Date: 07/19/12 12:41 am Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
more plz :)
Author's Response: Will do!
Date: 06/30/12 01:09 am Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
I would remove the pairing, yes. It's so sweet what they have now.
It's so sweet that Bill knows all the rules of his life, about how he's not supposed to go out after dark or has to shower with help because of his cast. What a sweetie. And Tom is too, because he treats Bill to fun things like strawberry cake in the middle of the night. Those are the moments that matter in Bill's life, and I'm so happy Bill has Tom.
Bill is a darling to wonder why their mom is harder on Tom when Tom is "just a kid too." It's been a while, so I've forgotten -- how aware is Bill that he's different from others his age? I guess not so aware, if he thinks Tom is a kid like him.
Date: 06/29/12 07:43 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
First of all, I think it's nice to see you updating this again after a long time. :)
And when it comes to twincest... perhaps the removing would be an okay idea? There IS, after all, some moral issues with it since Bill's obviously uncabable of majking the decisions for himself and therefore the romantic/sexual relationship could cause upset in some people - even if this is just a fic and I'm not personally one of them.
But it's your call, of course. :)
Date: 06/29/12 02:34 am Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
*jumps around flutter clappiong for joy* updaaate! *big grin* I am so happy to see another chapter! Its seriously amazing, especially because I was JUST thinking about this story an whatever happwnws to it
This was such a sweet little chapter. Poor Billy having bad dreams. I kinda wish we could've known what it was about...but him to really remembering is a fairly common and realistic experience so...yeah...
Bill really is quite smart in his own way. It was great how he had that really deep question about who really determines what a 'bad habit' is. And he really does have logical thinking, which is technically the reason the teach algebra in school, with the whole Tom and him are twins so how can one of them be a kid and not the other when they're only ten minutes apart. I love that Tom came to check on Bill when he thought he heard something.
I do kind of like their relationship the way it is, so I would be happy if it stayed this way, but I also wouldn't stop reading if you do decide to put a romantic/sexual spin to it, so whatever the majority decides is cool with me, because I know you're such a good author you can make either one work and be believable. Fantastic chapter! I can't wait to see more, keep up the lovely work!
Date: 06/29/12 12:02 am Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
I like the non-twincesty brotherly love. Caring about each other and taking care of each other :)
I think it would be a different type of story with twincest, especially considering they aren't quite on the same footing. But brothers sometimes talk about/fool around experimenting with each other without becoming a couple. This Tom could talk to this Bill and set him straight/show him some things without going full-on twincest.
Which ever way you go, it will be good!
Date: 06/28/12 01:11 am Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
Another cute chapter! I was so happy to see this updated XD As for your question, I would vote to keep the love brotherly. Not that I don't love twincest as much as the next person...I just think it may be a little weird with how innocent and naive Bill is. But Im sure to love the story no matter what you decide to do XD
Date: 06/27/12 07:55 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
Wow, I really don't know. I'm torn too! :/
I love twincest to death, but... hmm, I'm not sure. If other people are okay with it, I'm fine with it just being brotherly. Honestly I'd be happy either way.
Date: 06/27/12 12:29 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
i just got hit with an idea for this story. try making up a guy that's toms best friend who has the hots for bill. its just creepy enough to work its just a suggestion i don't mean to derail your train of thought
Date: 06/27/12 08:52 am Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
I love the closeness of Tom and Bill in this, but I also love the twincess as well. Maybe you can take this in the direction that Bill had some kind of medical condition that his doctors were not aware of that requires some kind of brain surgery that would make his like other teenagers. Of course he will have a lot to catch up on and Tom can help him and then the whole twincess can follow... What do you think? I know it's not a simple story line , but it could work....
Date: 06/26/12 05:31 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
I like it and wouldnt mind seeing where you take it, tom guilt is always fun
Date: 06/26/12 05:21 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
I would say yes. I prefer it this way: brotherly love, which is so cute. :)
Date: 06/26/12 05:04 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
Remove the twincest pairing!? Nein! Think of the children!!!! I read this while cuddled up with my pet unicorn. We're just like Bill and Simba :3
Author's Response: Aww, that's cute. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/26/12 04:49 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
I was JUST thinking of this story the other day, and was wondering when it would be updated. It was really good, and can't wait to read more. As for the Tom/Bill pairing you should leave it, even if there isn't gonna be any twincest action in the fic.
Date: 06/26/12 04:21 pm Title: Don't let the bed bugs bite
I'm really happy you updated. I do love the brotherly love in this, but I'm also a twincest fan and it might be really interesting to explore that side of things from Bill's POV. Having read the book and as the mother of a boy with mild autistic tendencies I can say how accurate you are in your characterisation of Bill. I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 06/26/12 03:34 pm Title: Bad things can happen accidentally
Okay, the autistic Bill character is REALLY cute! I remember I used to act like him when I was younger. I have Aspergers Disorder so I can really connect. I even wrote a fic on here about a girl with AD (not me) meeting the twins. So to sum it up, I love this story!!!! :-D
Date: 05/07/12 09:10 pm Title: Bad things can happen accidentally
Hey, I'm not sure if you're still working on this fic, but I really love it so far! I hope you update it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New chapter's just been posted :D
Date: 01/14/12 07:07 pm Title: Getting to stay up late is really fun!
I like your Bill character. How you're writing the story, I can really get into him and how he sees the world.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New chapter's just been posted :D
Date: 01/09/12 04:36 pm Title: Getting to stay up late is really fun!
Bill is still so friggin cute!!! and now i want chocolate milk :P
Author's Response: Aww thanks for the review! New update soon! :D
Date: 01/09/12 02:48 am Title: Getting to stay up late is really fun!
Great chapter! Bill is adorable as always!
Date: 01/08/12 11:34 pm Title: Getting to stay up late is really fun!
Happy new year!
Aww race car bed! Ooh and Simba!!! Is it the one that kisses Nala, with the magnetic nose?
Tom is such a sweet older brother. He really doesn't seem to resent Bill at all, and i m sure it would be really easy to in that situation.
Wonderful chapter. I'm sorry you haven't been able to write much lately. I hope you are doing alright. Keep up the lovely work.