Date: 10/18/11 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like it! I was half expecting Tom and Bill to flip when they heard Sophia wasn't a virgin anymore.
Author's Response:
I thought about writing that in but it seems so Sophia and I thought maybe they trusted the girls enough not to freak out. It seemed the sort of thing they would be easy going about because they are easy going about alot of stuff. Maybe I'll write a freak-out after everything calms down and it filters into their heads what was actually said.
Date: 10/18/11 07:50 am Title: Chapter 2
the attitude is about right...when my sister and i were growing up we used to get into terrible fights...she would scratch me and one time i bashed her head into our living room wall...it's all good now...i like how they're all getting along...simone's planning something...not surprising...and maybe tomi will ask bill to marry him...that'd be awesome...i'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am glad you like. I try to kepe the characters as real as possible and also be true to the real life people they are named after.
Date: 10/18/11 02:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Well, the girls definately act like real sisters lol. I really hope the G's will be alright. I'd hate to see their relationship end or something because of Georg being bothered by what others think. Another great chapter =)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am glad I got the dynamic right.
Date: 10/18/11 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a really good start =) I love how the girls turned out & how the guys interact with them. Bill & Tom seem to be still going strong. That makes me happy xD
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like. Thank you for sticking with this series.
Date: 10/17/11 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
it's good...they all seem to have evolved together...it's good to see the girls are closer than ever...and bill and tom...i'm thrilled to hear that the g's decided to adopt...although i can't wait to hear what simone thinks of all this...
Author's Response:
Thank you I am glad you liked it. I was a little worried that they would be too different but I am actually enjoying writing this story.
Date: 10/16/11 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
i was confused at the begining, how could a 11 year old have a boyfriend for 2 years already... and then i kind of figured they werent 11 years old from the end notes xD and georg and gustav thing is weird... just cant see them together xD
Author's Response:
No, this is 11 years down the road. The girls are 16. Sorry you can;t see Georg and Gustav together they will be for the whole story.
Date: 10/16/11 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1
perfect transition in my opinion...can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 10/16/11 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1
i have a question....so both tom and bill are negative right?
Author's Response:
Yes, they are.
Date: 10/15/11 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it love it love it! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you that means alot.