Date: 12/21/11 12:29 am Title: { fourteen }
nice chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Really glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 12/20/11 11:46 pm Title: { fourteen }
very good
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/20/11 10:28 pm Title: { fourteen }
Heee! You know, their dialogue is priceless. You do such a great job of brotherly and sexy all at once, and I think that's pretty difficult to do. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy their dialogue! XD I definitely have fun with it. And I am so glad to hear it comes across that way, because that's definitely what I strive for! Thank you. :D
Date: 12/20/11 09:41 pm Title: { fourteen }
I love that they're growing more comfortable to this, to being in love while both in their right minds. I love that you mentioned how loud Tom's voice is. He IS loud. The line at the end was great! What's mine is yours and what's yours is mine. That made me grin--that's so Bill! This was a lovely chapter full of increasing love and sweetness, like when Tom kissed Bill's neck. So many lovely moments! :)
Author's Response: They are definitely settling into love together. :) This chapter felt like a breath of air after all the stress and tension so I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for enjoying this. ♥
Date: 12/20/11 09:36 pm Title: { fourteen }
Awww! Twins kisses! It’s so cute how they kissed all night until they couldn’t stay awake. And omg this chapter was full of married twins! I loved it, especially after all the twins we got with the app. It just fits and I really enjoyed this kind of twins. They are so many good lines from Tom in this chapter... like when he said that there’s only one option, them being together... so cute! Poor Bill is still uncertain but Tom is good at reassuring him =P I love everything about this chapter and story =) Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Yay for twin kisses! Isn't it just the sweetest? Yes, such lovely married twins. ;) I'm really happy you enjoyed this chapter, thanks so much for reading!
Date: 12/20/11 09:27 pm Title: { thirteen }
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
-deep breath-
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm crying, tears, huge smiles, literally bouncing with happiness. And only two people's writing can make me do this and the other makes money from her writing. You should too. You could be a millionaire just from me.
I don't have words. Adjectives like amazing or incredible or wonderful are not enough to describe this story.
It's beautiful. You write it perfectly.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you for the squee! I'm so incredibly happy this made you so happy. *_* Many, many thanks - I can't say it enough! I appreciate such a glowing review.
Date: 12/20/11 09:25 pm Title: { fourteen }
loooooove it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 12/20/11 09:23 pm Title: { fourteen }
Ah, loved this chapter, with a little taste of how everyday life will be different now that things have changed. I love their conversation while walking the dogs, especially making David get their groceries. I can't wait to see how you wrap this up! Maybe by fulfilling Tom's promise of "food soon, sex later"? Please?
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I thought they deserved a bit of domesticity here. ;) Glad you enjoyed it! ...and of course they're going to enjoy Tom's promise.
Date: 12/19/11 06:45 am Title: { thirteen }
Great chapter. When Bill thought Tom couldn't remember, he was lying to Tom the whole time. Tom is a true hero in this story. He cuts Bill a shitload of slack. Wish we all had lovers that cared this much.
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh yes, it was difficult for both of them. But, they found something worth fighting for! Good for them, right? ♥
Date: 12/18/11 11:02 pm Title: { twelve }
They really need to talk about this. Maybe Tom will pick up the clues and figure it out and somehow get the truth from Bill. I think Bill's greatest fear is that if Tom finds out he will reject Bill and that is something he could not bare. I hope Tom finds a way to reassure and comfort Bill so that they can still be together.
Author's Response: Yes, I agree! They definitely need to talk about it. ;)
Date: 12/18/11 03:20 pm Title: { thirteen }
Woah, so many shifts in emotions, this was like a rollercoaster ride compared to the heavy feeling of the previous one. Really emotionally charged again.
I must say that the longer this fic has been going on, the more... idk... complex it has become what comes to emotions. I can't explain it, but it has deepened on its way and I really like it. More tones of gray instead of black and white.
I'm sop happy for the boys, They can make it work. :)
Author's Response: Yes, definitely a rollercoaster! Emotions all over the place. I'm really happy that you find this to be complex, and gray rather than black and white! It's a hard choice they've made...but the right one for them. :) Thank you!
Date: 12/18/11 02:53 pm Title: { twelve }
Oh... My heart aches. This chapter was emotionally really challenging. My God, I knew that Tom went to play a guitar, but how it turned out to be - I never expected. A slap against the face.
The bittersweetness and pain, it's was there to touch through the whole chapter. Finding, losing, coming, going. Letting go. Damnit, I'm bit devastated right now. So powerfully written chapter. Insanely good and painful.
Letting go is the saddest thing. :-/
Author's Response: It was so difficult for both of them! I'm sorry to devastate you, but also glad because it was so vivid for you. Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/18/11 02:24 pm Title: { eleven }
I'm really, really sorry I haven't been here to read this fic. I had so much to catch up and... Well, I finally made it this far.
Idk what to say about this that I haven't said already. The smut was really hot and the whole chapter was full of certain affectionate feeling that is hard to capture. I think that was most important: the feeling of belonging to this, together, even with all doubts.
The endiong, Gsus... I'm not sure /yet) if I'm guessing right, but I think I am. I gasped, moved in a weird way. I need to find out if I got it right...
Author's Response: That's okay, I understand! Life can overwhelm all of us from time to time.
I'm so so happy that you love all of those things about the story, it makes me really pleased. ♥ I wonder if you did get it right...I have to go look through the reviews to see if you let me know! ;)
Date: 12/18/11 02:15 pm Title: { thirteen }
YAYAYAYA! Omg what an intense chapter! The way you wrote their fight/dialog felt SO realistic and just wow, perfect. Love the twist, how Tom heard Bill talk and then act according to what he said, pretending not to remember their time together... it really proves how he cares about him, putting Bill's happiness before his own. And Bill did the exact same thing too. Exactly how I imagine the twin's relationship. Glad they were able to talk and sort it out! I'm just so happy right now and I can't wait for the next chapter as usual =D
Author's Response: Yes! I'm glad you found it to be intense and realistic. Of course Tom would try to give him what he wants, even in this! So, they find they both want the same thing, and they go on from here. I'm pleased to make you happy! :D Thank you.
Date: 12/18/11 09:50 am Title: { eleven }
OMG - That was too good if that is possible. I feel unworthy to be allowed to imagine such things. I think there is no turning back for them now. Nothing else could ever match what they have together.
Author's Response: "Too good" works for me! Hee, thank you. You make some very good points, we'll see how it works out for them...
Date: 12/18/11 08:50 am Title: { ten }
Poor Bill, he tortures himself with his own thoughts instead of basking in the glory of their relationship. I hope it all works out when Tom's memory comes back. In fact I'm almost certain that it will. :)
Author's Response: He is definitely torturing himself and not allowing himself to be happy! We'll see how it goes for him...
Date: 12/18/11 01:11 am Title: { thirteen }
FYREDANCER-SAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, I knew that either Tom-who-had-forgotten was going to persist until Bill told, or that Tom was faking and he'd show it somehow, and that would still incite the fight-until-they-both-realize-what-they-want. I loved this chapter, although there were certain parts where I wasn't sure what I was supposed to be feeling. Like, they'd be fighting, and then Tom would think something funny, and then they'd still be fighting. At the same time, the fighting was so intense that I was holding my breath for a good portion of this chapter. I like that they're going to figure something out, but at the same time, I'm wondering how on Earth they'll do that, considering the fact that they're breaking U.S. law by committing incest, which I'm pretty sure is a federal law. So I think I'd like to see how they put up with the public...Do they tell Jost? Do they keep it to themselves? Georg and Gustav must figure it out at some point, because they're together so often, and I suppose Jost would figure it out for the same reason...what about their parents??? I'd be very interested in the sequel, which would be based on either "how everyone found out" or "how we kept it secret" XD Very, very well done, and I shall continue to read every fic you have XD
Author's Response: Ahhh!!! I'm glad you found it to be intense! And, of course, they're going to keep things to themselves. Poor guys, they've taken a great burden upon themselves. I tend to think their answer is "how we kept it secret." ;) Thank you!
Date: 12/17/11 03:46 am Title: { thirteen }
aww i loved this
Author's Response: Yay, thank you!
Date: 12/17/11 02:39 am Title: { thirteen }
IT WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
donīt be nervous, it was really good, and made really happy to know that Tom didnīt forgot about what happened, I was so worried about it, and the sadness was killing me, becouse I thought Bill would never said it and he would die in pain sooner or later, specially if Tom would come back to his ladykiller form, thanks for the great story. =D
Author's Response: Yay, I'm so happy you think so! I was nervous, I thought the reveal happened too soon. I'm really glad you guys think otherwise. :) Thanks so much!
Date: 12/17/11 01:01 am Title: { thirteen }
this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad. :D