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Reviewer: xSkittlesX Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/12 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Going Straight

I like this story! I read it on my phone in Disneyland as I was eating lunch! Grew attached right away! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! So happy you are enjoying it so far. x

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/12 08:31 am Title: Chapter 10: Rabbits are Roadkill

I just started readig this and I think the banner really helped a bit. It's very twisted I must say, very different to what I usually see from other HET stories. It's very to and fro from one character to the other, no offense but I find it a bit hard to keep and remember all the characters names. That is the only thing I struggle with or it might just be my over tired brain.
But in all seriousness I anticipate on where this story is heading, I really like the idea of how you have portrayed Bill.

Author's Response: I see what you're saying there are a lot of characters in this story. I will be trying to keep it a little less complex in further chapters, sometimes I forget character names as well. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: moniixmoore Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/12 06:02 am Title: Chapter 9: Torn

Ohhhh can't wait untill the next chapter love it!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much! should have a new chapter out soon.

Reviewer: moniixmoore Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/12 07:02 am Title: Chapter 8: Fatal Attraction.

I'm reading this its very well written and I love it :)

Author's Response: thanks so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it! :) xx

Reviewer: xXxKekexXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/11 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Going Straight

Hmmm I'm liking this so far...i like stories like these :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad your enjoying it am posting another update soon. :)

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