Date: 11/17/11 11:08 pm Title: { seven }
Why can't it be forever and not just for tonight? Pretty please with my cherry on top?
Author's Response: We'll have to see how it goes for them! ;D
Date: 11/17/11 11:03 pm Title: { eight }
I like this change of pace for you. Your AU fics are adorable but I feel like your writing style comes out here more. I find myself paying attention to every word and I sort get the feeling that you're having a ton of fun writing this. Am I right? It comes through in your story :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I love to write RL-twins, for sure. These are the twins I fell in love with, after all. I want to do them justice! I did have fun writing this, thank you!
Date: 11/17/11 09:33 pm Title: { eight }
I'm totally cringing, but I know you wouldn't hurt the boys like that, right? ...RIGHT?
I love that word, detritus. Nooo, that's not all I focused on! I just like your word usage. ;)
Author's Response: LET'S HOPE I'M NOT THAT HEARTLESS. >_>
Thank you! I like that you like my word usage. ;D
Date: 11/17/11 07:22 pm Title: { seven }
Oh oh, Mama Simone breaking the moment...
Author's Response: I know, what a mood killer! ;D
Date: 11/17/11 06:38 pm Title: { seven }
Smut first: Tom "marking up his territory" is hotness, oh yes. :)
The jealousy, I get it. I wonder how jealous they actually are - also in RL: There must hav e been something, to show the fear of getting separated, not being special ones. And Tom's fear of meeting the reality, letting Bill to have a chance to hesitate...
It's always so easy as long as you don't think.
Author's Response: Omg yes, and Tom is apparently a marking kind of guy when it comes to Bill!
I wonder about that too sometimes.
That's a realistic way to look at it!
Date: 11/17/11 06:21 pm Title: { six }
Yes, pornm before angst suit me :D.
I liked the atmosphere in this chapter. It started from that lovely state when you are barely awake yet, nowhere to hurry. JUst aimlessly wondering, waking up and thinking. The love between the twins was - even with some hesitation - almost touchable. Rim job nai8led it. Just... You know I love to read twins & rim job, right? :P
I wonder how this will turn to angst, so I have to check the next chapter right away.
Author's Response: Good thing, because there's more porn... ;)
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed the mood. And oh yes, I love the twins and twins enjoying rim jobs, too. ;D Thanks!
The angst is coming, I promise!
Date: 11/17/11 02:13 am Title: { seven }
uh oh...well...can they try to sound somewhat normal over the phone? i mean, they do have the circumstance of amnesia they're dealing with...though that definitely won't make Bill feel any better about it :(
Author's Response: Yes, it's a good idea! ;D You guessed it totally. Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/16/11 09:54 am Title: { six }
"Bill opened the back door and plunked himself on his knees, letting the dogs surround him and bathe him in their unconditional love and tongue slobber." This gave me quite the mental image and then ... Wow! THAT was most definitely foreshadowing.
Author's Response: Haha! Yes, dogs do that. XD Glad you enjoyed the foreshadowing, ahem.
Date: 11/16/11 03:13 am Title: { seven }
*_* sexy story... especially on the part where Bill swallowed, beautiful...
Author's Response: Thank you! Hee, I'm glad you enjoyed that. ;D
Date: 11/16/11 01:09 am Title: { five }
Can't review. Still writhing and whimpering like the sick puppy that I am. ( it's a good thing :)
Author's Response: Hehe. ;) Glad to provide! ♥
Date: 11/16/11 12:05 am Title: { seven }
WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN?!
I'm really wondering what's going to be Tom's reaction when he gets his memory back :O
Author's Response: Just gonna have to read on, and find out! ;D Thank you for reading! <3
Date: 11/15/11 01:11 pm Title: { seven }
Uh oh! Hope mom doesn't freak out too much!(though of course she will!)
I'm glad the Tom remembers so many instinctual things about Bill. It'd be even more devastating if he knew absolutely nothing!
LOVED this, can't wait for more! (as usual!)
XD
Author's Response: Haha, well...she knows a little! We'll see how Tom spins it!
It's a good thing Tom is so attuned to Bill, that's for certain. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed and are looking forward to more!
Date: 11/15/11 12:03 pm Title: { seven }
Baaah, why had I not seen this story before, what's wrong with me.. Well, I just finished reading the first seven chapters in one sitting. Better late than never, right? :)
Tom + memory loss equal to some wonderfully scheming moments. The way he reasons the use of tank tops and his one track mind regarding Bill are definitely smile-inducing. And I have to say this again, the way you write things so that they manage to feel real is just great. The whole description of how Bill felt the accident, Tom's foggy mind in the hospital, they way he is instinctually drawn to Bill, Bill's understandable hesitation to give in to Tom's advances; all of it feels genuine. And that makes it so much more enjoyable to read.
So, all in all I'm already very smitten with this story. ♥ I'm hoping reality doesn't hit them too hard when it eventually does. Guess getting the phone call from their Mom is a start of that.
Author's Response: I'm glad you've seen it now! Wow, that's quite a sitting! ;)
Oh yes, Tom is definitely crafty. I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story! Thank you for being smitten and enjoying it so much, I appreciate it. :D And ohhh yes, they can't leave reality behind them...
Date: 11/15/11 08:15 am Title: { seven }
I looove how pieces of Tom's life kinda came back to him and I adore how everything he seems to know revolve around Bill. The jealousy he felt when he realize that Bill couldn't be this good if he hadn't practice in someone else was perfect. And I still really like possessive Tom =P I really enjoy reading about them, their interactions and the way they act around each other scream soulmate! xD
Bill seems SO happy to be able to have Tom like this, when he's not busy thinking about it and being sad that it could end any moment. Tom is always ready to comfort Bill and that's absolutely adorable. I can't wait to read about their conversation with their mother, I wonder how that's gonna go!
Author's Response: Bit by bit, it's coming back! And ohhhh yes, if it's one thing my Tom is good at, it's being possessive. ;D I'm glad you're enjoying their soulmate interactions!
Bill is happy, when he's letting himself go with it. Thank you for reading, you really keep my spirits up!
Date: 11/15/11 06:58 am Title: { three }
So good!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 11/15/11 06:32 am Title: { two }
Very exciting story. It's electric! Must read on. How do you spin so many sensational stories all at the same time? Thank you Tay! Love, love, love you.
Date: 11/15/11 04:29 am Title: { seven }
dun dun dun - munches on Gusti cookies- Great job on this chapter ^_^ I'll give you a Gusti cookie if you get the next chapter up soon ^_^
Author's Response: Mmm, Gusti-cookies. Sounds tasty! Thanks and I hope I earned that cookie! :D
Date: 11/15/11 01:00 am Title: { seven }
Well, first I get all happy with the smut, and all gooey with their bonding.... and then the last line was like a brick landing in the bottom of my stomach.
Author's Response: Eep! Well, you know, it's all fun and games until that erection pokes someone's eye out. >____> Or something.
Date: 11/15/11 12:48 am Title: { seven }
Loving it
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 11/14/11 11:40 pm Title: { seven }
Very good chapter XD
Author's Response: Thank you! :D