Date: 04/01/13 03:15 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
WHY U ABANDON IT??? i never ever ever ever ever imagined somebody would adapt that yaoi manga, and you did! you are BEYOND amazing! PLEASE comtinue :c
Author's Response: hey, thank you very much for reviewing ^^ I forgot I'd written this fict @_@ but I was really happy when I read my email that you've reviewed it. Here I've written the 2nd chapter loooong ago, and posted it on lj, it is not even have been beta-ed so there are a ton of mistakes in it. But here if you still want to read it http://nonconman.livejournal.com/1263.html . Thank you again ^^/ bye
Date: 03/24/12 05:26 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
amazing amazing amazing! please continue i'm in love with this.... it's so so so something and i can't wait for more ;)
Date: 01/12/12 08:13 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
I liked it :D
I hope you write more! Pwetty pwease! xD
Date: 12/14/11 11:20 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
where is the second chapter? :o by the way i read the under grand hotel manga and realized the beginning is very similar, so i hope you will make it a little different from now on ^^
Date: 11/23/11 04:28 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
Oh wow. So you're doing a straight up copy of the Undergrand Hotel manga. o.O Sorry, my reading stops here. I already know the whole story. :)
Author's Response: I change a the scene start from chapter 3 :)
Date: 11/22/11 05:59 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
For a first fic, I think you've done excellent job here. The text is smooth and flowing and interesting, dialogue believable. Nice, nice... I'm a bit hesitant with prison fics since few of us really know how it's like, but I'm open-minded.
And I admit that warnings brought me here, oops. :)
Date: 11/22/11 10:48 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
OMG!!! WILL MY BILLY BOO GO O.O this is exciiiiiting ^.^
Date: 11/20/11 04:58 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
I loved it just write soon :D
Author's Response: I've submit the update, I am just waiting till someone validate it ^^ danke!
Date: 11/20/11 09:47 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
Really like the manga! Haha! XDD
Author's Response: yes! I'll make some different on the next chapter
Date: 11/20/11 09:40 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
I've already read the manga! (Otaku here!)
LOL I also planned on writing a story based on this but since you already did, so...
Anyway, I'm writing this review even before I read your story! Haha!
I guess I'll just send another review after I read it. :DD
Author's Response: ookay, lucky me wrote it first! hehhehernthank you very much had took your time to write this review :)
Date: 11/20/11 07:00 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
<3333 wah ternyata masuk THF :D congrats!
Date: 11/20/11 06:41 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
This was amazing!!
Can't wait until the next Chapter!! b29;b29;b29;
Date: 11/20/11 12:19 am Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
Interesting, and I dont mind the rape thing so lets see where you go with this , good so far
Author's Response: good, because there will be many rape scenes in the future, thank you very much!
Date: 11/19/11 11:08 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
I´m definitely going to follow this, I really liked it :)
Author's Response: thank you sooo much for commenting, I hope you like the next chapter too :)
Date: 11/19/11 08:29 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
OMG!OMG!OMG! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! Ive been wanting someone to do a story based on UGH for ages!
Author's Response: that's cool! I like the story very much! it had brought me a emotions flood! I hope I don't degrading the original story... hehehe. rnrnthank you very much :)
Date: 11/19/11 06:01 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
this is quite intruiging. I'm really enjoying badass-Tom and I do wonder how Bill is going to handle it? will he be prissy? will he be basass as well? will he take it? will he fight it?
So many questions and only time will tell.
Great job :)
~Dawn
Author's Response: I have a good news for you :D I had the second chapter written already!rnthank you very much for reading and commenting, it means so much for me!
Date: 11/19/11 05:04 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
wow, sounds interesting! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: hehe, I'll post the second soon!
Date: 11/19/11 02:18 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
I think this has the potential to be a great story! There's just some minor tense and grammatical errors to look over.
Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: rnreally? can you point it out to me please? I'll fix it. yes I find the major difficulty with my language when writing this; my English is not very good. rnrnthank you very much :D I hope the next chapter will be better
Date: 11/19/11 02:06 pm Title: Round 1 - Life Sentence
Wow you write a fic!! U exactly like what I like in stories I mean every single thing , so I'm so happy U wrote :D and it is awesome! I love it already, I'm sure it will be an amaziiiin story!! yay rape will next chapi have rape pliiiz *-* I hope u update soon, I'll be waitiiing for mooooooooore <3
Author's Response: Aww Baby.... *hugyousotight* I am very happy you like rape too! that's awesome! I have a good news for you, there's the first rape for the next chapter :D rnthank you sooo much for reading and commenting <3