Date: 12/08/11 11:19 pm Title: { eleven }
O_O Uh oh. What is he figuring out? :/
Also, the dogs were weighing him down like a pair of butt-sniffing lead balloons?
OMG, woman! I think I actually snerked. xD
Author's Response: Only everything. >_>
Haha! Dogs are totally like that, I've walked enough to know.
Date: 12/08/11 10:09 pm Title: { eleven }
Oh i certainly enjoyed it XD
hahha
Author's Response: Woohoo! Thank you.
Date: 12/08/11 09:43 pm Title: { eleven }
Uh oh, that makes it sound like this may have been the last stop on the sexy train.
Author's Response: :X
Date: 12/08/11 09:37 pm Title: { eleven }
Gah, I've been waiting for -- and dreading -- the other shoe to drop. Oh no. Poor Bill. He so obviously wants Tom and wants this thing they have together, but he's so afraid to give in, knowing it can all come to an end in a moment. But you won't do that to us, will you? WILL YOU? /pleading
You just have such an incredibly lovely way of telling a story. I can't always put my finger on exactly what I love most about how you write, but in this story, I think it's the way you interlace this passionate, physical relationship with the very honesty of Tom's reactions and the need from Bill who's still trying to protect himself and keep from wanting too much. Your characters are so alive.
Tom still maintained he'd kept a grasp of what was most essential.
That line just resonates with me. This Tom knows what he wants -- and isn't afraid to go for it -- but what will happen now that he remembers.
P.S. Oh yeah, and the smut is super-burning hot, too! ~__^
Author's Response: That other shoe has come! Bill is definitely worked up and worried and all of that...he's been afraid to give in all along!
That is such a glowing compliment, I barely know what to say! *_* Thank you, so very much. ♥
The question is how MUCH Tom remembers, really... :D
Thank you, thank you!
Date: 12/08/11 09:35 pm Title: { eleven }
Uh oh looks like Tom is getting his memory back. .. And this chapter was soo good i loved reading through Tom's point of view and be able to see what he felt while bill was going through his break downs. Great job!
Author's Response: I think you're right! Thank you, I'm really pleased you enjoyed finding those things in the story. :D
Date: 12/08/11 09:22 pm Title: { eleven }
good lord, i think i need a cigarette! and i'm completely dying to know what tom's remembering!
Author's Response: Woohoo! Oh, you know...only everything...
Date: 12/05/11 10:06 pm Title: { ten }
Amazing! I adore it. You explain everything so perfectly, it's as if I'm there. And your sex scenes are fabulous, as always. I don't know how you do it.
I would leave a more detailed comment, but this cold is driving me crazy, so I'll simply leave a longer one the next time I catch up on reading it =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad it's so vivid for you. *_* I'm sorry about the cold, I hope you feel better soon. Thanks very much for reading! :)
Date: 12/04/11 06:30 pm Title: { ten }
I could do anal withj Tom... in every way *blurts out* :D
Okay, so.. uhmm... I really enjoyed this chapter. IOt had īlot of elements which I find good in fics. All the lazy, blurry time between sleeping anmd awakening, memories, images, the most naked from all the shields we have. That confusing drifting between remembering and not for Tom. The angst.
I wish Bill could let go, could trust on this one, but I think it's natural to question. Guilt is such a strong feeling. Even if Tom is being strong, cheerful, in love and happy, he seems to vulnerable too and it reflects to us as much as it does to Bill. It makes this beautiful, I think.
Author's Response: Lol! I'm sure a guy like Tom has done everything there is to do... >_>
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! For Tom I think it's getting there, it's just gradual, and Bill doesn't know how to act. It's making things difficult for him.
Bill definitely can't let go of his guilt. He cares too much and that causes problems for him. Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!
Date: 12/03/11 09:13 pm Title: { ten }
Oh god oh god, I'm just WAITING for the other shoe to drop. And it's going to break my heart. ;_;
Author's Response: It is ON ITS WAY, believe me. D: I mean. ...thank you? <3
Date: 12/03/11 07:35 pm Title: { ten }
I'm really late with those updates...but still reading it! You go, girl!
Author's Response: Thank you! As always, I'm glad you're reading! <3
Date: 11/29/11 10:21 pm Title: { ten }
goodness, i wish Bill would stop beating himself up every chance he gets. i know he's in a difficult position, but there's nothing he can do now except enjoy it. he'll have to deal with it when the time comes. he's so depressing. *pets Bill*
Author's Response: This is Bill, though! It's tough for him, for sure. :) Sorry he's depressing you! I am sure that Bill's really hard on himself, you know?
Date: 11/29/11 05:43 pm Title: { ten }
This just might be the last review I ever leave because the visual image of Tom listening to Bill's breathing bloody well killed me.
Author's Response: Aw ♥ No, you need to stick with these poor boys to the end! ;)
Date: 11/29/11 04:14 pm Title: { ten }
Oh they are so cute!
Bill's dream was crazy, but I don't think it's supposed to mean what he thinks it means. He IS worrying the hell out of himself probably over nothing!
LOVED this! Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! That sure was a crazy dream...Bill is the dramatic type, you know? He DOES worry. Thanks and there is more to come! :D
Date: 11/29/11 02:04 pm Title: { ten }
Awesome, awesome fic!!!
Even though I am praying for a happy ending I'll read it through no matter what ^^
Thanks for sharing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! We'll see if there's a happy ending in store for them...
Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 11/29/11 11:33 am Title: { ten }
How much does Tom actually remember, hmmm? It seems he might be remembering a lot more than he's letting on to. I also have a hunch he might have heard something Bill might have said while he thought Tom was sleeping, but that's just a thought. Just a thought. ;)
Author's Response: It's a good question! And we'll see if your thought is correct... ;D
Date: 11/28/11 11:41 pm Title: { one }
Ugh bill my creys for you :'(, why do I get the feeling that Tom is slowly but surely regaining his memory but is having the same scared feelings as bill and dosent want to admit it :/
Ps. I just wanted to let you know that I love you and your stories, I felt so sad when you were having doubts about how amazing this story is :( I just wanted to tweet you and tell you you're amazing but we don't really talk, but I'll tell you now YOU'RE AMAZING!! :p
Date: 11/28/11 11:15 pm Title: { ten }
I was going to wait for this to be finished before reading, but I couldn't resist any more. By the end of this latest chapter I'm starting to think that Tom does in fact remember, and, stricken by the same conflict of emotions as Bill, is keeping it quiet for now. Maybe he didn't at first, but somewhere along the way.
Very beautifully written, can't wait to see where this leads.
Author's Response: I'm glad it lured you in! A lot of people think Tom remembers...we'll see who's right! XD Thank you very much! It's all unfolding...
Date: 11/28/11 10:11 pm Title: { ten }
I'm starting to wonder what will happen when Tom regains his memory. Watching Bill fret about this is painful, heartbreaking! Selfishness in love is something inavoidable. Man, imagine (you already have/did/are) the stress on Bill for loving his brother!!! Man, this is heavy stuff, I think. Is it heavy for you to write?
Author's Response: We shall see, soon enough! Oh yes, Bill is terribly in love. Bill is extremely stressed out about it. I wanted it to come across as heavy (when it wasn't coming across as heavy porn -___-) but it wasn't too heavy for me to write, I don't think?
Date: 11/28/11 09:57 pm Title: { ten }
Poor Bill... I really like this chapter, even if I felt bad for him. The way he blames himself makes me sad but at the same time, I think he's so adorable. The way he was always wondering if Tom remembered is interesting. I really liked to read this from his perspective. It's so cool to see how his mind works and how he goes from feeling so happy to have Tom to feeling selfish and guilty for it. Love it! I'm so intrigued to see how Tom is going to remember. I just really really love this fic, the emotions and the deep bond between the twins is such a pleasure to read. Every update makes me so happy and I always look forward to them, so thank you!
You seem to be going through a tough time so I'm just going to hug you, okay? *hugs*
Author's Response: Aw, I know...poor Bill. ;_; He does take a lot on himself, he thinks very highly of himself but he's also very quick to think, dramatically, that he's the worst ever. I do see Bill having lots of quickly changing moods! Thanks for the lovely review, I enjoy seeing what you think and feel about the story. It makes ME happy every time you review!
Thank you for the hugs. *hugs in return*
Date: 11/28/11 09:56 pm Title: { ten }
i continue to be completely in love with this story!
Author's Response: That makes me very happy, thank you!