Date: 03/07/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 3
O.O What idea? and what secret?! i wanna know! and that part where Bill slapped Tom like a psycho? LMAO. i can so imagine it!
nice work! more soon, please! :D
Author's Response: I can imagine it too x) They had to hit eachother like that because they didn't actually want to hurt eachother =P I'll update soon, thnx!
Date: 03/06/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
ohhh I want to know what his idea is write more....please.
Author's Response: Thank you =) I will soon xxx
Date: 03/06/08 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
I don't know, this is... strange you know, what idea could he possibly have o.o you should change the ending and put it in an easier way, or you won't get to it I think... but it was good :) the way Tom was worried about Bill was kinda cute, though he didn't want to show because he's shy! Cuteness. By the way, you go on top of the page and click on BETA READERS; there, you find the one you like the most and copy their e-mail address and send them an e-mail asking if they want to be your beta reader :) see? It's easy. Tell me if you did it! BTW, go on soon! :D I still wonder what the fuck is Bills' secret xD
Author's Response: Thanks for the long review. I apreciate those ones =] I'm not sure if I will get a beta reader. I don't want to wait so long for them to correct me... I'm an impatient person x) But if I decide that I want one I'll let you know like u said. If I make too many mistakes and you hate it I'm really really sorry!!! xox
Date: 03/06/08 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like it! More soon please :DD
Author's Response: Thank u. I'll post more soon =] xxx
Date: 03/05/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nope, I wasn't thinking that Bill loved Tom. There was one sentence in this chapter that had me thinking, and it was an insult from Tom to Bill that seemed to really affect Bill. That was what has given me an idea of the secret... But again, I won't say anything just in case I'm wrong... I am so eager for the next chapter ^_~
Author's Response: Well... all I can say is that I know what ur talking about =P But if ur right or wrong I can't say. I just don't want u to keep guessing =]
Date: 03/05/08 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
HELL IF HE SHOULD FOLLOW HIM! But make Bill all bitchy please *-* um, you could pick a beta btw :) post soon please!
Author's Response: I'll think about it, thank u =) I can't pick a beta cos I don't know how! x)
Date: 03/05/08 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ummmm, so they aren't brothers in this? Ummmm :) strange and interesting! I wonder what his secret is! :) keep going!
Date: 03/05/08 11:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Okay, I have an idea what the secret is but I'm not going to say it in case I'm wrong ^_~
I'm loving this, more soon please ♥
And personally, I think that after that last sentence, Tom should go after Bill!!
Author's Response: Maybe you know, maybe not =P But if ur thinking it's that Bill loves Tom, thats NOT it =)
Date: 03/04/08 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey , countinue , guy :)) it's interesting :))
Date: 03/04/08 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
eeeek. I wanna know what his secret is. mmoooreeee soon. :]
Author's Response: The secret is really weird x) It will be revealed later in the story xxx
Date: 03/04/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yes he should! Damn, Bill, he's trying to be nice! So you should be nice too!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, but Bill is confused cos he thinks Tom made fun of him with his friends ;) I'll think about it though xoxox Thanks for the opinion!
Date: 03/04/08 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yes! I think he should
Author's Response: Thanks! We'll see :D <3
Date: 03/04/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
^.^ I like your writing style. Its uber pro XP keep going!
Author's Response: Yeaaah riiight x) I don't really think so, but thanks so much!!! =D
Date: 03/04/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Er...ohhh hard desiceion(sp) Mabye yes, because then he could apologize and mabey bill would explain why hes acting that way tward(sp) Tom but no because that might rush the story and idk what u have in mind and then mabey it would just be too soon.
Author's Response: I'll think about it. Thanks for the opinion! =D Maybe ur right... xox
Date: 03/04/08 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
He should totally go after Bill! Poor boy D:
Author's Response: hm... maybe he will =D
Date: 03/04/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm. Maybe! Continue!
Author's Response: I will =)
Date: 03/04/08 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yes! Yes Tom should go after Bill. Wonderful story so far. It is love. :D
By the way, the fact that Bill told Tom he looked like a mop made my day. lol
Author's Response: Thank u for the review! I'm happy I made ur day cos reviews make mine =P xxx
Date: 03/01/08 04:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this so far and desperately need to find out what Bill's secret is.:) More please.
Author's Response: Thank u^^ I'll try updating soon xox
Date: 03/01/08 03:44 am Title: Chapter 1
i didn't like it...
but that doesn't mean i don't want u to continue it! =0
because i LOVED it (A)
this plot seems really interesting and even though i have a hunch about what bill's secret might be, i'll never know for sure until u tell me =(
so please update SOON =0 (A)(A)(A)(A)
Author's Response: lol u had me there -.- Thanks for the review, I'm happy u like it =] And if ur thinking that Bill's secret is that he loved Tom or something, It's not =P :) <3