Date: 11/08/11 12:44 am Title: { five }
I am so sure we are in for an angsty ride in the next chapters...
Author's Response: Lil' bit! XD
Date: 11/08/11 12:38 am Title: { five }
...O_o my brain is overloaded with satisfaction right now.
this is the most realistic/ detailed sex scene I've read here in a very long time, and I appreciate it.
i'm too overwhelmed to come up with much more than that right now. but i just had ot say that i really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Niiiiice. :3
Well, thank you! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it so much! *_*
I appreciate just that much, thank you. :)
Date: 11/08/11 12:33 am Title: { five }
Amazing chapter! XD
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/07/11 11:57 pm Title: { five }
I wonder if it will be an angsty ending or a warm fuzzy ending? Im kind of ok with either but on the fence as to which way it will go.
Author's Response: Hhmmm, we'll have to wait and see...hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 11/07/11 11:33 pm Title: { five }
sweet job I look forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you, there is more to come! :D
Date: 11/07/11 11:14 pm Title: { five }
OMG, I agree with Bill's statement there. Tom is possessive, for sure.
Author's Response: Little bit ;D Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
Date: 11/07/11 11:00 pm Title: { five }
Oh god, Tom is going to wake up memory rich and sticky and be all 'uh, wtf?' and Bill is going to freak out, but then everything is going to be kisses and okay again, but the next chapter is going to be an ANGST FEST, isn't it? D:
Author's Response: Would I be that mean? Omg. ...There will be an angst fest but I never promised precisely WHEN, did I. >_>
Date: 11/07/11 10:33 pm Title: { five }
that's it. i'm never writing again. this was fucking phenomenal and no words i ever type in the future could possibly measure up.
why do i think tom's gonna wake up from his post-coital slumber and suddenly remember everything?
Author's Response: Nooo, don't be silly, this is just total smut, it's not even that plotty -___-
Ummm...because that would be sadistic? Haha, what I have in store is much more drawn out. >_>
Date: 11/07/11 10:12 pm Title: { five }
damn I need a cigarette. WOW! That was...I'm speechless. That was so hot and sexy and I don't want to ruin it with words. Simply amazing.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm flattered by how many people mentioned the need to smoke, especially non-smokers! Thank you. ;D
Glad you enjoyed it so much! :)
Date: 11/07/11 09:41 pm Title: { five }
*_* That was so hot, like really really hot. But what I like the most is the emotional part of it, the way you wrote their feelings was just perfect and I especially liked the fact that we were able to see both perspective, going from Bill’s Pov to Tom’s. And as always, I adore a possessive Tom =P Now I can't wait to see how they are gonna react, what's gonna happen next... I have no idea and I like it that way. Thank you for this update, I can barely wait until Thursady!
Date: 11/07/11 03:48 pm Title: { four }
Gah! Bill! So much confusion and balancing between these two roles - brothers and lovers. I feel sad that Bill is so afraid of his feeling, but at the same time I understand it. Sometimes I'm even thinking that Tom is unreasonable. Yes, his feelings are real and right - without that cloud of shared past and relationship on their shoulders - but he puts quite lot pressure on Bill. He should understand Bill's side of this story, too. I'm sure the last scene will have an interesting turn in a next chapter, so I'll just wait impatiently.
Just out of curiosity, did you do lot of background study for this fic? I find your describtions of Tom's inner wondering very fascinating, all those small things like wandering around in a house trying to get a hold on every room or be confused of own personal taste & wthical choices. It's very interesting, slightly sad, but interesting.
Author's Response: It's so difficult for both of them! Bill is so worried that he'll give in...and Tom will hate him for it later. And Tom, of course, doesn't remember any reason not to go forward.
I didn't really do a lot of research; I'm familiar with the two types of amnesia and I did a little reading up on those before and during the writing process. But Tom's wandering and his thoughts - that's all my imagining. :) Thank you!
Date: 11/05/11 08:15 pm Title: { four }
I'm loving the story so far. I can really feel Bill's desperation.
I like flirty!Tom in here. He's so sweet and caring, though.
I'm looking forward to Monday's update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really happy you're enjoying both of them! Monday's update...definitely one to enjoy, I think. ;)
Date: 11/05/11 03:14 pm Title: { four }
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/04/11 10:53 pm Title: { four }
ooooooohhhhhhhhhh. you cant stop there........need more
Author's Response: There's definitely more to come. ;) Thank you!
Date: 11/04/11 06:28 pm Title: { four }
Oh noesssssssssssssss! *despair* I hope that Tom remembers so that Bill won't be so sad.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: It's a tough position for both of them! Thank you, I'm so glad you love it!
Date: 11/04/11 01:36 pm Title: { four }
huh? Bill? wtf was that for?! I am going to kill you!
O h Tom was so gentle in this story, I like it, :)
Author's Response: Bill is only thinking of Tom, here! ;) Thank you...Tom is very persistent!
Date: 11/04/11 12:56 pm Title: { four }
I love this story ! It's déjà vu but it's new at the same time. It's amazing. I adore Tom, and Bill too. Bill is about to be unable to resist, but he don't want to take advantage of Tom and I think it's all to his credit. And Tom, god, he look to be able to do everything to have Bill more than a twin, and I like it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you, I'm really happy you're enjoying the story so much. Bill is definitely thinking of Tom more than himself, and Tom...he's DEFINITELY thinking of Bill. ;) He is very persistent...
Date: 11/04/11 08:19 am Title: { four }
this was a nice chapter!
the last of the chapter!
is sad what bill said to him!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry it made you sad, but hope you enjoyed the next chapter! ;D
Date: 11/04/11 06:06 am Title: { four }
oh, no! I think Bill's not done with his statement...I hope. he obviously does want to, but then he doesn't want Tom to do anything he'll regret soooooo I don't really know what he'll say.
damn, Tom's determined. making everything sexual and meaningful. it's nice, especially given that Bill's been wanting this all along, only he's got a very good reason to resist, but I wonder how much long he'll be able to resist...
Author's Response: Mmmm, it's a good theory! It's a difficult place for Bill.
But yes, Tom is a very determined, persuasive young man. ;)
Date: 11/04/11 05:43 am Title: { four }
Ooooh! So poor Bill, doors to heaven are sort of open for him now and still, still he loves Tom so much he refuses to take advantage of him. But what Tom said was right; maybe now he's being finally honest about how he really feels, as he doesn't have any social hang-ups with the memory loss. Oh, these darlings, I'm so sorry for themfor all the heartache, but I hope they can solve everything. Lovely work, as always :)
Author's Response: Yeah, it's such a difficult place to be, offered everything you want but shouldn't have! Tom is very persistent though, hee. I'm so glad you're still enjoying this, thank you so much. :)