Date: 11/08/11 04:28 am Title: But Father, my flesh is weak.
It's really hard to write this type of story. But you did it awesome. I loved how you put everything and all the God talk is fascinating. Perfect.
Author's Response: You're so right. I struggled like crazy through this one, but I think it was worth it. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: 10/22/11 02:47 pm Title: But Father, my flesh is weak.
Woah! That was... a bold fic to write, challenge lot of symbolical items and values in religion. I'm not sure how to react - mostly because while it was copnfusing top read something like this happening where it did, I also see the uni´queness and right in twins' love. They should be together and not separated by laws or people. I just hope that it all ended up well for them.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading through it to the end, despite it being confusing. :) This story was something completely new to me and I doubted being able to finish it so many times, as well as the ending, just leaving it where it was, but I let the story guide me, and I think it was for the better. Usually, I never know what's going to happen until the words are typed out and that goes for what comes after that last word, too. So, I'm with you in hoping all ended well for Bill and Tom. I like to think they persevered and ignored laws and people and their love carried them happily through life.
Date: 10/20/11 02:25 pm Title: But Father, my flesh is weak.
Wow...normally I immensely dislike stories that have no closure, but somehow you made it work. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 10/20/11 01:08 am Title: But Father, my flesh is weak.
This is just so very well written! *__* I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/19/11 09:46 pm Title: But Father, my flesh is weak.
I still absolutely love this story. *_*
Author's Response: <3
Date: 10/19/11 12:31 pm Title: But Father, my flesh is weak.
All the god talk is creepy to me as a non-believer, however, this story is quite amazing, and unique. I was debating whether to read it or not, but I'm so glad I did. You've created a whole world in such a short story, there's so much depth, and I love the situation you've put the twins in. Love the ending. This was really amazing, the whole thing. And not just cuz it was amazingly naughty and sacrilegious. Lol. Well done. Its hard to pull off a story like this and I think you managed it impressingly well.
Author's Response: Wow. I'm not sure what to say, but thank you so much. I truly appreciate this review, and I'm so happy that you gave my story a chance.
Date: 10/19/11 04:19 am Title: But Father, my flesh is weak.
Very nice. I love how well you brought Bill's struggles to light. The ending is perfect for this. The lack of resolution really brings home the point.
Author's Response: As I told someone else, I was worried about the ending. I wanted to write more, but it felt like it needed to end without closure. I'm certainly glad I went with my gut feeling about it. Thank you!