Date: 07/29/10 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is amazing, sad, but amazing!
It's scary how it fits perfectly to the song. Write more! (:
Date: 05/16/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I donīt know what to think. You write so good, itīs breathtaking, and Iīm so angry at that girl for shoothing Tom, but at the same time Iīm angry on Tom, for beeing an idiot and a jackass. I have only read a few song fics, and I havenīt really liked any of them. Itīs hard to get a song fic good, hell, itīs even hard to write a good fiction. You gotta have it, if you get my point. I must confess, this fiction was so good, and you managed to put the lyrics in so good(sorry if you donīt understand, engslih is only my second language) that I just had to look up the song, so... Thank you for a fantastic fiction, and a fantastic song!!
Author's Response: Omg, thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked it that much and yes, it is a fantastic song :)
Date: 12/09/09 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1
AWESOME!!
Poor Tomi though :[
but still very enjoyable to read, loved it!! good job :]
Author's Response: :) thank you very much.rnIt was sad doing that to him :(
Date: 11/05/09 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was good!
Great job! =]
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 03/23/09 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um.. why did she do it? I mean what could Tom do to her sister? What did he do?
Author's Response: I'm sorry I didn't explain this proparly but Tom had sex with her sister and then just threw her away like he does all the time. Most girls Tom has been with understand this but her sister didn't and was really badly hurt. How badly hurt she is (eg: suicide, depressed, lost of trust) is up to the reader's imagination. I hope that helps you understand a bit more.
Date: 11/05/08 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the song lyrics leading the song. But it needed more between the sisters, I didn't see the point as to why the sister killed Tom.
The sex scenes were good, not awesome, not enthralling but good.
And poo I hate it when authors kill the boys.
You did well dispite your admission that you don't normally do het.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I'll definatly keep that in mind.
Date: 07/30/08 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
what was that???
kill tommy??
why???omg
other than that it's a great story
:)
Author's Response: D= I know, sorry ^^'rnThanks for the review, glad you like the story
Date: 03/20/08 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1
this is good. really good. i love how you managed to weave the song and the story together so nicely, not many people can do it that way throughout the entire fic. :) i love reading this. especially the part when tom thinks that he'd do the same for bill. that bit just gets to me. :3 great story, ten stars straight out.
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you sooo much for that lovely review. I'm grinning now.rnI'm soooooo happy you liked the story so much and I'm honoured it got to yourn=D Thank you!! ^^
Date: 03/17/08 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1
realy good, moving, very emotional and just the right amount of smut.
Author's Response: thank you so much!!!! I delighted you like the story ^^
Date: 03/13/08 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was intense,great story.
Author's Response: thanks for the review =D. So glad u. Liked it!!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review =D. So glad u. Liked it!!!
Date: 03/04/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
i actually thought it was pretty good - a little bit unclear the first time through, but i read it again and it made sense.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!!!
Date: 02/29/08 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my.
sad. REALLY SAD.
who did she call when she got in? her brother?
it was good, i wasnt expecting it, really good twist.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and reading!!rnShe called her sister lol. Close... I probably didn't make it very obvious.rnThank you again!!! xoxo