be slightly similar.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 02:03 am Title: Welcome to DUP

This is really interesting so far.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: SoffiProppi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 01:52 am Title: Welcome to DUP

Great start! :) It'll be interesting to see what next chapter brings!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: moniixmoore Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 01:45 am Title: Welcome to DUP

awesome story
:D

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/11 12:57 am Title: Welcome to DUP

Wow this is indeed very intriguing, Bill being the well endowed tough hand in DUP again is a new image of him being authoritative and bossy it's cool BTW and a little bit mysterious about his crimes that nobody knows except him and the warden why he end down there. And Tom here is going to find out being his roommate is the advantage.....more like it....I'll keep on track since you get my attention and time on this.....I love it really and can't wait for your next chappy.....well read from you soon so goodluck and till then.....:D

Author's Response: Thanks a ton! Not only do I love long, responsive reviews, I was also a little worried about feedback because this story has kind of been my baby for the last several weeks as I've worked on it. XD I'm glad you enjoyed thus far and I hope I don't disappoint! :)

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