Date: 01/03/14 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
You know, you should not write about food anymore. But now I kinda understand why you like food so much. Haha. How is one supposed to eat this fruit without the distraction of your story? No, really, you should start writing again. I love to read your stories. With love. x
Date: 12/05/13 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
very descriptive but not overly so. The homage to the playfulness of the boys is right on the mark.
Date: 11/20/11 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, that was... peachy :D.
But really well written, very erotic touch. Bill should eat peaches every day. :)
Author's Response: Yikes...so sorry for the delay in my reply!!rnrnThank you for your comments, and that you found it erotic. But then anything Bill puts in his mouth is bound to look good...LOL! I really enjoy your writing so the compliment is definitely appreciated. <3
Date: 11/18/11 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel an overwhelming need to go find and devour a fresh peach now. Zoinks.
Author's Response: LOL! I love peaches so after Engel's Hemmingway comment, I had the idea of what Bill would look like eating a peach stuck in my mind. I still do. rnrnThanks and hope you get your fresh peach soon. ;)
Date: 11/15/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/15/11 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
"The good parts of a book may be only something a writer is lucky enough to overhear or it may be the wreck of his whole damn life — and one is as good as the other."
Ernest Hemingway
Author's Response: I think this is a good thing...my cold isn't making me read this clearly, so I'm going to err on the side of caution, take the middle road on it and work on making my next fic(s) better. rnrnThanks as always! <3
Date: 11/15/11 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn now I'll think peaches are sexy for all eternity, damn you Bill x)
Author's Response: He has a habit of doing that, I think it's his dastardly plan. Thanks for reading and reviewing!