Date: 12/16/11 12:15 am Title: { seven }
Oh, this is so good I don't want to go to sleep, but I must. At least I have more to read tomorrow! So many things to love in this. :D
Date: 12/16/11 12:07 am Title: { thirteen }
Bill likes candy, which starts with a "c." And mice -- I mean, corn.
This was intense, really intense. They fight so fiercely; perhaps because they love so fiercely. It was sweet of Tom to pretend to forget, because he was doing what Bill wanted even though it was denying his own feelings.
Good thing they worked it through! It wasn't a discussion, but rather a screaming match. But they worked it through and now they can have make-up sex. Yay!
You write emotions and conflict so well. It's exemplary. :)
Author's Response: ...true! He DOES like candy! See, Bill didn't really think that through. ;)
It was definitely intense for both of them! Best be intense about it if you're engaging in something so serious as what they have between them. ♥ Totally a screaming match and you're right, it's time for the make-up sex, hehe.
Thank you!! *_* I am honored.
Date: 12/16/11 12:05 am Title: { six }
No angst! I'm perfectly happy with the angst, thank you very much! I was so surprised when Tom went down on Bill in this, that's my secret weakness. *swoon* I particularly like Tom's dialogue throughout this fic--your Tom is very sexy. ;)
Date: 12/15/11 11:27 pm Title: { five }
Whoa *needs cold shower* That was one of the hottest first time sex scenes I've ever read. I love the bit at the end about possessive Tom marking Bill a little bit. I'm going to have to read this again. :D
Date: 12/15/11 10:54 pm Title: { four }
Aaahh, my heart was just bursting with that kiss at the end. And all the flirting leading up to it was so yummy. *___*
Date: 12/15/11 10:45 pm Title: { thirteen }
I KNEW IT.
Well, I thought I knew it, and then you went and tricked me and I wasn't so sure, but then HE TOTALLY REMEMBERED. EVERYTHING. And oh my God, those kisses were the best thing in the whole wide world, not even kidding.
Oh, I love this so much.
Author's Response: Whoa! Sweet, you figured it out but I successfully confused you! I am happy about that. :D And the fact that you enjoyed their kisses. Thank YOU so much!
Date: 12/15/11 10:33 pm Title: { three }
Be persistent Tom! Bill can't hold out for long! :D
Date: 12/15/11 10:15 pm Title: { thirteen }
oh. my. GOD!!! he remembered the everything the whole time! sneaky tom! i loved the whole confrontation scene, then tom just saying fuck it and kissing him. definite passion there. excellent chapter!
Author's Response: THAT SNEAKY TOM! For sure. XD I'm glad you enjoyed the reveal, thank you!
Date: 12/15/11 09:51 pm Title: { thirteen }
Bro. I saw this had been updated, and I was sooooo anxious to figure out what happened next that I almost tripped over myself getting to my computer... and let me tell you , it was sooo worth it. I've read this twice through and it's just so wonderful! I'm glad Tom realized, but I'm even more glad that you made it your own, and had Tom hide the fact that he remembered everything. Truly masterful =]
Author's Response: I'm so, so happy that you think so! Really wonderful that you get to this point and feel it was well-handled. I knew that I wanted a twist for the story, but what kind of twist - that was the delicate part! I didn't want it to be too predictable, so I'm absolutely glowing you think it was done well. Thanks! :D
Date: 12/15/11 09:46 pm Title: { thirteen }
Perfect timing and realization on Tom's part so very believable! It's so believable I don't see how anyone could take fault with it. I think this was a perfect end to a really great story.
You have really bloomed as an author in the last year. I think your writing and plot lines have really taken the final steps from being a really good fanfiction author into being a "real" author.
Author's Response: I'm really pleased you think so! *_* Totally chuffed.
Thank you so, so much. I feel like I'm ready to take that step, too. I'm so happy to have earned such high praise.
Date: 12/15/11 09:36 pm Title: { two }
I love this! Why haven't I read this?! The idea of Tom waking and mistaking the intimacy between them has got me hooked. Eeep! Can't wait for more! *rushes onward*
Date: 12/15/11 09:33 pm Title: { thirteen }
I KNEW HE REMEMBERED!! Yay!
Author's Response: He did, all along. ;) Thank you!
Date: 12/15/11 09:27 pm Title: { thirteen }
Aaw. It's sweet and angsty all in one! I love it. :D
Jane
Author's Response: Yes, we get a bit of both! Glad you enjoyed it, thank you!
Date: 12/15/11 09:26 pm Title: { thirteen }
I really liked this chapter, and I appreciate the speedy update. I thought everything fit together well, the emotions were appropriately handeled and the out come exactly what I wanted :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it, thank you! Yes, everything came out as it ought to. :D Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/15/11 09:12 pm Title: { thirteen }
you fixed it very nicely Loved it
Author's Response: Glad you think so. :D Thank you.
Date: 12/15/11 08:52 pm Title: { thirteen }
Sometimes having an argument is the best thing XD It lets everything out.
Author's Response: Agreed! Thanks. XD
Date: 12/15/11 01:32 pm Title: { twelve }
this was a good chapter!
i am happy that tom got his memory back!
but i am sad about bill!
i hope tom remembers sometning!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's good Tom got his memory back, but bad that it has to affect Bill so badly...thank you for reading!
Date: 12/15/11 10:35 am Title: { twelve }
ohh it breaks my heart! This was the most beautifully written passage, completely heartfelt, so many emotions poured right into it! Gosh this was gorgoeus and tragic, I want good thing for the twins always.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry! But I can't help but be pleased that you thought it was gorgeous, as well. :) I want good things for them too, of course! Sometimes things have to get bad before they can get better, though...
Date: 12/15/11 10:09 am Title: { eleven }
I have never been more grateful for a lunchbreak!! This is so magnificent, oh so magnificent. I'm so curious as to what Tom's off to find, his guitar maybe? More photos or something? Ah man you write such gorgeousness!
Author's Response: His guitar, of course! Excellent guess. Thank you so very much!
Date: 12/15/11 08:39 am Title: { twelve }
Oh dear, poor Bill. It seems the knowledge that Tom might not remember the time in between his accident and the moment he gets his memory back hadn't quite sinked in. Guess it has now. Back to reality it is then. Although, since Tom is already wondering what's wrong, I'm counting on him to figure it out if Bill keeps trying to avoid him.
Author's Response: Yes, very much poor Bill! Back to reality but things have changed...so it's very difficult for each of them!