Date: 11/28/11 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
To be honest, I got teary-eyed, just because it brought up some memories of my own that I've buried deep and far away.
This was beautifully written. The fact that it was simple let you just feel the stripped and bared emotions he was struggling with.
Great job.
Date: 11/22/11 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was sad.. But true. And I must admit, I downloaded the song and it inspired a story of mine, too. lol so thank you for that!
I loved it, though. It was amazing.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the song! And thank you for those nice words, they mean a lot to me! <3
Date: 11/22/11 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww... Poor Bill. That was very sad but beautiful. I really hate the thought of the twins having to part so it was painful to read but worth it. Good job!
Author's Response: Aww yes! :( Poor boys, though they're not twins in this story... It's still sad, when two people who love each other must part. Thank you so much for reading & reviewing! <3
Date: 11/22/11 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww, this was so sad. I think we've all had to say goodbye to something or someone that we love. It takes a big person to not ask another one to stay, to let them go to follow their dreams.
Beautiful work.
Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! This means so much to me! And yes, unfortunately many people and things come and go without us being able to strike in. This is life... Anyway, thank you!! <3