Date: 10/29/11 08:43 am Title: { two }
Ooh. I feel so sorry for them! Bill must be so confused, and Tom even more. But I love how you wrote Tom's side as well, with how he's feeling Bill's looks and touches. I hope they get this sorted and find a new way to be happy :) I'd be interested to know if they've had any feelings before this, if Tom's accident is only revealing things.
Author's Response: Yes, these poor confused boys! Writing both POVs was such a necessity for this story. Let's hold onto our hearts and keep our hops up for them. ;) We'll see, we'll see...
Date: 10/29/11 07:48 am Title: { two }
This is so heartbreaking. I...this is amazing and I cannot wait for the next chapter. I cannot wait for Bill's point of view about the kiss (if we get it).
Author's Response: Thank you and I'm sorry! Hold onto your heart as we keep going! :) I'm really glad this is so powerful for you.
Date: 10/29/11 07:38 am Title: { one }
THIS IS SO GOOD. The way you wrote the scene with Bill's panic attack was amazing. I feel like this could be a movie in theaters and I'm only done with the first chapter. I can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I definitely wanted that scene to be very vivid. I'm really pleased it's gotten you so strongly, and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 10/29/11 06:35 am Title: { two }
I'm sorry I didn't review the first one. The truth is that it made me cry way too much because I couldn't help but feel everything Bill felt and I just fell apart. >.>
I hesitated reading this one, because I was afraid it'd give me the same reaction and I know this deserves more but...
This is tugging at my heart and it hurts so damn much!
However, you know that I'll still read because I just know that you won't give me a super sad ending, but damn if you won't put me through the ringer over before it gets there though.
But that's why I love your writing and something I strive to do on my own. What can I say, you make me want to be better. I love you Tay. ♥
Author's Response: It's okay, I understand. You get so emotionally involved and I am so flattered and happy that it makes you feel so strongly for them!
Hold onto your heart, then, it is going to get so much more intense! ;_;
Thank you, it feels good to have your trust. I really appreciate those compliments on every level. Thank you so much, dear.
Date: 10/29/11 06:30 am Title: { two }
I love this!!! Oh my god, I can just imagine how Bill felt when Tom kissed him, like the earth dropped beneath his feet for the second time. Being a twin is his whole identity, and Tom doesn't even remember that. So, so emotional and beautiful and amazing. And Tom, just KNOWING he belonged with Bill and loved him, the way you described it, like their whole world is each other... That's the way I always imagined it, twincest aside. SO gorgeous and heart breaking, and it's only the second chapter. I just can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Oh yes, for sure it was that kind of moment. It's hard to make a twin forget their twin! I hope this doesn't make me a horrible person! But yes, their whole world is each other...and to Tom this only makes sense. Thanks and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 10/29/11 05:39 am Title: { two }
oooh, very full chapter, so much happened, emotionally. i totally felt all that, from tom's POV and bill's reaction...really rough, but tom's determined...what can bill do...i wonder. it's a little heartbreaking to imagine bill's reaction, and just his face, if tom were to forget they were twins. more than a little, really...
Author's Response: Yes, I think these are going to be quite jam-packed in that sense for a bit. :) Thank you! :D I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hope you enjoy what's to come...
Date: 10/29/11 05:24 am Title: { two }
This is a grate addition. I love the wake up scene. And I feel so bad for both of them. They each aren't getting what They need and want. I hope It all turns out ok.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Poor boys, you are so right; they aren't getting what they need. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 10/29/11 04:19 am Title: { two }
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
an i hope that bill is not made at tom for that!
i hope that they stay together!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad you're excited for more!
Date: 10/29/11 03:19 am Title: { two }
i love it!!!! danke for the update!! :)) <3 <3
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 10/29/11 02:54 am Title: { two }
Loved it XD
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 10/29/11 01:57 am Title: { two }
OMG are you trying to kill me? I was holding my breath AGAIN! I love love love that Tom is confused and thinks they are together, more than twins. I am confused as to whether or not Tom knew they were twins but also thought they were together or if he just thought they were in love and a couple and not at all related. I can't wait until Monday. I think I might die. I am so excited by this story and how Bill is going to handle Tom's confusion which I think was just his true feelings that he kept hidden before. So good. Did I mention I loved it? Cause I totally did. haha.
Author's Response: There's going to be more than a few of those moments! ;) I'm glad it was a good twist for you guys! Keep breathing, we've got some turbulent times ahead...and we'll see if you're right soon. :D Thank you so much!
Date: 10/29/11 12:18 am Title: { two }
This is beautiful. I love how Tom is resolute in his belief that he and Bill are just meant to be. I eagerly await for a new chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh yes, Tom is completely convinced. More tonight, I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 10/28/11 11:54 pm Title: { two }
oh god this was entertaining to read. seeing it from Tom's pov made it so much sweeter. but argh, it's so conflicting! because i know it's a Bill/Tom story but Bill isnt making it feel like that yet...i want to hit him and comfort him at the same time. reality and fiction is clashing in my head, tying to confuse me i guess. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad! Yes, it's definitely going to be conflicting. :) I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 10/28/11 11:31 pm Title: { two }
yeah. totally gonna love this story.
Author's Response: That makes me so happy to hear! :D
Date: 10/28/11 11:29 pm Title: { two }
Omg I loooove where you're going with this plot!! This is exactly what I love about amnesia fics but way better cause it's from you so of course it's brilliant!
I adore the fact that Tom only remembers his Bill (love the possessive!), the way you describe his feelings are so deep and so intense, it's absolutely beautiful. I also love the fact that he only goes with his guts, not what society taught him... he can feel that they are meant to be together and since he doesn't remember the twin thing, he doesn't let rules or norms get in the way. This is not a very coherent review but I hope you can somehow understand the core of what I'm trying to say! Poor Bill must be so confuse, I'm looking forward to read about how he's gonna react to the whole thing. Same for Tom, he seems pretty convince that they are meant to be no matter what so that's gonna be interesting for sure! I'm in love with this story already.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're loving it!! Oh, it makes me really happy to hear that you think it's brilliant. ♥ Thank you thank you.
Tom definitely remembers HIS Bill. It's definitely letting him focus on Bill as a person, not just as his twin, you know? I definitely understand, I'm so pleased the story is evoking everything I hoped. :) Thank you so much! I hope you keep loving it~
Date: 10/28/11 10:34 pm Title: { two }
wow just wow more please, Im camping out for the next chapyter
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy to hear it! Hope you continue to enjoy and thanks for the review.
Date: 10/28/11 08:57 pm Title: { two }
Oh my goodness >.
Even though I'm obviously pro Bill/Tom in any setting, I felt bad and anxious on Bill's part at the end, there.
Always lovely to see an update from you.
Author's Response: Hee. ;)
Oh, I'm sorry for any anxiety! Let's hope Tom makes it better soon...
How lovely, I'm really happy you feel that way! :)
Date: 10/27/11 06:24 pm Title: { one }
I'm really, really happy to see you posting this. Tbh, I didn't pay too much attention when you spoke a lot about this in Twitter, because usually I'm suspicious about amnsia fics, but when I saw the summary and all, it got my 100% attention immediately.
I have a very weak spot for hurt Tom just as much as I have for darker themes and special twin bond. The first chapter was heart breaking in it's realistic touch and you described very well Bill's feelings. In situations like that you act in a weird way - both losing the touch, but at the same tim,e doing almost irrational, seemingly calm thing when brain fight to keep the hold of it.
Through the whole fic I thought of Bill's crash back in 2009 before EMA's. I guess this triggered also some personal memories in me.
I'm convinced that this will be something I like really much. And thank you for inserting this to "the real life" since it would have been easier to make this AU. I love it this way, it's important to me.
Oh, I just want to huggle the twins now. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad the way I've presented it overcame your suspicion of amnesia fics. ♥ I hope I don't disappoint you.
This story is very much a hurt/comfort fic! We're going to delve into quite a bit of angst. Bill was definitely struggling for control!
The crash will come into play, too. :) I couldn't avoid that parallel!
I had to make this one real life. I hope you continue to enjoy this! Those poor twins could definitely use some hugs. ♥
Date: 10/27/11 04:35 am Title: { one }
Oh god way to make it hurt. Guh. *stabs knife through chest* ;_____; This is gonna be a journey I can tell.
Author's Response: Nooo, not the knife! ...But, yes, a journey is a good way to put it. ;_; Thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 10/26/11 10:28 pm Title: { one }
great start, more please
Author's Response: Thank you! More is posted, and more to come!