Date: 11/11/11 10:42 pm Title: Chapter the third
eeeeek! *peeks through fingers* it's tom, right?
Date: 11/11/11 09:22 pm Title: Chapter the third
*GAAAASP!!* Oh sweet, brave, little Bill. I hope he's okay! It better be Tom. I hope it is SO MUCH it isn't even funny.
WTH is wrong with Tom?....Waiiit, does he think Bill loves/likes someone that isn't him? How silly can he be!!! Bill spends all his free time with Tom, not anyone else.
This is all a big misunderstanding!! *shakes head sadly at male stupidity* This was an exceptionally wonderful chapter! I am at the edge of my seat anxiously awaiting the next update! It shall be amazing, I'm sre. Speaking of sure, you didn't seem very adamant about there only being one more chappie. What can I do to convince you to make it longer?? Anything? *bats eyes*
Date: 11/11/11 09:22 pm Title: Chapter the third
*GAAAASP!!* Oh sweet, brave, little Bill. I hope he's okay! It better be Tom. I hope it is SO MUCH it isn't even funny.
WTH is wrong with Tom?....Waiiit, does he think Bill loves/likes someone that isn't him? How silly can he be!!! Bill spends all his free time with Tom, not anyone else.
This is all a big misunderstanding!! *shakes head sadly at male stupidity* This was an exceptionally wonderful chapter! I am at the edge of my seat anxiously awaiting the next update! It shall be amazing, I'm sre. Speaking of sure, you didn't seem very adamant about there only being one more chappie. What can I do to convince you to make it longer?? Anything? *bats eyes*
Date: 11/11/11 08:54 pm Title: Chapter the third
Oh, a cliffhanger! I wish Tom would've questioned Bill further about what he had said. I'm excited to see what happens next!
Date: 11/11/11 08:06 pm Title: Chapter the third
ohh, need the see the next chapter quick!
Date: 11/11/11 06:17 pm Title: Chapter the third
"I'm sorry," Tom spoke up -- Wait, sorry for what?
@ the end: It's Tom XD Or... I don't know *shrugs*
Date: 11/11/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter the third
Ha! I kindda knew you wouldn't be able to fit such an awesome story in just 3 shots! ^^ Can't wait to see where this is going! Loved the tension! The little misunderstanding between Bill and Tom broke my heart a little. T_T
Date: 11/11/11 05:22 pm Title: Chapter the third
Uh-oh, I really, really hope it's Tom who found Bill and not any of those other werewolves trying to move into Tom's territory. Although, on the other hand, I'm pretty sure Tom would not be happy if they dared try to hurt Bill and that might give him the adrenaline rush he needs to rid of them.
Regarding the first part of the chapter, I think the two of them might have confused what the other tried to say and now Tom thinks Bill loves someone else and Bill thinks Tom doesn't correspond his feelings. Silly, silly boys. *sighs*
Anyway, loving this sooooo much and I'm happy that there's going to be more (or at least one more) chapters. :D Thanks for the wonderful update!
Date: 11/06/11 06:40 pm Title: Chapter the second
I don't know why, but this is so beautiful and lovely. Something... something.... Perhaps it's that they are both outcasts, perhaps it is in their relationship, the shared affection. And I think you write werewolves wonderfully, very nicely combined qualities from both human and wolf. As you know it, you are a master of fairytales. :)
I have those Halloween pocket babies in front of me here and I lurk them as I read. :D
I hope to see the third chapter updated soon, but at the same tim,e I wish this would have been longer.
Date: 11/05/11 04:49 pm Title: Chapter the second
Nigthingale's Pocket Babies are really awesome. I'm so glad you are writing a Halloween story for them.
Aww.
I love Tom is this one. He's all shy and reserved. It's a good thing Bill is there to talk for the both of them.
I'm looking forward to what's next.
Date: 11/04/11 10:35 pm Title: Chapter the second
You could write a whole chapter of Bill snuggling to wold tom and I'd still love to read it.
Plus the pack wolves added to the suspense.
Date: 11/03/11 11:49 pm Title: Chapter the second
I loved this line: "He didn't know exactly when he dozed off. He did know he dreamed about Tom killing zombies for him."
Hope everything goes okay for both of them with that pack roaming around!
Date: 11/03/11 02:03 pm Title: Chapter the second
Omg I love this fic so much! Their relationship is so adorable... Love how Tom's house feels like ``theirs``, how they are completely gone for each other, how Tom is so protective of Bill... LOVE it! I can't wait for the last part =D
Date: 11/03/11 01:20 pm Title: Chapter the second
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH :D Aw, Bill. I'm so sure Tom loves you right back. This is the most lovely Halloween fic.
Date: 11/03/11 01:04 pm Title: Chapter the second
Aha! Of course it could never be that easy. ;_; Tom and Bill in a pinch! I need the next part like whoa. (I'm sorry for the stupid review. Rather brainless atm.)
Date: 11/03/11 01:03 pm Title: Chapter the first
*claps hands* Wolf Tom! CARRYING his little red riding hood on his back. Aww, this is straight from those delightful Nightingale illustrations.
Date: 11/03/11 12:41 pm Title: Chapter the second
yay! protective tomi!
Date: 11/03/11 09:51 am Title: Chapter the second
I hope Tom will be alright. Can't wait to read more =)
Date: 11/03/11 09:22 am Title: Chapter the second
oh my oh my oh my.....the first part was beautiful and i love the computer comparison. the second part was tooo scary. i dont wanna think about Tom or Bill dying, it just can't happen. *rushes off to read warnings*
Date: 11/03/11 07:55 am Title: Chapter the second
I was wondering if it would be all sunshine and daisies, but no! I'm sure Tom will keep Bill safe, and Bill will just continue being adorable and full of love