Date: 01/22/12 12:48 pm Title: A Proposal to Remember
Awww I think I will add this as an epilog for the original story... I wanted to read this scene so much, thank you :)
The moment Bill came from restroom I knew that he wants propose Tom too :D This was so awesome and sweet, very nice story. Hope the next will be here soon ;)
Date: 01/22/12 11:13 am Title: A Proposal to Remember
Oh my God :D I'm so excited to hear your story is being published X) It also helps encourage me to get my story done so I can work it out to get published :D But any how is it gunna be an e-book or an actually book book lol I sooo wouldn't mind buying it either way X)
Back to this story, fucking amazing x) I missed reading about this pair a lot (even if I didn't review enough in the past to show it). It's so adorable that they planned to ask one another at the same time! Eeek! Now I really can't wait till the wedding and whatever else you've got planned to post!
Date: 01/22/12 02:41 am Title: For Starters
ok, now I am able to leave a proper review.
What I loved the most is how Tom was so proud to be with Bill. How he was admiring him, thinking of him as a prince that doesnt even have to carry his bags!
And you made the most of it, making Bill not even thinkung to take one single bag!
That particular scene was great for me. They are in such sync, even in the trivial things of life.
And when it said: it was like waving the flag at the bull. I totally cracked down on this. It was a little unexpected, as the scene was different in my mind, and Ive had the best laugh!!
And somehow you made me guess Bill was going to give Tom his own ring, either from the rithm of the writing, or because now I begin to understand and feel how your logic works!
I totally dig a story with the wedding, too, Im looking forward to see how panicked and excited Bill will be in that!!!
Thanks again, Im so happy I get to read yor stories and Im so proud of you I could burst!
Date: 01/22/12 01:58 am Title: A Proposal to Remember
So cute! I loved it! I'm happy you decided to write this scene. Although I'll miss being able do go re-read Appetite whenever I want, congrats are in order! I'm also looking forward to any future Appetite a la Carte you have for us! ...possibly a wedding? XD
Date: 01/21/12 07:01 pm Title: A Proposal to Remember
I am so proud of you and so happy!
Well done!
Date: 01/21/12 05:58 pm Title: A Proposal to Remember
*__* Omg thank you so much for letting us see this part of their life together. I SO wanted to read about the proposal! This was just absolutely perfect. The way they proposed at the same time, with the same ring? Genius. Love how Bill was all nervous and shy, he's adorable. Oh and that was hilarious to me ``And the only place I go on my knees for you is in the bedroom so I'm not doing that here``.
The way you write them together is always spot on and I can't get enough. This is why the end note makes me very very happy, can't wait for more!
Date: 01/21/12 03:58 pm Title: A Proposal to Remember
Oh my god, I'm so, so happy for you!! I will definitely buy Appetite the moment that's possible!
And I'm also so, so happy for these boys, even though I have a terrible crush on your Tom... Oh well, I guess there's no competing with chef!Bill, le sigh.
Date: 01/21/12 03:49 pm Title: A Proposal to Remember
[this comment goes to 'Appetite', I post this here because you deleted the story]
It's been weeks since I want to leave you a comment & I never had the time, so now here I am :)
First of all, is your fault that now I can't watch not even a publicity of a cooking show beacuse I remember this story & all the things that happened between Tom and Bill, and is not healthy for my mind.
Putting that aside, is one of the BEST story I have read, but I have to be honest, when I started reading I got kinda bored and I skip some parts of the first chapters :/ but then it got more & more interesting and I couldn't stop reading.
My congrats on the publishing of 'Appetite', is going to be a hit :)
Now regarding this 'Appetite', I love it! >.< all the missed scenes :) I love how they proposed to the other, they do not expect that, uh? waiting for more chapters :D
Take care!
Date: 01/21/12 10:03 am Title: A Proposal to Remember
Ah, how happy this made me feel!
Date: 01/21/12 08:38 am Title: A Proposal to Remember
I love it. They're so sweet. I'm smiling like an idiot right now. I love them. Oh God. I hope we get to see them married, and working in the kitchen together, with their supportive and hardworking staff. :) And congratulations on getting Appetite published!
Date: 01/21/12 06:57 am Title: A Proposal to Remember
Simply MARVELOUS! *___*
Date: 01/21/12 05:07 am Title: A Proposal to Remember
First of all, my god this chapter was divine :D b29;
Secondly, I'm happy that you got published, but it sucks a little bit. Are we never going to be able to read it again unless we buy it? And did you have to change the characters to... not Bill and Tom?
Date: 01/21/12 12:32 am Title: A Proposal to Remember
Maaan, I'm so proud of you and at the same time so sad!!! Seeing as where I live, I'll most probably won't be able to get the published version of Appetite, and had I known it was going down, I would've read it one last time! I love that story so much, I really want to read it once again, was thinking about it a few days ago, in fact! I just didn't have the time ._. Bummer, really, but yay for you getting published!!!
Date: 01/20/12 11:55 pm Title: A Proposal to Remember
YOU'RE PUBLISHING APPETITE YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYYYYY *does a happy dance in her head, because otherwise she would freak people out* LOL Okay, I'm done ;-P
I can't begin to tell you how happy I am :D
I've always LOVED your work beyond words. If I could, I'd make sure every last one was published, and I'd own a copy of them all too :3
More soon, please?
All my love,
efilsiydolem
Date: 01/20/12 10:32 pm Title: A Proposal to Remember
LOVE. *____*
LOOOOOVE.
Date: 01/02/12 02:01 pm Title: The First Taste
Ooooh, I already read Appetite a long time ago, but this made me want to read it again.. So that's what I'll do! ;)
Date: 12/23/11 09:46 pm Title: The First Taste
Damn! I want to see Bill's face as he peeks out at Tom :)
Date: 12/17/11 07:25 pm Title: The First Taste
Hahahah I loved Georg in Appetite, he's such an amusing character xD Reading in Bill's POV was interesting and I really enjoyed it. So we get to see his attraction from the very beginning, nice. I LOVED this, which is kind of a given, heee.
Merry Christmas!
Date: 11/26/11 12:04 am Title: The First Taste
Omg if Bill isn't the cutest thing to ever cook in a kitchen I don't know what is. I love how much he likes Tom omg, it's just way too sweet how flustered he is/gets. And Georg is so great, I love him. I'm just grinning at him the entire ending here, he's such a pain in the ass of a friend and it's perfect. Fab as usual.
I like seeing Bill's side a lot, since he was kind of moody the entire story and was so hard to get inside the head of (for us readers, anyway) I think it would be pretty great to see the part of the second half of A Cut Above the Rest: 8.5, from the sandwich competition to the end of that section. That was just an intense scene and it'd be pretty cool to see from his side.
Date: 11/25/11 05:53 pm Title: The First Taste
I'd definitely love to read about Tom's first day from Bill's POV :D