So... Do I say it? I do. Damn I was so confused when I started to read this. It was like I was reading a whole different fic and to be honest, I have no clue of how you will knit these together, but I wilol wait it patiently.

The chapter itself was very intense, angsty, and I liked it a lot. Your way to write flows smoothly and languiage keeps it interesting. The pain was almost touchable in here, conflicted situation and fucked up world.

I want to understand! :D

Whoa... That was intense. So, I'm guessing that they moved apart and lost touch... and them meeting in chapter one was them meeting after a long time. Maybe?

I'm loving the drama and emotion you're writing in this. They're done. They want out. It takes a lot to drive a person to that point.

I didn't like Bill in this chapter! What a brat! I'm sure he has a lot to deal with, but really. And poor Tom, just trying to keep it all together~ My heartstrings, you are pulling them and my heart is breaking for these two. I love it! :D Looking forward to more!

Interesting. I somehow got sucked deep into this story (or prologue) and I'm convinced that it was your nice way to write. It was easy to imagine everything happening and feel related to many things. There was just something I really liked, colorful, not boring or repetative and flowing nicely. I'll be definitely hanging around to see where this is going. :)

Author's Response: Ouu, I'm very glad. Thanks for such kind praise, I hope I can maintain a certain level of excellence to live up to a standard deserving of your words. I'm really glad you seemed to enjoy it. Thanks for reading!

This is very interesting! I wonder what Tom
was thinking when he got all serious looking! LOVED this, can't wait for more! XD

Author's Response: Eee, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! :D

This was really cool! I feel like Bill does questionable things. When he mentioned the hijackers, I'm like ^_^; Why would you mention that... What do you do in life, Bill? I don't know, I just got the vibe Bill's up to something. Tom though, he's all good. Just a cornrowed doofus who's capable of occasional swagger.

I felt like I was in the airport. That mood of rushing and being surrounded by people you don't know. This was very good! You also captured that awkward mood when you meet a stranger, bond, then have to leave.

I am very much looking forward to what you have planned for this. Very good first chapter!

Author's Response: Hahaha! Is Bill that shady? Your words are much too kind, thank you very much. I'm sincerely glad you enjoyed and hope you return for the upcoming chapters! :) ( PS. I took a gander at your profile, because I'm a super ninja like that. Fellow Korean music fan? ;) )