Date: 11/04/11 12:17 am Title: { four }
Again you try to kill me. I thought we were becoming friends, why are you doing this to me?! Ok, enough dramatics from me. Poor conflicted Bill. Now he's had a taste but I don't know how he'll stop. I can't wait for Tom's memories to come back. Sunday can't come quick enough.
Author's Response: Awww, you know I've got to keep the suspense going! ;) Thank you, I'm so happy you're this into the story! *_*
Date: 11/03/11 11:54 pm Title: { four }
I predict... that he really DOES. And the "I don't" will be part of a larger, non-refusal sentence. Bill's desperation to be strong, and then finally giving in to what he's wanted so badly for so long, were both achingly sweet. Damn, you write a hot kiss!
Author's Response: Very, very good guess. ;) Thank you!
Date: 11/03/11 11:41 pm Title: { four }
So so so so close. Poor bill's heart is breaking but so is Tom's. It's everything they want and need but nothing that they should have. Poor boys.
Author's Response: SO close! That's exactly right, these poor boys. ;-;
Date: 11/03/11 10:57 pm Title: { four }
NGHHH BILL. Just. There was a breakthrough and...you know, I'm going to just hang on to the notion that Bill's going to continue that sentence and Tom's going to be pleasantly surprised. Yeah.
Author's Response: It seemed like they were getting somewhere, huh? ;D Good instincts, Mel! Hee.
Date: 11/03/11 10:25 pm Title: { four }
Oh, these poor, poor boys...I can only imagine how awful it must feel to be so conflicted like that...
Author's Response: They're in a difficult situation, poor boys. ;_;
Date: 11/03/11 09:47 pm Title: { four }
omg i loved this chapter right up until that last line! i just wanna hug tom!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry about the cliffhanger! I think Tom deserves Bill hugs. ;)
Date: 11/03/11 09:43 pm Title: { four }
Gaaaaah! You can't stop here, it's way too mean! Omg... Good thing Bill finally said to Tom what he was so worried about at least. My heart totally broke for him when he went on about how he is useless and can't even take care of Tom... and then my heart broke with Tom's with this last sentence... poor confused twins! I can't think of anything else to say right now, I will have to reread the chapter tomorrow for it to really sink in I think. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: It's an evil place to break off, I know! Sorry! It's good for them to talk things out, though. :) Thank you!
Date: 11/03/11 04:20 pm Title: { three }
So much heartaching in this chapter. I know I might observe this from a weird point of view, but the feeling of being lost, unfamiliar must be terrifying. It really breaks my heart to see the twins struggling to find the right way to respond to each other. It should never be like that.
I have to give lot of credit to you fpr bringing up referencies to their past. It is important to me. I assume you meant twins' house in Hamburg with that precribtion of home in Tom's mind? Both POV's are great, but I feel clearly closer to Tom's POV. You write amnesia very well eventhough I can't say myself how it feels. It's just overall sad - to be lost.
Author's Response: Their hearts are broken, it's a strange place for each of them to be! Yes, this kind of situation is so awful for twins. ;_;
I definitely meant the twins' house in Hamburg! Yeah, it seems like that should be part of the rediscovery, you know? And memories from longer ago would be easier for him to remember, strangely enough. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thank you so much!
Date: 11/03/11 07:50 am Title: { three }
Aaah I'm so desperately hooked on this. Much like the twins are for each other.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy you're hooked! ♥ Yes, twins forever. :)))
Date: 11/02/11 08:23 am Title: { three }
Leave me hanging on a moment will ya?! I'm in love with this story. Each update only makes me want more.
Author's Response: That's the plan ;D Thank you, I'm so glad you're loving it so much! <3
Date: 11/01/11 11:52 pm Title: { three }
oh gosh, this is so intense!!!! it really is, and i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're finding it to be intense!! :D Thank you, I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 11/01/11 11:51 pm Title: { three }
Mhm, Bill's so obvious, poor man.
I love that Bill said "check us out." :)
Of course Tom's not giving up. But man, the pizza delivery guy has some timing, doesn't he? xD
Author's Response: Hee! Don't tell BILL that! ;D
Oh yes, he totally thinks of them as a unit.
It's okay, Tom's persistence is stronger even than PIZZA.
Date: 11/01/11 11:04 pm Title: { two }
Hm, I think Tom's on to something, maybe voicing something they haven't allowed each other or themselves to say or admit. This chapter was so well-written, I could really feel how conflicted they were!
Author's Response: Hmm, you may be on the right track! ;D Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :D
Date: 11/01/11 10:40 pm Title: { three }
Yummy tension. I love stories like this. But that tension will be resolved, yes?
"Don't tell me you've forgotten all of our dogs, Tom Kaulitz!" AHAHAHAAA! sounds like 'You forgot about our KIDS!?'
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the tension! Oh, it's all part of the build-up.
Tom feels like the dogs are his kids, so it's pretty shocking!
Date: 11/01/11 06:33 pm Title: { three }
THis. is. SO. good.
I've read this chapter 2 times already and I must say that I'm completely in love with this fic. I really like how we get to see both sides, with parts writing from Bill's pov and other from Tom's. I think it's a really clever idea, especially with this kind of fic.
It was really interesting to know that Bill had feelings for Tom before. This was very powerful: ``For one heavenly instant, everything Bill wanted from life had been his to savor.`` It must have been so confusing for poor Bill, wanting to finally be that way with Tom but not wanting to take advantage of this confuse version of Tom... I really can't wait to know if Tom had these feelings before too and how he's gonna remember their ``previous`` relationship.
I love how persistent Tom is and I can't wait to see how he's gonna act to convince Bill that they should be together like they want to. Oh and I also enjoyed how Tom was able to tell that Bill wasn't being honest with him in the past... he's spot on since Bill has probably be hiding these feelings for a long time... anyways, is it Thursday yet?
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm so so happy you're in love with this fic. Oh yes, the story definitely had to be told from both points of view.
Bill had feelings but...he suppressed them, you know? ;) He wouldn't let himself think about them, he squished them way down. We shall see about Tom!
This is definitely a possessive, persistent Tom. Hee! It's not Thursday yet, but soon!
Date: 11/01/11 02:53 pm Title: { three }
I think Bill might be wrong about Tom. I think the amnesia might have brought forth the deep feelings he has for Bill, without any of the hang ups due to them being twins. I loved finding out that Bill is not as reticent as he might have appeared on the previous chapter, he's just sure that what Tom is feeling can't be what Bill's been feeling all along and who can blame him really. I'll be looking forward to more! This story is so good and I can't get enough. :D
Author's Response: It's a good theory...we shall see if you're right! ;) Thank you, I'm so happy you think it's good! ♥
Date: 11/01/11 12:33 pm Title: { three }
Hmmm...me thinks Bill isn't comfortable with how Tom is acting, can't blame him its kinda creepy.
Author's Response: It's uncomfortable definitely for Tom not to remember they're twins! We'll see what happens soon...
Date: 11/01/11 12:26 pm Title: { three }
Great chapter again! And I love persistent Tom ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, persistent Tom is definitely one of my favorites ;D
Date: 11/01/11 10:58 am Title: { two }
It's beautiful how Tom just realizes what they have. How he feels about them. It's like 'moral sense' has been stripped away from him, because society teaches that that's wrong, but he doesn't feel like that.
Am I making sense?
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Yes, you're exactly right. I'm really happy you've seen that so clearly! Thanks for your review. :D
Date: 11/01/11 09:59 am Title: { three }
I LOVE THIS. (In fact I love this so much that I had to rewrite that thing three times because of the typos - love knows no spelling.)
Author's Response: THANK YOU, I know there is REAL LOVE in you! ♥