Date: 10/22/11 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Heh, don't worry about the underlining thing. I remember that from English, too. "Underline the titles of novels, and put poetry titles in quotes." I think in casual writing you can do whatever.
And ooh! Bit of a coincidence since a friend of mine was *just* telling me how soldiers often love phone cards.
That leads me to my main exciting news: I went ahead and signed up at "Adopt a US Soldier", and I got my soldier yesterday! :D Already wrote him an email. I prefer physical letters like in this fic, but I was anxious to make the introduction XD
What I think about Mikey... Hmm, he's alright.. I don't dislike him or anything, though I presuming he's gonna to something wrong to push Bill into Tom's metaphorical arms ;P
PS: Lolol, at the ending bit.
Author's Response: tom's metaphorical arms...that made me giggle. that's awesome that you've adopted a soldier! be sure to let me know how it goes! and once again, thanks for reading! as for mikey...what happens with him and bill happened between me and one of my exes a few years back. but that's all i'm telling you!
Date: 10/22/11 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
lol that last line hahaha.!
awwh poor Bill >_<
but I loved this chapter very muchh <3 - also gave a little more on Bill's relationship with Michael which was nice :)
Gordon seemed kinda .. standoffish - is he the bad guy of the story or something? o.o
but yeahh- awesome chapter! can't wait for moree <3
Author's Response: gordon? yeah i guess he would qualify as a bad guy. thanks for reading!
Author's Response: gordon? yeah i guess he would qualify as a bad guy. thanks for reading!
Date: 10/22/11 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
eeeee i LOVED this chapter I love this whole letter thing, my friend was reading this wimme and she whined at first going I dont wanna read a story where they only write to each other and have no action and Im like just read it xD
She loved it btw she was gushing and hyperventilating and asked me to copy paste every time there's an update since she dosent have an account here and is too lazy xD
Author's Response: that's so great! tell her to get an account here so she can read all the awesomeness! well...mainly my awesomeness. but still!
Date: 10/22/11 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww @ poor Bill being freaked out about almost killing him lol this is so so SO cute. Did you have fun in the woods?
Author's Response: haunted woods are tonight. can't wait! thanks for reading!
Date: 10/22/11 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't put into words how much I am enjoying this story!
Author's Response: try real hard! lol
Date: 10/22/11 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved this chapter, as usual! I seriously can't wait to see how their relationship progresses. :D
And what the hell are you doing tonight? Lol
Author's Response: tonight i will be walking/running through "haunted" woods wondering what creepy things will jump out and scare the crap out of me.
Author's Response: tonight i will be walking/running through "haunted" woods wondering what creepy things will jump out and scare the crap out of me.
Date: 10/22/11 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay, I'm really liking this story so far.
Never heard of Slim Jims before, are they any good?
Author's Response: thanks for reading! slim jims are an acquired taste. i personally love them, but some people can't stand them. if you can fine some you simply must try one.
Date: 10/22/11 11:07 am Title: Chapter 4
Damn...nearly killing his pen pal before meeting him, that would've been bad and an end to the story! Love the chapter, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: yeah we just couldn't end the story there! there's so much more to come!
Date: 10/22/11 10:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Lol! Poor Bill nearly killed Tomi! That was yet another brilliant chapter! Such a sweet gesture from Bill to send a gift to Tom... I just really enjoy reading about these boys. Can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response: yeah, bill's a sweetheart. i can so picture him running around the store throwing random things in a basket.
Author's Response: yeah, bill's a sweetheart. i can so picture him running around the store throwing random things in a basket.
Date: 10/22/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 4
O man! The vision of Tom lying there with only boxers & dog tags is enough uniform to turn me on, hehe. Lol, Bill's reaction to the peanuts =D Can hardly wait til ur next update!
Author's Response: yes picturing certain things while i'm writing is always fun!
Date: 10/22/11 10:10 am Title: Chapter 4
This was amazing as always...
Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm thrilled at the reception this story is getting!
Date: 10/21/11 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
this was a good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks very much. next chapter will be up whenever i get out of bed in the morning.
Date: 10/21/11 01:42 am Title: Chapter 3
wow i have no words....except what i'm typing lol. but in all seriousnessnessness xD....this is AMAZING! i'm already waiting for saturday to come, i might just set a count down if anything lol...ugh one more day to wait, i hope i can survive! *hugs* i look forward to reading more of your stories!!
Author's Response: yay! i'm so glad you like it so much! less than 24 hours to wait now.
Date: 10/20/11 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow, that last line was so straight forward!
Author's Response: tom's a straight forwards kinda guy. thanks for reading!
Date: 10/20/11 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Tuna macaroni salad is awesomeicity. This is going along nicely. I love soldier Tom. I love any Tom really. ;)
Author's Response: yeah, tom in general works for me
Author's Response: yeah, tom in general works for me
Date: 10/20/11 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
yay! loved this chapter too <3
i really like the relationship they're establishing and OMG! that last line from Tom x333 hahaha so good;)
update soon please! <3
Author's Response: that last line is going over great! glad you enjoyed it, and the rest of the chapter. next update saturday.
Date: 10/20/11 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this story nough said, amen to you lol
Author's Response: all righty then!
Date: 10/20/11 11:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Yayy another chappie!!! This made my day =D Looking forward to Bill's BDay party.
Author's Response: glad i could make your day!
Date: 10/20/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 3
i'd totally go for him if i were a guy...
Author's Response: i'd go for him even though i'm a girl! lol
Date: 10/20/11 12:55 am Title: Chapter 3
Oooh! I really love this!
“Do you usually go for guys in makeup?”
Tom looked at his friend and grinned. “I could if they look like him.”
Brilliant!
Author's Response: thanks so much! glad i included that line!