Date: 10/30/11 01:20 am Title: Chapter 8
Damn! theyre getting married :D Omg! Im so happy
Author's Response:
Wait for the next chapter there may be more to this story then meets the eye.
Date: 10/28/11 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
i think it's awesome...everything flows well together...and i can't believe that mary's parents would pull this...i don't get why they wouldn't know though unless they've had nothing to do with their granddaughter all these years...i may have missed that part...and justin has to be found...and shown that he's still loved...
Author's Response:
We'll get more in depth with Mary's parents later. I will bring Justin back I think. Just hang on. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 10/27/11 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm hoping there is nothing that the judges can do considering the girls are practically of age. I'm still hoping that Justin turns up soon & all is well. I don't like the tension between the G's. Great chapter =)
Author's Response:
Thank you for offering your opinions. Everything will be resolved I promise.
Date: 10/27/11 11:00 am Title: Chapter 7
I think this story has a different charm altogether, idk what other people think but this would make a great individual story on its own too :) Maybe the who children glamour isnt there, but like I said different charm :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am glad you said that. Like I said I was beginning to get discouraged.
Date: 10/24/11 10:03 am Title: Chapter 6
lawl I love the last few lines
Author's Response:
They're so adorable right? Humor is perfect in nearly every situation.
Date: 10/24/11 01:19 am Title: Chapter 6
i can understand why tom would feel that way...and that must have been a shock to bill's system thinking he saw mary...i love how close everyone is...it's great...
Author's Response:
I can too and that's why I threw it in there. I try to make my characters as real as possible. I couldn't losing someone and then seeing them nearly a decade later. It would make me cry or something. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Date: 10/23/11 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
sorry...brad and megan...that them...
Author's Response:
Ok thanks for letting me know.
Date: 10/23/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
I hope Bill & Tom will be okay. I've been wondering myself, about how often Bill thinks or dreams of Mary, if maybe he's not all that happy. Even though i'm almost positive he is, something doesn't seem right to me. Hopefully i'm only being paranoid =)
Author's Response:
I am glad you sense the tension we shall see if it leads us anywhere.
Date: 10/23/11 02:42 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooo so cute :D
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 10/22/11 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm kinda liking Brad. Hopefully he's a good guy. I hope Justin turns up soon also. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked him. I tried to make him likeable. I hope I can remember where I hid Justin.
Date: 10/22/11 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
how sweet...i like the idea of them getting together...i can't wait to read about new york...
Author's Response:
Who them? There are lots of them in this story. I can't wait to write about New York.
Date: 10/21/11 06:02 am Title: Chapter 4
i dont like Sophia much lol, However-- i ADORE Megan! :D and Justin fo =r that matter :3
Author's Response:
Sophia reminds me alot of how I used to be and she supposed to be the one that gets in trouble so she's slightly unlikable. Meagan on the other hand is the one that never gets in trouble and is always working on something so she is like a Mary Sue without being a Mary Sue. I don't how to put it any differently. Justin is a hard character for me to write because he is so different then what I expected when I began writing him but he is just a sweet scared little boy. I am not sure I like Georg in this story though. He seems a little harsh and abrasive but I don't know. We'll see how it goes.
Date: 10/21/11 02:45 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm worried about Sophia. Like seriously. I feel something is going to happen to her. As for Megan I'm hoping this Brad is a real gentlemen.
Author's Response:
I worry about Sophia too but we'll see hopefully everything works out. I hope Brad is good too so Meagan can get a taste of love without getting hurt.
Date: 10/21/11 12:12 am Title: Chapter 4
dreams and memories work...it's great that the girls have made up...and megan stood up for sophia...that's great...
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am glad you like the dynamic I have created. I didn't how well this story would work but I am definitely glad I have started to writing it.
Date: 10/20/11 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love that Meaghan sent a boy to the hospital lol. Now that I know she can protect herself i'm not so worried about Brad haha.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that set your mind at ease. Thank you for reading.
Date: 10/20/11 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
i cant believe i didnt see this! =_= i like where its going! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you. I was wondering when you would show up. Glad you found it.
Date: 10/20/11 01:29 am Title: Chapter 3
i'm thinking that sophia and rickie should stay together...and maybe meg and brad should get together...depending on his age...and i can understand where justin's coming from...actions speak louder than words...they just have to prove to him that they mean what they say...
Author's Response:
Thank you for offering your opinion. This will really help. I hope you like future chapters.
Date: 10/19/11 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
How old is brad?
Author's Response:
That's getting confronted in the next few chapters. If you need it for the banner I'll email it to you.
Date: 10/19/11 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm not quite sold on this Brad guy. I'm hoping he genuinely likes Meagan & he's not up to something.
Author's Response:
Me too. We'll see, Meagan deserves happiness.
Date: 10/19/11 11:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Yay a sequel :D wasn't baby's name Karen? :l but anyways, sequel yay! :D
Author's Response:
Yes it was. I just realized that last night but it's too late to edit now. Sorry for any confusion.