Date: 11/30/11 10:42 pm Title: Unmarriage
OMG, another ridiculously cute fic!!!! Awwww... I love them falling asleep together, little kisses. So cute. This should be a series, keep writing more for this universe. :)
PS- "unmarried" is a great word. lol.
Author's Response: Hahaha, yes "unmarried" is very childlike xD I'm happy that you loved it, I wasn't sure if this was any good :3
Date: 11/20/11 09:47 pm Title: Unmarriage
Awesome cute. You should make a story when they're teens and start dating girls
Author's Response: I'm not planning on them dating any girls :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/11/11 07:28 pm Title: Unmarriage
I loved this. It was sad but sooooo cute. You should definitely keep adding to this series like each story they get older until you catch up to present day.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm planning on writing several fics in this universe, so hopefully I'll think of some plots relating to present day :)
Date: 11/03/11 03:49 pm Title: Unmarriage
The idea of proudly married little twins is just so adorable. It feels so obvious to them; to be together and married to someone they love.
With this one you also brought the other, darker side of relationships there and I felt really sorry for the boys. It's just really hard to deal with such things at young age.It was really heartbreaking.
All in all, I really enjoy the way you make the twins travel through understanding of how love works in this world. Nice. :)
Author's Response: Alkgjldkjg thank you! I really appreciate the feedback :)
Date: 11/02/11 03:13 pm Title: Unmarriage
This was just as good as the first story! I really enjoy little Bill and Tom and would love to see more of these stories. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, dear! I love Bill and Tom together too, hehe xD I'm working on writing more now :)
Date: 11/01/11 08:33 pm Title: Unmarriage
Aw thats so sad :(
But the ending was wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed writing the whole thing, and I'm glad that you liked it :3
Date: 11/01/11 10:14 am Title: Unmarriage
Oh that's adorable! I can't decide which one i like more this one or the first! Thank you so much for such an amazing fluffalicious story
Author's Response: Danke, my dear! I'm thrilled that you liked both stories; I wasn't sure if the sequel would work out! Thanks for the love :3
Date: 11/01/11 08:21 am Title: Unmarriage
That was SO adorable! I have to say that the idea of doing a series about their life together is one of the best I've hear in a while. This is one of my favorite thing, reading about the twins growing up together and in love =P I love how seriously they take their wedding here, Bill thinking of Tom as his husband and how they sleep together since their wedding! I absolutely adore your twins and can't wait to read more about them!
Author's Response: As;ldfkjsdkfjfsd really?!?! Oh my goodness, you've made my LIFE :'3 I'm soooo happy that you enjoyed it, and I promise I'll come up with some more ideas... please let me know if you have any; I'll write a fic based on a collection of reviewer's ideas :DrnrnI'm happy it's a favorite, I had no idea that my idea would get this much love! Thank you thank you thank you! :-*
Date: 11/01/11 01:54 am Title: Unmarriage
Another cute one! I would love to see more stories as the twins get older and older XD
Author's Response: I'm planning on expanding the series with several more fics :D Let me know if you have any ideas! Danke :3
Date: 11/01/11 01:27 am Title: Unmarriage
This set of one shots reminds me of when I was little and I found an animal and ask "please, can I keep it"? That's how I feel about these! Thank you for this addition, it was incredibly sweet!
Author's Response: Awww, I'm all flattered and bushing now :3 You can keep it darling, I write for my reader's enjoyment! So happy you loved it <3 :-*
Date: 10/31/11 11:57 pm Title: Unmarriage
I think this was just as good as the other one. It was just different.
Wonderful work. I really like how you wrote the boys. Seven is such a tough age. I never quite know how to treat seven year olds, cuz they're right in the middle. Not really little kids any more, but not big kids either, know what I mean? And I imagine writing that age would be tough too. Congrats on a job well done. I am looking orward to seeing what ever else you give us in this universe!
Author's Response: I I appreciate your opinion, dearie! I'm glad that you liked this one :3rnrnI agree, seven is a tough age. Being almost-but-not-quite a big kid is difficult, because people often are not sure how to take them seriously. Writing the seven-year-old twins was a challenge, but I learned a bit about character construction! I just hope it payed off :)rnrnThank you!
Date: 10/31/11 10:58 pm Title: Unmarriage
*noms cupcake* these two are just too frickin adorable!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm loving getting to write their characters :3 Enjoy the cupcake ;)
Date: 10/31/11 09:11 pm Title: Unmarriage
Aaaawwww! This is beyond perfect! I love it! I could really feel their innocence and it's just... Ugh. I don't know what to say. This is amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very proud that you liked it :3 Thanks for the review <3