Date: 12/13/11 06:32 pm Title: { one }
I feel a little like I'm coming home when I read your fics, especially the chaptered one :) I love that I have several chapters to catch up on! In fact, I think I have nearly the whole thing to go I've left it so long. Tragic and frightening start but I'm so excited for the rest of it!
Date: 12/13/11 06:30 pm Title: { nine }
I come out of this fic like out of water, I forgot to breathe!
There is such rythm and flow, its so good that you NEED to have chapters, I get to catch my breath...
Author's Response: I'm pleased it was so powerful for you! Thank you, glad you needed the pause for breath. ;)
Date: 12/13/11 05:30 pm Title: { twelve }
O____O Poor poor Bill! Seriously, this is so cruel. He lost his lover, can't talk about it with anyone and needs to carry on with his relationship with Tom knowing what it feels like to have Tom as more than a brother. Ouf! Poor poor Bill... The way you wrote this chapter is absolutely fantastic. You can tell that this is not the ``same`` Tom... it's him but not really.... anyways, the way you wrote the transition is just great! I really can't wait to read the rest, this is just so interesting. Love love love this fic =D
Author's Response: Definitely poor Bill! That is the worst situation for him! And Tom...you're right, he's not the same as before. I'm glad you enjoyed the transition! Thank you for the lovely review and all the love you give to this fic!
Date: 12/13/11 05:26 pm Title: { eleven }
I'm most definitely enjoying the sexy train =P Their chemistry is just SO good! The way you're writing them is absolutely perfect and I love it. Tom taking care of Bill is awesome and I just really enjoy their dynamic in this fic.
Date: 12/13/11 05:26 pm Title: { eleven }
I'm most definitely enjoying the sexy train =P Their chemistry is just SO good! The way you're writing them is absolutely perfect and I love it. Tom taking care of Bill is awesome and I just really enjoy their dynamic in this fic.
Author's Response: As much as I am, I think. ;D Thank you! Their dynamic is something I always pay very close attention to, of course. Thanks for enjoying this story!
Date: 12/13/11 05:20 pm Title: { twelve }
I liked it, and it's very sad that Tom don't remember the lover part anymore, and I'm really curious how Tom will react when he finds out about it
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Of course it's sad for Tom to be that way. :( Everything has to come out sooner or later!
Date: 12/13/11 04:34 pm Title: { twelve }
Oh, ouch. Just ouch. Poor Bill was expecting the worst, and now he got it. Poor Tom, wondering what happened in the last few days. It just breaks my heart. I hope you're going to make it better? Please? Pretty please with naked Bill and Tom on top?
Author's Response: Ouch for certain! Of course I have to make it this bad...so that we can work on having them make it better. ;) And naked Bill and Tom are always the objective!
Date: 12/13/11 04:07 pm Title: { twelve }
I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER! thats all you need to know, now write! :D:D:D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Date: 12/13/11 03:41 pm Title: { twelve }
Tom woke up to this... man. He woke up to something being very wrong with Bill, and he doesn't know what! And poor Bill, oh my god. The loss he must feel is probably tremendous.
I know you were concerned about less reviews for all the sex chapters. Maybe I was one who didn't review all of them. But believe me, I loved them all. And I see now why you had so much sex and connection-forging, so that the heartbreak would be all the more stronger for Bill now.
This chapter was amazing with the twins' emotions. I think Tom will figure it out. I'm looking forward to the coming chapters very much! This is what I love! Emotional turmoil and heartbreak. Tom not remembering anything is a very simple solution, but it's really not so simple after all, huh!
Author's Response: He woke up to quite a difficult predicament! Confusing and very much a loss for both of them.
They got so very close, and it makes the loss that much sharper! I still think there was too much sex in the story, but that's kind of the problem when you're writing for someone else - if they want it a certain way you may, er, fail to edit yourself as you might normally.
I'm really pleased you thought it was amazing, thank you so much! Emotional turmoil for certain. And no, it's not that simple by a long shot, of course.
Date: 12/13/11 05:23 am Title: { twelve }
I had tears in my eyes through this. Poor boys, it's heart-breaking :( I knew it'd happen like this, I hope they'll get everything sorted.
Author's Response: Awww, I am sorry if it was heart-breaking for you! It was a harsh awakening for both of them.
Date: 12/13/11 02:41 am Title: { twelve }
Well, that's just heart breaking, isn't it? Tom can't barge in and continue to question Bill's distress and Bill can't go to Tom either and bring up this terrible topic to him.
If only Tom actually was in love with Bill, too, it would be easier, but he'd never in a million years guess that Bill was returning the feelings.
So... only solution is for Tom to actually remember what happened the last few days.
Oh what a thrill :)
Author's Response: It is rough for both of them! As for whether he's also in love...we shall see! Glad you enjoyed the cliffhanger, thank you!
Date: 12/13/11 01:51 am Title: { twelve }
Oh my god, amazing! I was waiting for the other shoe to drop, but this is beyond all my expectations! Does Tom really not remember anything? Poor Bill.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *_* Of course, it had to happen sooner or later, right?? Whether he remembers is certainly the question... Poor Bill for sure. ;_;
Date: 12/13/11 01:29 am Title: { twelve }
Oh... My... Goodness!! I hate cliffhangers!! Must update spoon! Gah I love your stories!!
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffhanger! ;D Thank you.
Date: 12/13/11 01:19 am Title: { twelve }
Wow. Just the awkwardness and hesitation between them, and Bill's heartbreak is so painful! It's so obvious that Bill doesn't even know how to touch Tom anymore or react to the smallest gestures, where likely before, he'd have that completely figured out from years of dealing with it. It hurts to see him like that, and Tom so confused. Such an amazingly written chapter!
Author's Response: It's really difficult for both of them! Yes, Bill's heart is broken and of course all of that confuses Tom even more... Thank you so much, I'm really happy you found it to be so. ♥
Date: 12/13/11 12:50 am Title: { twelve }
the angst is killing me!!!
Author's Response: Sorry about that! XD
Date: 12/13/11 12:17 am Title: { twelve }
I teared up like you wouldn't believe through this chapter. -sniffle- Wonderful job!
Author's Response: I'm glad it was so powerful for you - thank you!
Date: 12/12/11 11:55 pm Title: { twelve }
if you don't update really soon I will cry and then send threats
Author's Response: Aww! But of course I was planning on updating soon for you guys. ;)
Date: 12/12/11 11:43 pm Title: { twelve }
Woman are you trying to break my heart :( the sadness radiating off them is soo strong with Tom not knowing what he did and Bill just trying not to wear his emotions on his face so strongly
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry! It must happen, though. I'm glad the emotions came through so powerfully for you!
Date: 12/12/11 11:41 pm Title: { twelve }
I get shivers and chills when I react to a sad part in a fic, and they're just going up and down my arms right now.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much!
Date: 12/12/11 11:34 pm Title: { twelve }
This is an amazing addition to this story! I'm so glad Tom work up and doesn't remember anything that happened. And I am horrified that Tom doesn't remember anything. He needed to wake up but it's horrible for poor Bill that Tom doesn't remember anything. Horrible horrible awful awful!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D It's a bad situation for both of them...especially heartbreaking for Bill!