Date: 11/23/11 04:16 pm Title: The First Taste
Thanks for whetting my appetite so expertly. You are the executive chef of the fandom. I'll have to think about which scene I would like to see from Bill's perspective. I'll get back to you about that. :)
Date: 11/22/11 04:59 pm Title: The First Taste
Sweet!
Date: 11/22/11 04:18 pm Title: The First Taste
amaiziing! omg ur so awesome! when i saw this up i was soo happy1 :D cant wait for more... and as for scenes with Bills POV (??) i think itd be interesting to see them when they had their first kiss when Tom was having a smoke...or smht. like that...their firsts..thatd be awesome :)
Date: 11/21/11 02:18 pm Title: The First Taste
ahh, this one was lovely :D
hmm, I'd like to see something from part of the show from Bills p.o.v :)
Date: 11/21/11 01:34 pm Title: The First Taste
I am so glad that you are writing this. Seeing things from Billīs perspective is so interesting and fun, because he was so mysterious and we didnīt really know what was he thinking in "Appetite"
What scene I would like to see from Billīs perspective? I donīt know, would you write the whole story? Because there are so many scenes, where I wished I could see in Billīs head... But if I had to choose only one, then... their firs time together after the "Qeen Bill" accident... Please :)
And maybe some others for inspiration :D
Bill, Tom and a cigarette - Bill saw Tom smoking during his break and he didnīt like it
Tom, girls and jealous Bill - Tom talks with some girls from hiss class, Bill sees it and is jealous :)
Bill and Tom in club - boys are going to club after work, with Georg and Gustav
The first kiss :)
The scene before Five stars... when Tom wants to tell Bill that he will be in Five stars, but Bill donīt show up on their date and later he meet him on make up test
And definitely the engagement :)
And much, much more. Seriously, the whole story :D
Date: 11/21/11 01:02 pm Title: The First Taste
It was great to see what Bill was thinking during this scene. :D
Date: 11/21/11 12:47 pm Title: The First Taste
Claudia:-giggles- Bill is so cute in this chapter,and naturally Georg is so weird XD
Star: hi me again, I love Gustav in your stores.
Date: 11/21/11 06:50 am Title: The First Taste
I feel like pretty much reading the whole story again now, with this new perspective :) I'd love to see the last bit of the first part from Bill's POV, where they're walking in the park and he tells Tom that it's not going to happen yet, but they still kiss.
Date: 11/21/11 06:30 am Title: The First Taste
Yay! The scene when they get caught and Tom is asked to leave the game.
Date: 11/21/11 02:25 am Title: The First Taste
Ooh. I forgot. Since you asked, I would love to read the chapter with Gordon's tasting menu/staff diner, with the announcement of Bill's departure, and Gustav's and Tom's promotions, from Bill's point of view. Especially the part when Tom and Bill are eating. :) But you don't have to write it. I'm just curious as to how Bill felt that day.
Date: 11/21/11 02:15 am Title: The First Taste
Oh my god. The fluff and the sweetness and the crush! gah. And Georg's teasing. And Bill's determination to create a perfect meal for Tom. It's all too cute. :) I can't wait for the one-shot.
Date: 11/21/11 01:49 am Title: The First Taste
ahhh, what a question! off the top of my head, I think I'd like to see from Bill's perspective the scene where Bill and Tom are caught in the bathroom and very wrong conclusions are drawn and the immediate aftermath...but I honestly can't make up my mind. all of the very dramatic or very shocking moments, I think. oh, and perhaps when they both show up for the Five Stars show and find out that they'll both be competing. Ooooh, and I'd love to see how Bill found out about the Bill and Tom shipping by Five Stars fans and how he felt about what they were saying. that and Tom and Chantelle.
Date: 11/21/11 01:08 am Title: The First Taste
I love these xhPters from a different pov. Great way to enjoy them better.
Date: 11/21/11 12:38 am Title: The First Taste
If I had a million dollars, I'd totally pay you a bunch of it to write a full version of Bill's pov. I love these boys so much.
Date: 11/21/11 12:12 am Title: The First Taste
It's cool to see the beginning from Bill's perspective. I felt bad for him and his hopeless crush - but I know it turns out fabulously for him! And Georg knew Bill had a crush! Oh my!
I'd be interested to see what Bill was feeling when he was going on those coffee 'dates' with Tom and then seeing him show up at the show's first photo-op.
Date: 11/20/11 10:57 pm Title: The First Taste
A delight to read, as always b29;
I think I would really like to see what Bill was thinking during/after they were caught by Andreas. I want to know if he was as freaked out as Tom.
Date: 11/20/11 09:18 pm Title: The First Taste
Creme brulee latte? Does that actually exist? I wish I could find it somewhere here, but seeing as I only can find crema catalana in one restaurant in my country, I don't see that happening any time soon.
I'm loving these appetizers. I loved seeing things through Bill's perspective and realizing how much he liked Tom from the getgo and how he wanted to make an impression, even if he thought his crush would go nowhere.
Date: 11/20/11 08:45 pm Title: The First Taste
Ohhh... How cute! Billy wants to impress his Tom :)
Date: 11/20/11 08:38 pm Title: The First Taste
Omg I almost forgot to review my favorite part: Bill watching Tom eat from the kitchen!!!! A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E.
I can picture Appetite!Bill doing this so clearly! I admire the way you create characters for a story and how they act according to their persona throughout the fic. Real talent right here!
Thanks for this ficlet!
Date: 11/20/11 08:32 pm Title: The First Taste
SO excited to see a new Appetite ā la carte!!! I adore reading bits of the story from Bill perspective. I remember wanting to know Bill's point of vew when I was reading Appetite, but now I can't pick a specific scene... I will have to think about it!
I really really enjoyed reading this one ! I was very surprised! He had an intense crush on Tom, cute! Georg's teasing was funny and seeing Bill's dedication to this meal just confirm why I love his character so much. LOVE the last two lines about the progression of the meal. The progression of their relationship ended up being even more beautiful tho! Can't wait for this one-shot!