Date: 04/28/13 12:48 pm Title: Dial Tom For Help
It was perfect! Amazing! Please more!
Date: 12/07/11 12:11 am Title: Dial Tom For Help
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you must, must continue this soon!
loving it so far!
Their relationship is amazing <3
I've always wanted a big brother >:"3 blargh. anywayyy~ awesome story!
Update soon please~
xx
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it, I wasn't sure this was going to turn out okay... I've always wanted a big brother too :') Thanks for the review! <3
Date: 11/02/11 07:17 pm Title: Natalie
Awww! They are too cute together, so glad they're gonna spend the whole summer together! I feel bad for Bill for the Nathalie thing... it seem kinda unfair that he doesn't know about her after all this time. I can't hate her cause she seems so nice tho... Can't wait to see where you're gonna take this!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Natalie is nice. I feel bad for Bill too ;_; More to come :D
Date: 11/01/11 06:27 pm Title: Natalie
>_< Pomegranate juice. I hope Tom does something about Bill getting bullied. This new home and awesome big brother must be paradise to Bill! :D
Author's Response: I love pomegranate juice xD Yes, Bill's bullying is an issue, but you'll just have to see how the story unfolds.... *evil laugh* ;D
Date: 10/26/11 12:03 am Title: Tears and Tough Decisions
Tom's so loving ]; And Bill is so adorable!
Author's Response: Yes, I love a caring Tomi ;) I also like it when he gets possessive of Bill.... Maybe in the future, hehe :3 Awww, I'm glad that you think Bill is a cutie! I'm enjoying writing all of the characters, but so far he's one of my faves :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/25/11 12:14 am Title: Tears and Tough Decisions
For the sadness that was the first chapter, reading Bill dash about in excitement made me deliriously happy as well! I adore the happiness in this chapter, with the sad undertones still there. I'm honestly really pumped for what you have planned~ You write people really well. Your characters are really 3-d to me. Super job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I work very hard to make my characters as real as possible, and I'm glad that you think I've succeeded :D MUAH :-*
Date: 10/24/11 08:42 pm Title: Tears and Tough Decisions
Awww! Tom is so good to Bill, its absolutely adorable! I was hopping that Tom would suggest that bill comes live with him so Im really happy he did! That was another great chapter. I cant wait for them to live together, its gonna be interesting for sure! :) Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, sweetie! Hahaha yes, I'm having fun writing the next chapter ;) Cuteness and fluff, with a tinge of angst... DUN DUN DUN xD Glad you liked the chapter! :-*
Date: 10/23/11 12:06 am Title: Suffering For Other's Pain
:D
Author's Response: I'm going to assume you liked it...? Yes? Alright then :3 Thank you!
Date: 10/22/11 02:46 am Title: Suffering For Other's Pain
*tears welling in eyes* This story hits close to home. My parents don't get along, and when they do argue I want to die. I'd rather stop living then listen to people I love fight with each other. And I'm usually the happiest person you'll ever meet!
So this review is solemn, I guess. You did a super job portraying the emotional violence and its effect on the child. :( So sad. Tom was such a hero~ Wonder where you'll take this. It's so sad to read!!
p.s. Like Jumbie_22, I also don't like the name Billa, BUT SINCE IT'S YOU, WELL, I GUESS I'LL LET IT SLIDE ONLY CUZ YOU GIVE ME THE BLUE SKITTLES, and you know -- we're betrothed and all. :D This review wasn't so solemn after all! XD
Author's Response: Oh my! *runs to you and cuddles* Don't cry, honey :') I'm so sorry to hear about your parents! I've never been in a situation where my parents have fought, and so I can't relate too much.... But please feel cuddled <3 I can only imagine that it's devastating. I'm glad that you were happy with the chapter <3 I'll work on the next few chapters today and see if I can get one posted :3 Oh dear.... you don't like "Billa?" *sad face* I think it's super cute! I'll try to avoid using it too much....
Date: 10/21/11 10:56 pm Title: Suffering For Other's Pain
First, let me tell you how happy I was when I realized you were writing them as brothers, with Tom being the oldest. Not that I don't like them as twins, but I've read a few fics where they were brothers and really liked the idea. It brings a new dimension, new perspective on Bill and Tom's relationship and I think it's really interesting and original.
Poor Bill! At least Tom makes a fantastic older brother... so adorable how he stood up for him. I'm not a big fan of the nickname Billa but that's just my opinion, everything else in this fic is absolutely spot on and perfect so far.
I think you've got a great start here, you should definitely continue and I would be more than happy to read the rest of this fic! Really excited for this potential sequel too!
Author's Response: Oh my goodness... *runs to you and tackles you with hugs and kisses* You are just.... as;lfkajsdf;lkjsesj I love you :'D Thank you so very much for your feedback! I appreciate it so much! I'll go write the next chapter now just for you <3 I'm sorry you don't like the nickname Billa... I happen to love it :3 *blushes* I agree, Tom is an excellent older brother to Bill :3 I just love writing them are just brothers... and also as twins :D Thanks again for leaving such amazing comments and I'll promise I'll continue the story!