Date: 11/17/11 12:20 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
No this can't be the end i enjoyed this story...i feel like you left us at a cliffhanger. Please more if you are up for it. Besides that it was an awesome story!
Date: 11/17/11 01:11 am Title: Chapter the first
Baby Toms and Bills. Oh, god. *_*
Date: 11/16/11 11:54 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
Oh gosh Tom's gonna knock Bill up and they'll have little pups running around...is that why the werewolf pack leader mentioned that holiday or whatever? It's mating season isn't it?
Date: 11/16/11 10:00 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
Oooo I hope you continue with this story
Date: 11/16/11 09:57 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
wtf?aaaaaaaaawwwww! u had to leave on that note? *tear* sequel? ^^" pllllzzzzzzzz!!!! i likey the idea of puppies. *shake head vigourously* XD
Date: 11/16/11 08:26 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
I just adore the way you blend humor into such a hot lovemaking scene. It was an awesome first time for certain and I loved every single word. I loved the confrontation with the other pack and that their leader could see so clearly that they were mates. I really hope we get the half you teased us with on your a/n. It'd be awesome that they could somehow have pups. :) Thanks for the wonderful read, you made my week with it. I just can't stop smiling over the cuteness that was this story.
Date: 11/16/11 08:20 pm Title: Chapter the first
I've got chills! I was seriously sitting like a deer in headlights reading this. I LOVED IT. If you get inspiration to write anything else for this, PLEASE share it. Ahhh-mazinggg.
Date: 11/16/11 07:44 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
oh my oh my oh my!!! this was the perfect ending. i love that love is what saved them, it has such a deep meaning. and would there, could there be a sequel.....?
Date: 11/16/11 07:23 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
*-* Oh my word...I'd really need more of this awesomeness *-*
Date: 11/16/11 06:23 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
Ohhh how can you end it like that? So cruel.
But ohhhhhh I loved this so much, Bill's character was completely adorable and made me laugh so much throughout. And Tom was so sexy and wolfy and I can understand Bill falling so in love with him. This fic was so believable (har har) and I felt like it was really happening. I LOVED it, really I did (n_n)
I'm really hoping that question mark means a sequel will happen...
Thanks for writing, as always it was fab!
Date: 11/16/11 05:31 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
The End~?
I have an answer to your question mark that pertains to the last words of your story ;) hmm id been so happy if you were to continue this with the pups idea :) -is currently really anxious- Pwetty pwease with a cherry on top?
Date: 11/16/11 05:10 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
AFHSDIFHAIO!
I LOVE YOU ;~; I love your fics! I love your werewolf Tom and your shy, talkative Bill, and their relationship, and Bill's reluctance to admit how he feels, and Tom being all intense and quiet, and their hot sex, and guhhh! HIDOSAHFIO! I can't say anything else without bursting into internet tears, bb. ;~;
Date: 11/16/11 04:32 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
I've read this chapter 2 times today, just cause I think it's so beautiful. Their connection here is so powerful and they feel so right together! Love the scene in the woods with the other wolves and the mate thing... I adore how possessive they are (my mate, my Bill, our cabine!) Also, the emotions of their first time and the way you wrote it was so beautiful and perfect, and the fact that it was incredibly sexy was a very nice bonus!
I'm intrigued too... what did Tom mean when he said that they don't have pups yet?? lol! I would be more than happy to read a sequel to this if you ever decide to write one. This universe is amazing and I'm very attached to the characters. Fantastic job!
Ps: This line is amazing: ``He wanted to latch onto Tom and hold him until even death couldn't take either of them away from each other, ever.``
Date: 11/16/11 02:57 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
Aaw no you can't just stop it there *whines*
Anyways, I looooved it! I Can totally see the inspiration from Nightingale's pocket babies :3
Date: 11/16/11 01:09 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
Zomg, I hope that's not the end!
Teehee, thinking of Bill pregnant with Tom's furry babies makes me giggle! (and I'm not usually one for mpreg)
LOVED this!
XD
Date: 11/16/11 12:50 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
loved loved LOVED this!!! so what did tom mean, hmmmm?
Date: 11/16/11 12:45 pm Title: Chapter the fourth
Perfect ending of the perfect story...
Date: 11/16/11 11:39 am Title: Chapter the first
I loved it plz more they should have pups really
Date: 11/16/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter the fourth
hahaha 'pups yet'
That's wonderful. I'd love to see more of this. Maybe Bill being all haus wife to Tom?
Date: 11/16/11 08:18 am Title: Chapter the fourth
sequel?? dood. my ipod decided to play hunde on the smut part. XD
I really loved this! Thanks for sharing it with us!