This sounds like a pretty good story to me. I'm actually hooked already :) I can't wait to read more, so hopefully you'll update soon.

Also, you had a few grammar mistakes here and there; just thought I should let you know about that :)

Anyways, beautiful story. Please update soon ^.^

Author's Response: I am really glad you liked it, I will ty to update as soon as possible :)rnrnI was sure there was gonna be some mistakes, I am not a native speaker, unfortunately, but I'll try to improve myself. :)