Date: 05/05/12 03:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Do we have to wait until next Halloween for the new chapter? ^^;
Date: 04/06/12 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wheres the next part?! :-(
Date: 01/18/12 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's both little disturbing and quite a lot hot when they react to each other like that. A certain animalistic, dream filling roughness does it. They may be more or less messed up with their heads, but... Maybe we all are? :)
Date: 01/15/12 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, ok donīt get mad ;D
Date: 01/15/12 02:50 am Title: Chapter 4
yummy
cant wait for the last chapter
bills weird LOL
Date: 01/14/12 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Man... that was hot, really hot. One of the best sex scenes Iīve ever read :O
Asexual... xDDDDDDD Why the fuck did they asked that!? xDDDDDDD How awkward! xDDD
Author's Response: Good Lord don't you start bringing that shit up again! I'm asexual don't you know? I don't like men or women, I'm just this emotionless robot.
Very glad you enjoyed it. I figured I owed you all a little something something after making you guys wait so long for an update. So a PWP chapter!
Date: 01/14/12 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
it's at 9 am I had just woke up and immediately turned on the laptop and checked my tracked stories, then I was giggling like a psycho.
it's a little bit surprising me when I found Bill was slightly like a creep, I was thinking 'would it possible if Bill is the rapist?' lol
Tom and Bill's mood fluctuation in this chapter made me suspicious.
and you know, the sex scene in the bottom lines was making me 'AWW YEAAAAAAA'
nice chapter
Date: 01/14/12 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is my favorite story on THF right now. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 01/14/12 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was kind of sweet and really sick. But thats what I love about your storys.
Author's Response: THANK YOU :) <3
Date: 11/29/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Woah.... Let me catch my breath first.
Oka, in all of the twisted, possibly disturbing way to love this was both insanely hot and beautiful. There's something unexplained satisfaction in letting loose the animalistic side in us and with that let our emotions run free, too. In love this beautifully, but undeniably somewhat... uhm... unhealty (?) there is something pure and stripped.
This was very, very powerful experience. The next chapter will be unbelievable. :)
Date: 11/26/11 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Here we go! :3
http://i659.photobucket.com/albums/uu316/karinbanners/ragebanner.png
I didn't know how Tom's scar was really supposed to look like, so I left it out. But except for that... I hope you like it! x3
Date: 11/26/11 11:19 am Title: Chapter 3
hmmm.... it is part 3 of 5 yeah? :D
Date: 11/26/11 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1
O.o oooh myyy.
I am glad I could help be a spot checker by telling you about this oops. Loved the chapter, and again you leave me with wiggles of anticipation.
Date: 11/25/11 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Your writing just keeps getting better and better...But i think you gave us too much clues about what is going to happen. I will be reading anyway :)
Author's Response: Oh please we all know what's going to happen. It's like watching a car crash. You know something bad it going to happen and yet you can't seem to stop watching. Dramatic irony.
Date: 11/25/11 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was...intense. Very dark. But in a delightful sort of way.
Date: 11/25/11 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just read the whole thing and I found it pretty good. It's sad and I really don't get half of the things happening there, but well, what do I know of bullying? :D
Anyway, I was just wondering... you seem to have no banner for the story. Would like one maybe? :)
Author's Response: Oh sure!.. I mean if you'd be fine with making one. I'll credit you and everything :)
Date: 11/25/11 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Uhm I noticed an error. They had sex down stairs on the living room floor but you have this line.
"Come on now. Come baby." Tom urged, thrusting forwards with such force that Bill was sent further up on the bed. The sheets scrapped painfully against the boy's back and Bill cried out, nails digging into Tom's forearms.
^^^^
That shouldn't be there yet.
Author's Response: Oops! I was writing two sex scenes at the same time when updating this. Thanks for pointing that out!
Date: 11/25/11 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to more
Date: 11/25/11 09:30 am Title: Chapter 3
OH MY GAWSH.... MORE CHAPTERS?!?!?! D':
Date: 10/30/11 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
It really breaks my heart to read such cruel bullying and I can only imagine (and... understand) the rage, the hate it could bring up. The way you wrote Bill and TYom in the end reminded me of how they were before TH. What a sight they made, exactly. :)
I also like the tension you're building between Bill and Tom and also sexual dimension in over-all situation, how big changes, traumas affect on people and affect also on their sexuality.