Date: 03/31/12 01:52 am Title: Chapter 21
:( such a sad ending :( I must read Alena's return tomorrow!!!! :) good story, it kept me wanting more and more :)
Author's Response: You might hate me for her return! :o
Date: 03/31/12 01:49 am Title: Chapter 20
:( so sad.... Her aunt obviously is overwhelmed and doesn't have very clear common sense to ask such ridiculous questions!!
Author's Response: Yea :/
Date: 03/31/12 01:43 am Title: Chapter 18
Young love
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/31/12 01:39 am Title: Chapter 17
Awwwwww :) I hope that jerk gets what's coming for him!!!!!!! :P
Author's Response: Oh he did :p
Date: 03/31/12 01:33 am Title: Chapter 15
Billa is a sweetheart :) Alena and the twins were destined :) good story and can't wait to continue with it!!! :)
Author's Response: Vielen dank<3
Date: 03/31/12 01:27 am Title: Chapter 14
What an asshole!!! He beat uP a girl!!! He is a coward!!!! :/ poor Alena!!! :(
Author's Response: Yea :( Such a heartbreaking part in the story.
Date: 03/30/12 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
So Anton seems like he could be a major jerk like his brother if he wants to be! is he just jealous? or really an ass? :P i must read on!
Author's Response: I'd say possessive more than anything. So both jealous and an ass basically.
Date: 03/30/12 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
aww she got asked out! :P and poor Billa, he is just so damn awkward around Alena! :) its so cute!
Author's Response: Yea, it is pretty adorable. ^–^
Date: 03/30/12 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
hmmm.... now im currious what age these kiddies are :P
Author's Response: I think I made them about 13.
Date: 03/30/12 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
hahaha!!! sometimes being the oldest isnt all that :P
Author's Response: Hahaha nope!
Date: 03/30/12 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
So Alena sounds the same way as me and my friends are about illnesses :P haha
Author's Response: I'm glad she's relatable! Hahaha
Date: 02/23/12 09:51 am Title: Chapter 21
What?....that's it? Her leaving and running? That don't solve no problems at all!
So I am guessing, well, hoping there is a sequel so I am not left hanging huh?
Author's Response: Well I don't want to ruin the surprise. But I will. :3 the "sequel" will be intense. I can guarantee tears in the first 9 chapters or so.
Date: 02/23/12 06:45 am Title: Chapter 21
wow.......
more :)
update soooon and keep up the gooood work :)
Author's Response: Ohhhh you are going to hate me. Check the completion status.
Date: 02/20/12 06:46 am Title: Chapter 20
wow....intence chapter!!!! nice!!!!
cant wait for moooore :)
keep up the gooood work :)
Author's Response: Vielen dank. :) The next chapter is following the same problems but they become "solved" in a sad way. :(
Date: 02/17/12 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
So sad to hear the circumstances of the event ls that has happened. Even more heartbreaking that each character takes upon themselves such a burden on their shoulders. Just hope justice gets served.
Author's Response: The last chapter will be even more heartbreaking. :( but on the bright side, dierk never appears again.
Date: 02/12/12 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story, I love it so far! It's really good!
I noticed that you use the word "shrieked" or "screamed" often, and it makes me imagine the character screaming at the top of their lungs. o_O
A less intense word you could use would maybe be "exclaimed", because it leaves a nicer visual, I think, and leaves the same impression or meaning.
Other than that one small thing though, the story is really good. I love the characters and such. Good job so far! I'm looking forward to reading future updates. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. I'll try it out. :)
Date: 02/12/12 02:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Thought so it wasn't till after I had read it all that your name looked firmiliar...T-Lizzle
Author's Response: OH HEY!!!!! :D
Date: 02/12/12 12:20 am Title: Chapter 17
I have enjoyed this very much. In my opinion they should have gone to the police and boy such as Dierk does not deserve to be out in the public with such youth. It's a sad experince bullying is, butto let it slide and do nothing is even worse. I hope
Dierk gets what he deserves! By the way I am gonna ask... R u on the app with the same username? Just curious.
Author's Response: Don't worry, he will. And yes I do. :)
Date: 02/07/12 10:41 am Title: Chapter 14
cant wait for mooore :)
please update sooon :)
keep up the goood work :)
Author's Response: Like always, I promise I will. ^-^
Date: 02/07/12 01:48 am Title: Chapter 13
Ooof, hope Dierk doesn't plan anything big and that Alena will be able to protect Bill and Tom some way.
Your story is fun and easy to read. Realy enjoyable :)
Keep up the good work!
Loves
Author's Response: Aw thank you! :) And it is big. O-O But she does protect the boys! :)