Date: 08/19/19 11:00 pm Title: Say Anything
Porque no continuaste???
Tom debe cambiar de actitud hacia Bill .....
Date: 08/19/19 10:23 pm Title: Remember the Name
Tom!!! No puedo creer esa actitud tan ruda, Bill te defendiste de manera excelente!!!
Date: 01/31/13 09:56 pm Title: Say Anything
Dear lord i want to shove my fist down Toms throat. You don't know him, don't judge him you twat.
Ugh, Tom, man, grow a pair...
I think i laughed so hard i cried when George (in the deuxieme chapitre) told tom that he got told to man up by a guy who wears more makeup than his mom.
you should SERIOUSLY write screenplay. You'd be awesome at it, case closed.
Date: 01/03/13 05:51 am Title: Say Anything
Are you still alive...? Because if you are, it would be amazing if you would continue this story xd I love it so much. I understand Tom's hate for Bill, because his little brother wears make up, dyed black hair and black clothes because of Bill himself. But I'd like to know what Tom will do when he finds out that Bill himself isn't so horrible. That, in fact, he has got a great personality. I kinda hope that, at the end, Bill and Tom fall in love (First Tom denies, but than he sees that he's completely in love with Bill), and after that Bobby and Bill meet, so Bobby is totally happy and loves Tom..
And it's a happily ever afterrrr!!
So please update? Because i'm probably wrong with my thoughts of how the story ends. (:
Date: 01/01/13 11:03 pm Title: Say Anything
*bangs head*
Tom, you dumb fuck.... Stop being an ignorant bastard! I hate hating you... Fuck you're frustrating.
I both love and hate you for writing like this; your characters being so real and relatable.... DAMN IT ALL! I hate it when I get overly attached to characters. BLARGH!
Right more... DO IT! Or I'll come for you in the night with a feather sword to tickle you with!!! O.O
Date: 01/01/13 10:02 pm Title: Remember the Name
Well at least he could admit he was wrong... now does that include the acceptance that he was a worthless prick as well or can I get that in writing too? :P lol
Bravo!
Once again... ONWARD TO CHAPTER THREE!!!
Date: 12/30/12 11:28 am Title: Thank You for the Venom
. . .
Fuck you Tom -_-
ONWARD TO CHAPTER TWO!
Date: 06/07/12 09:23 pm Title: Say Anything
Mein Liebschön, wooo bist duuuuuu?? Ich vermisse dein Fiktion
Date: 05/19/12 10:16 am Title: Say Anything
Ah yes, another story I would like to see updated soon! Your writing style is sinfully captivating. And the simple people interactions are so... personal and realistic! Tom's reasons to disliking Bill are so understanding, even in their obvious wrong-ness. xD I want to see where this will lead... And, well, longer chapters? please? Btw, Bill's English is so adorable! XD I do wonder if it'll get better with the time, I think he has a lot to say, and I'm sure there'll be a lot that will need to be said when things with Tom start getting more... intense, let's say. For better or for the worse. xD
Date: 02/18/12 08:32 am Title: Say Anything
Wow that was intense. I'm hooked, lovely plot and characters. Your story is amazing!
Date: 02/10/12 01:51 am Title: Say Anything
I like! I really like how Tom is an asshole but isn't a typical one and Bill is mature enough to take it all in like a real man...better take some pointers from him, Tom!
Date: 02/08/12 03:27 am Title: Say Anything
OMG, I love!! Tom's hate stems from his brother's change of personality/outer appearance due to his love of Bill!! You suck, Tom!! lol jk I am loving this!! Please update soon. :D
Date: 02/07/12 04:51 am Title: Remember the Name
Damn, Bill has claws!! Your move, Tom. lol
Date: 02/07/12 04:00 am Title: Thank You for the Venom
Wow, this is an interesting story!! Tom was so harsh. :/ But hopefully he won't make Bill feel too bad in later chapters. :)
Date: 02/03/12 06:36 pm Title: Say Anything
I thought I'd never see this :) I must say IT MADE MY DAY!!!!
Or evening, tbh. Aaaaa! I love your writing, especially when the introspection seems all too real and all the angst just gives me the shivers :)
It was interesting to see that underlying cause for Tom's hostility towards Bill; I'd already suspected some sort of rivalry to be behind it, but I didn't see the big brother-little brother thing. I guess because to me, Tom will always just have Bill :) Hehehe!
I wonder if Bill will upload that vid. His management wouldn't approve of it, surely? but Bill being Bill, we'll never know :) The media would certainly have a field day with it when they grab it from the net, yes?
Why am I channelling Dunja?
Date: 02/03/12 05:01 pm Title: Say Anything
I think Bill is right! Everybody should find their way in life, be who they want to be and the most important thing to not regred anything as long as you belive in yourself!
What a wonderful cap!
Tom dosenīt got the right to talk to his brother like that, its the task of the parents. I mean its ok to be concerned, but he acts like bobbys father.
There is just one thing I want to say. I donīt want to be some kind of annoying teacher but this is something that bugs me since years:
"Bill? Sie hier?" He heard Gustav query.
The right way it would be: Bill, bist du hier?
You have to say du when: you know the person, he/ she isnīt way older than yourself (if the person is under 16 you can always say du; between 16 - 18 it depends if you want to be called du or sie) and you can say du if the person youīre talking to is no person to be respected
Normaly the older person is offering the du, then its ok. But people like your teacher, your boss, a police officer or a judge have to be called sie because that would be persons to be respected. When your boss says du than its ok to say it back.
It sounds very complicated but it isnīt, trust me!
Date: 02/02/12 06:10 pm Title: Say Anything
Great update. Can hardly wait for another =)
Date: 02/02/12 02:23 am Title: Say Anything
I can just imagine Bill's fans squeeing and going crazy over his videos and what he wears. *insert drool*
I liked seeing more into who Tom is. He's just a person too. With a kid brother starry eyed over Bill. Heh. I can see how Tom might not like that, but putting down Bill to his brother is going to get the opposite effect than what he wants.
Date: 02/02/12 01:39 am Title: Remember the Name
Bill is so strong and has a great attitude. Even when he's hurt, he thinks it through and chooses to be a better, stronger person.
I liked the bit with Bill pitying Tom's mother for having raised such a child.
Bill's not-quite-right English was cute. 'Clotheses' indeed. ;)
I ADORED Bill's response to Tom talking like that to him in person. Ok, put on the spot in an interview maybe you go off and say a bunch of stuff you may or may not feel as strongly about, but you shouldn't speak like that in person to someone you don't really know! Bill handled it so well. A physical fight or just walking away just wouldn't have been so great for Bill. But the way he handled it, got his feelings across brilliantly, and didn't cause a huge scene to disrupt the party.
Date: 02/02/12 12:00 am Title: Thank You for the Venom
I just LOVED the banner and manip, and the summary, it was so interesting I just wanted to read so much - and the first chapter has delivered all my hopes and even more! Your portrayal of Bill's emotions was so great, I could totally feel the turmoil along with him. Being a rockstar just isn't so easy, huh?