Date: 11/14/11 11:28 pm Title: { seven }
Is it hot in here or is it this story? Blanket, hoodie, slippers; def the story. I liked seeing a little bit of Tom's POV. I like how easy it is for them. They can fool around then tease and tickle and be close and still be brothers. I love the way it's all shy and flirty looks from Bill. I can't wait to see how things progress and if/when Tom's memory comes back. Great job as always.
Author's Response: Gosh, I hope it's the story. ;D Glad you enjoyed Tom's POV! Poor boys...they get this close, but there's still the axe hanging over the head.
Date: 11/14/11 09:22 pm Title: { seven }
"hi mom. guess what tomi and i just did!"
okay, maybe not. but thanks for all the smut!
Author's Response: Hahaha oh god -_- Glad you enjoyed it, thank YOU!
Date: 11/12/11 09:55 pm Title: { six }
Well I've read all the chapters in one go because this story is just amazing!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I hope you keep enjoying it. :D
Date: 11/12/11 07:38 pm Title: { five }
Woah. I think my brain just got plain fried. Damn, that was HOT! I LOVED the way you wrote Tom comning. It was insane. You are a smut master. :D
I'm glad that they end up making love and showing each other how they feel. They fit together perfectly. It should mean spmething.
Now, saving the next chapter for tomorrow :)
Author's Response: Nice. ;D I'm glad you thought it was so hot!
They definitely made love. :) And we shall see how it goes for them, really!
Hope you continue to enjoy! :)
Date: 11/12/11 03:09 am Title: { six }
i really liked this chapter!
it was so good!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! There's more to come. ;)
Date: 11/11/11 11:55 pm Title: { six }
-looks like a kicked puppy- were is the rest? It is so good, like all your work, can't wait to see were it goes ^_^
Author's Response: It's coming up! Thank you, I'm excited you're looking forward to more. :D
Date: 11/11/11 06:38 pm Title: { six }
Oh lord, that was amazingly intense! *fans self* I'd rather have a little more porn before the angst sets in, tbh, lolz. But I suppose this can't be ALL shut. Humm. ;P Can't wait for more! Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you thought so, thank you! ...and yes, I granted your wish with more porn, haha. Thank you and I will do my best to bring you more soon!
Date: 11/11/11 12:44 pm Title: { six }
yay for porn! now i shall settle in to wait for the angst.
Author's Response: It's coming! I swear! There's gonna be angst!
Date: 11/11/11 10:35 am Title: { six }
Really sexy couch lovin. I'm glad you included the part with the dogs. It was so cute and somehow, you write canines so adorably!
I think it's really great how you use the two bedroom doors as a symbol of Bill's (up until now) unattainable desires. I'm anticipating that Tom will regain his memory and be temporarily unwanting of the Bill love.
Oh, and even though it's gross and nobody ever wants to put it in their romantic, lovey-dovey stories, I'm so glad you include details over cleanup and such. Otherwise I'd be wondering thinks like, "Wait, he's putting his mouth where? After all the... ick?" So yeah, those unsavory details are good.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the couch loving - and the way I wrote the dogs in! ♥
Oh yes, we'll see how it goes for those two...
Oh yes, clean-up is totally essential! I could be even more forthright but our fandom seems to like things glossed over. >_>
Date: 11/11/11 08:56 am Title: { six }
UUMMM so the mighty angst is waiting, okay...
Author's Response: It is, I swear! There's gonna be angst!
Date: 11/11/11 08:45 am Title: { six }
can't wait for the angst, especially from you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll do my best!
Date: 11/11/11 08:06 am Title: { six }
Oh wow! What I get from this chapter is really how they are meant to be. They are so good together... I adore how Bill can finally be himself and get the kind of intimacy he wants. All the points he mentioned are so true... I never really thought about it but now I feel bad for Bill. The way he can't fell asleep with a lover, how he can't never give up control completely... I'm very glad he has Tom for all that now =P The way they know what the other needs without having to ask was also really great.
I'm worried for the angst but I have faith in them so I know they are gonna be alright in the end, right?
Ps: Reading porn on the bus surrounded by strangers is always a bit weird but there was no way I could wait until the end of my day to read this chapter! xD
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! It's tough for Bill to get all of this from Tom and be constantly fearing he's going to have it torn away. You know I always do my best to make things better! :)
Haha, I'm super happy to hear you just couldn't wait!
Date: 11/11/11 07:44 am Title: { six }
I like porn, but I really like angst. Bring it on. xD
Author's Response: I, um. I better pull out the angst soon, huh? >_>
Date: 11/11/11 07:33 am Title: { six }
I was about to ask you why you are so amazingly perfect at writing this, but then I saw that you had 86 stories on THF. I still don't really know how someone can be so amazing at writing sex scenes, but oh my god...it just feels irrelevant right now because this was just so hot. I can only hope to become as good at this as you one day.
Author's Response: Haha, it's less than that, but I do write an awful lot. Thank you! I'm really happy you thought it was so hot! :D
Date: 11/11/11 07:33 am Title: { six }
o.o Hot hot hot hot.
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you! :D
Date: 11/11/11 07:16 am Title: { six }
Holy shit!!! That was SO HAAAWWWTT *-*'
Author's Response: SO glad you enjoyed it ;D
Date: 11/11/11 06:45 am Title: { six }
Porn before angst is a really good idea! Even more when it was as good as yours.
Bill is just so addict to Tom and I'm so afraid by the next now.
Author's Response: It helps with what's to come. ;) Thank you! And, well, don't fear for them yet...
Date: 11/11/11 04:40 am Title: { six }
well, if there must be angst, then yes, I'll take a bit of porn first, thank you. rather ridiculously hot, again. i don't know what it is about these two that gets to me so much, maybe it's the fact that in the back of Bill's mind, he knows that Tom might either forget this ever happened, or be appalled that he let it happen when he remembers himself, so it gives a bit of an edge to it. can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: It's good, right? ;) Helps leaven it a bit. Oh yes, it makes things very difficult for poor Bill! I hope you enjoy what's to come.
Date: 11/11/11 04:15 am Title: { six }
Tom hasn't forgotten anything. He knows exactly what's going on, I reckon. He never forgot anything to begin with! He just wanted to fuck Bill all along haaaaaa. Well. That's my theory ;)
Author's Response: Oooh, interesting theory! >_> *zips lips*
Date: 11/11/11 02:17 am Title: { six }
I love porn, especially before angst. You always deliver so well.
"Why don't you hold me down and see what you can make me do?"
You nearly killed me with that line. *_*
Author's Response: I looooooooove that. :D It gives us a bit of a high before, well, ahem. >_> Thank you! I LOVE when Tom does that for Bill, so. ;D