Date: 02/03/12 03:57 pm Title: Gold Eyes
i love this!!! it totally reminds me of twilight which i love as well..please please make this a story!! (btw its me Denise we talk on FB and the TH chat :D)
Author's Response: Oh thanks so much! I lost the inspiration for this story though, sadly. And it was just meant to have two chapters anyways. Perhaps maybe next Halloween I'll post the last chapter if I get inspired again. Who knows though haha.
Date: 10/30/11 07:47 pm Title: Gold Eyes
OHHHHHHHHHHHH.....YOU SHOULD CONTINUOUE THIS STORY,MAXIMUM 15 OR 20 CHAPTERS :)
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT.
I CANT WAIT FOR MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE :)
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON :)
OFCOURCE I AM EXCITED FOR PART TWO:)
Author's Response: Hahahaha. As I said, after I finish my other stories that I'm working on I might continue this one. I really don't know yet for sure though. Thank you for your review. =]
Date: 10/30/11 06:59 pm Title: Gold Eyes
I would love this say that this was a great story, but it reminded me so much of Twilight. It would've been great if you made it a little bit more of an original story. And, I'm not trying to be mean, I just thought I should let you know about that :)
Other than that, you mostly had great grammar.
And I'm gonna be a witch :)
Author's Response: Not going to lie, that's where I got the idea for this story x]. But you just inspired me to change the ending it's not completely like Twilight. And being a witch for Halloween is awesome; I think I was a witch three years in a row or something. Thank you for reviewing. =]