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Reviewer: kiss the stars Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/12 09:35 pm Title: The Speeches

QuQ I love thiiiiiiiiiis .

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/12 04:34 am Title: The Speeches

AW!!!! So sweet. Loved Tom's speech and the mud puddle story was just too cute. Great writing.

Author's Response: Why thank you! It took me long enough to write it! I actually wrote the whole mud puddle story, and I think I'm going to include it as a bonus chapter.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/11 01:49 am Title: Bushido

Aww, sweet. Zoom Into Me is one of my favorites too. Very fitting for the chapter IMO. Keep up the spiffy work! I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Yay! My work is spiffy! I love you for using that word!

Reviewer: undeasas Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/11 09:26 am Title: Bushido

Amzing ; ). But why did he got married? *_* GRRR ;DD Omg i can't wait for the next one O_O.

Author's Response: He had to get married! I needed to write a wedding scene! I'm happy you like it so much.

Reviewer: Constanza Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/11 05:28 pm Title: Bushido

Next chapter: The honeymoon!... please!

Author's Response: Next chapter is speeches and the chapter after that will be Tom's night and then the honeymoon! I might combine speeches and Tom's night though.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/11 04:57 pm Title: Bill

Aw! So sweet. Bushido loves Bill so much. And I loved how you worked Zoom into the chapter as if Bill had written it for his new husband. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review and the love!

Reviewer: undeasas Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/11 01:05 pm Title: Bill

Omg i love it soo much. Everything is perfectly placed. And AWWWWWWW. :D.The chapter is really sweet :D. i had a smile on my face all the time i was reading this : D I can't wait till the next chapter. I wonder what will come.. :D although i'm still hoping for Bill & Andi :DDDDD. Love it : *****

Author's Response: Aaw thank you! I'm almost done with the next chapter! Thank you for the review and the love!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 11:08 pm Title: Bill

An entirely different story as in, he actually is crying?

Very nice beginning. I look forward to seeing more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 09:04 am Title: Bill

That was lovely. The conversation between the twins was so sweet. Although I like Bushido in this I kind of wish Bill could marry his twin instead. Is David still locked in the cellar five months later? I guess his legs will be healed by now,so he could escape. Scary thought. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, David, is still locked in the cellar, and he will not escape. I've tortured the twins enough. Thanks for the review and compliment!

Reviewer: msjaklina Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/11 09:23 pm Title: Bill

:D! i cant wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Yay! I'm writing the next chapter now.

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