Date: 11/23/11 03:58 am Title: Chapter 30
That was priceless, Andrej getting all possesive over his boyfriend and loved the bitchy response to that girl. They are both lovely together with each other and the baby. The sweetest thing ever. Yay! Now Andrej is back to his modelling, but I think it would have been even better if Tom was in the photos too. One big happy family. Well done for all that writing you did over the weekend, that's some going. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: You know as intelligent and level headed as he seems to be, Andrej has to have a catty side to succeed in a 'woman's profession with a penis and hold his own, lol.rnrnAnd yes! But Tom's a spoilsport!
Date: 11/23/11 12:32 am Title: Chapter 30
Ahaha yes andrej just likes 2 see tom suffer aha... figures models would be all over tom holding his baby but hes got andrej to hold them at bay
Author's Response: Lol I can see Andrej going "Bitch, I've got a size 11 that's headed for your ass in a minute"
Date: 11/22/11 09:40 am Title: Chapter 29
nawwwwwwwww >.< hehheheehe they 'rubbed each other off' lol!! love it!! aleast its SOMETHING as u said :) and wow Andrej is letting Tom see him naked eeeepp love it!! awwwww but he always picks on my baby Bill I mean 'long ass neck'? not true lol!!! but I loved this one ^.^
Author's Response: Dude it really is true. Bill has a giraffe neck, lol.
Date: 11/21/11 11:16 am Title: Chapter 29
For Chapters 28-29
Short review this time because I've been sick with a migraine all weekend so just catching up now. Loved both chapters and how you've handled the sex scenes, gradually building up to more and more intimacy. Great how Andrej is comfortable with Tom now seeing him naked and that Tom isn't freaked by Andrej's man bits or his scar. Rubbing off against each other on the couch...amazingly hot. Love, love, love Uncle Bill, so damned sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/20/11 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 29
Yeah, I can tell you're enjoying it! :) Well, I enjoyed it as well! :D :D
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 11/19/11 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 29
by being mean to them you mean holding the really hot scenes from us?
im just asking to be sure.
Author's Response: Lol, mean to the characters, lmao.
Date: 11/19/11 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 28
This is hilarious: "“He sways his hips more when he’s angry. It’s pretty hot,” he admitted and Georg burst out laughing at Tom’s tactics."
Love the playful lovin' going on between Andrej and Tom!
Author's Response: Lol he has a sweet hiney, that's for sure.
Date: 11/19/11 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 29
damn.. I can't wait for them to actually make love ^_^
Author's Response: Lol
Date: 11/19/11 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 29
Dammit, I really want another chapter now:D
Author's Response: Lol <3
Date: 11/19/11 11:55 am Title: Chapter 29
Ahaha its funny how andrej likes to tease nd then tom is left suffering aha but atleast he got sum action so he cant complain...
Author's Response: Lol, poor Tom, Andrej has too much fun, I think. He's not as shy as he acts, he just likes Tom's whiny frustration too much, lmao.
Date: 11/19/11 11:31 am Title: Chapter 28
Bill is a fucking cock-block -.-
Author's Response: Well, can you BLAME him?! I wouldn't want somebody defiling my clothes!!! lol.
Date: 11/19/11 05:08 am Title: Chapter 28
Let Tom and Andrej have sex already! Poor things are frustrated. LOL
Author's Response: Haha, but it's so much more fun to be evil :D
Date: 11/19/11 02:47 am Title: Chapter 28
Sweet Bill, all insults but true to his brother!
Author's Response: Lol, well what else can you expect? lol.
Date: 11/19/11 12:48 am Title: Chapter 28
Yea i wna loose weight 2 but im just so busy wit work.. im either workin or sleepin =/ nd on my days off i just stay home nd rest... i have been loosin sum weight cus im always walkn around but all my friends keep telln me not 2 loose weight cus im fine the way i am but idk i just wna loose a bit more u know =/ but yea they have 2 be on major diets to be models i dont think i can ever be a model specially those sizes =/
Author's Response: I'm meant to lose like... 70 lbs but fuck that, you know? Lol I can't imagine losing more than about 30. No way would I still be curvy 70lbs down and I like my curves.
Date: 11/18/11 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
I don't know if you ever thought about it, but, it would be a lot easier to just say Andrej is a Chimera with two distinct lines. Or DNA,because he was a fraternal twin and the zygotes meshed together. It's rare and it has happened before, but of course the males are normally, predominantly male and could be born with one tube and a uterus. But as I read this, I think this was the genetic mutation you may want ot use. To help give your story more logic, but hell you may have already done that.
Author's Response: The one I actually based it on was one called Persistent Müllerian duct syndrome in which a male generally has fully external male genitals but has a small, underformed uterus and can also have fallopian tubes and a rudimentary cervix (it nevery says WHERE the cervix would be, since generally they have NO ambiguity in the external genitals like other intersex disorders) and basically, men who have it either have no problems and only find out because of some other health problem calling for abdominal surgery, OR in a case of the same chromosomal mishap that caused the uterus to grow making the testes not descend or cause infertility. rnrnIt isn't LOGICAL, it still wouldn't result in a man getting pregnant (what with the lack of ovaries or, even more, a hormone cycle and a way for the sperm to get to the imaginary eggs that don't exist) but that's what I base MOST of my mpregs off of, lol. It isn't realistic, but it's better than mpregs where it's all 'oh boys get pregnant too!' (I HATE THOSE).
Date: 11/18/11 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 28
The beginning of this chapter was really steamy, thank you very much! :3 Me enjoyed myself. and god, i cant get over nadija, she's just so adorable. i like how Bill's all about her now ^^ Oh, I totally agree - Bill the fucking cock-block! As usual, this was great and I can't wait to read more. :-D
Author's Response: Lol I can see Bill being all "... OMFG I WANT ONE! *tries to adopt baby*"
Date: 11/18/11 08:52 am Title: Chapter 27
Andrej in a suit... he looks good in a suit.
Anyway.. I love the chapter . :D
Author's Response: I have an extreme love for Andrej in mens clothes, I think. He reminds me of the russian chick from Rocky IV when he's in a suit. He just looks so hot you know? lol.
Date: 11/17/11 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story seeewwww much. Your characters are so realistic and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed you that much, but it really is awesome. It's a story that to me, is definitely Author Spotlight worthy and if you don't mind, I may put in a word for you for it. It's definitely different from a lot of Mpreg stories on here and usually I don't read a lot of them. There is one I love and it's called "Into the Flood". You should definitely check it out. Anyhow, I just think this is very original and well-written. Andrej is a doll and I love how you portray the twins in this story as still being loving towards each other, and having that connection without it being incestual. I enjoy reading Bill with Nadja, as well. I think it's perfect for him to understand(in the story of course), that he needs to share that love of her with his brother and make ammends with any harsh feelings he had before. Alright, I know this review is getting long, but I just needed to let you know what a great job you're doing!! Keep up the incredible writing, Dear!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I love reviews like this.
Date: 11/17/11 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 27
Hhaha, I love him! He's the most beautiful MAMA, EVAAAH!
“Or if you’re Tom I’m her mama and he’s her papa,” he said with a smile.
I read over the whole "mama papa" thing, I didn't get what you were referring to until I read it a few times over. In the Netherlands we say "mama and papa" as wel, Dutch is pretty similar to German.
I really liked this chapter and I'm so glad you're not one of the authors that post once a month(: Now I'm going to study, lol.
Author's Response: Lol since I'm american, the standard is mom and dad, but I've never called my mother 'mom' or my dad 'dad' (I may refer to him as 'my dad' in type but I'd never say 'hey dad!'), Im from the south, it's mama and daddy (although TO her, I always call her mommy still, lol. Mostly only kids say mommy but I never grew out of it). Andrej's an Aussie though so he says mum/mummy and dad/daddy (never heard him say daddy, but I've heard him say mum and dad and I just figure any baby is going to learn 'mummy' before 'mum').
Date: 11/17/11 10:55 am Title: Chapter 27
Ahaha sry i ment to ask if andrej was a person in real life not just in a story... well atleast in the interview they finally got things out of the way =) damn well im 5'9 but i dont ever think i could be a model specially wit being a size 0-2 Im going to have to loose a lot of weight im a size 11
Author's Response: Lol, I wouldn't ever WANT to be a size 0-2 unless I was about 4 feet tall, lol. I'm a size 16 and honestly, I want to lose SOME weight, but I wouldn't want to be smaller than a size 8 EVER, I'd rather be a size 10, and I'm only 5'6-7" (different results every time I measure, lol) I like my curves. I'm still hour-glass figured so I really don't have much problem with my body the way it is, tbh. It would be nice to be in better shape just because, but tbh I've been losing weight recently from doing theater (we did a musical... dancing... omfg) and I can tell I've gained a lot of muscle (so maybe I haven't lost weight? lol, idk, the point is I'm nearly a size 14 again) and I love it. I would HATE to look like Andrej. His face is beautiful, but his body is ICKY to me. I know some people are naturally skinny, but I can't imagine being MY height with a 25 inch waist, nonetheless 6'2"!