Date: 10/22/11 11:40 pm Title: Of Loss and Withholding Breaths
Hehehe, those names. Mmmm, cinnamon rolls.
It's nice that Bill calls him Tom/Tomi :D
Sick Tom :'( Yeah, if you have that many people in the household who are sick, there's not much chance you'll escape unscathed. *However* -- and this could've happened with Tom, I suppose -- one time my mom and both my siblings got sick around the same time, and I just didn't. *shrug*
Noooo! Wow, I did not expect Bill to... be in that state for him.
When he was in the hospital... DX So difficult to read.
His mother... ;_;
@endnote: Wow... I did *not* know that. Now I'm all paranoid.
PS: Oh, and there were a coupla times when two paragraphs didn't have the one empty line between them.
PSS: What a moving chapter. I'm think I'll read it again.
Author's Response: Awww ;____; Oh, I guess I must have proofread to fast. D: Whoops, so sorry~~~~
Date: 10/22/11 10:57 pm Title: Of Loss and Withholding Breaths
Ice cream! Hooray! Hang on, before I comment on the entire chappie, I just wanna suggest that you put the entire flashback in italics. I got all confused when it went in and then out of the flashback XD Eh, just a thought.
Or, I don't know, maybe put [Flashback] at the beginning. Or do nothing XD
Author's Response: Ah really? XD ... :O
Date: 10/22/11 10:13 pm Title: Of Loss and Withholding Breaths
Wow, I think I might have catched an episode of Pushing Daisies now that I've read this chapter. So Tom can't touch Bill at all for fear he would die for good, so he got away for his friend's own good? Poor Tom that's an awful talent to have, especially if he thinks his mom died because of what he did. So sad. :( Still, I'm very intrigued over how it is going to play out and loving it.
And I'm eating ice-cream, too. A Vaca Negra (Coke Float), pretty yummy.
I'll be looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Yes, that is correct. >:
Mmmm coke float. :Q____ Thanks for reading lovely. ♥
Author's Response: Yes, that is correct. >:
Mmmm coke float. :Q____ Thanks for reading lovely. ♥
Date: 10/21/11 12:58 pm Title: Of Sweets and Other Curious Things
(reply) Come to think of it, I think he *is* going through a phase! XD Some people believe he is doing this because during September the twins were scheduled for filming for 'Die Räuber'. Kind of a coincidence that he also completely changed his appearance at the time, so I'm hoping it was just for that.
And I loved Ned too :D I had a puppy crush on Lee Pace.
Author's Response: I know Lee Pace is the cutest thing in this nerdy, geeky, sweetheart kind of way. I adored him! Oooh, see when I first read this reply, I went... WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!? See, I have been away from the internet for a long time and well, I don't keep a close eye on updates on TH that aren't music related these days. This though... this film thing is huge! I can't believe they might be in a film. O__O My rational side is like omg no =__=, but my secret fangirl side is all like, I CAN'TWAITTOSEETHEMINACTION! Shhhh~ Well I do hope your theory turns out to be correct, so when that film stuff is over and done with, he can return to the Bill we love and know ('cause god knows I miss him). I feel bad though I`ll stop talking so you don`t feel obligated to reply, haha. Poor you. >: ♥
Date: 10/21/11 12:55 pm Title: Of Sweets and Other Curious Things
I loved it!
emmm sorry for the silly review, i have a lack of ideas :/
Author's Response: Haha no worries, I'm just grateful you reviewed~ :D Thanks! Hope you enjoy the upcoming parts!
Date: 10/20/11 10:55 pm Title: Of Sweets and Other Curious Things
I've never seen Pushing Daisies, and know nothing about it...but this is a pretty awesome start. I can't wait to see more! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: Good, good, then anything that happens will be a bit more surprising. (This story has a lot of the elements of Pushing Daisies, but the story line is my own.) Thanks for reading, hope you'll enjoy the upcoming chapter! :)
Date: 10/20/11 06:09 pm Title: Of Sweets and Other Curious Things
Lol, woah dude. This is quite an off-the-wall fic. Well, I suppose it was inspired by an off-the-wall series XD
That Tom and his siblings are named numbers is... odd.
I'm really wondering what's up with him and Bill.
And woah, I wasn't quite expecting Ned's ability to be in here, hehe.
Eh, I don't hate Bill's new look (only mild distaste, actually), but I think it's perfectly alright to pretend he still has his beautiful black hair, lol. People are still doing that with Tom's dreads ;P
Author's Response: Ah yeah, it must suck being a number. D: Yus, Ned's ability is here, Tom is our sort-of Ned. :D Ned was like one of the only reasons I ever liked the series, he was just so sweet and goofy~~~ :D
Oh I really detest the look Bill has. For me, I preferred Tom's dreads, but the cornrows just don't bother me. Usually for me I describe their looks based on what age group I'm writing them in, for the most part unless I'm feeling defiant for some reason or other. I think I've agreed with myself to stop picturing Bill looking the way he is now, that's all, I'm just going to pretend he's going through a very bad phase LOL. Ah anyways, thanks so much for reading!! xx
Date: 10/20/11 01:51 pm Title: Of Sweets and Other Curious Things
Lmfao, of course I recognized Pushing Daisies on sight. *sigh* Used to adore that series.. Still do, in a way. Still so sad that it was ended :(
At the moment I'm doing something, but I'll come back in a bit to read the chappie properly *hug*
Author's Response: Oh, so good to see you Daissa! :D Oh yes, I mean I wasn't terribly into Pushing Daisies but man, they cancelled that show fast. Apparently that had to take in donations or summit in order to finish filming? D: Laaammmee. >: Can't wait for you to find time to read this though! Eee~ mua mua mua~
Date: 10/20/11 01:04 pm Title: Of Sweets and Other Curious Things
Ooooh, very intriguing. I can't wait to find out more about Tom, I didn't imagine he would have a 'talent' like that one and it shall be interesting to read more about it and find out why Bill thinks he chased Tom away.
I haven't really watched Pushing Daisies, so I have no clue what to expect, but I'm definitely interested in reading more (not that that is a surprise considering you're writing it). ;) I'm glad to see you back here and I can't wait to read more of this. *hugs*
Author's Response: Nyaaa Dusty! So good to see (well sorta see haha) you again! *jump-hugs* Oh yes, I've missed THF a lot. So much has happened in my life I really can't keep up. Glad to see you!!!
rnAh, I d'unno, I don't know if I'd reccomend Pushing Daisies, it's not all that brill, especially since it was cut short and cancelled before any real conclusions in the series could be made. Eh, but I'm sort'a happy you haven't seen it, it makes things a little more unexpected in the story here then~ :) Thank you for reading, and I'll update really soon. Muah~~~