Date: 10/26/11 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ps. A NEW CHAPTER!? Oh, you're the sweetest! :P
Date: 10/26/11 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Okey, I was in the bus on my way home from work. All I do at work these days, is handling customers and reading your stories on my cellphone :P They're so well written, and I really really like well written stories. (Grammar Nazi here! Sorry if my english sucks btw.)
This story is just... Sentimental. The bond between a person who could end up dead at any moment, and a person who's living a normal teenage life. And they don't even know each other! I really like it. It kinda insprired me to do the same thing. Write a letter to someone who may not have much hope, and who's just happy to survive the day..
Thank you for inspriring me! :)
Author's Response: quick! hide the cell phone! your boss is coming! anyhoo, thanks so much for reading and it's great to hear that i've inspired you. and yes, next chapter goes up whenever i get home tonight.
Date: 10/26/11 11:49 am Title: Chapter 4
When I get home, you'll get a big review!
Author's Response: and when i get home, you'll get a new chapter!
Date: 10/24/11 08:27 am Title: Chapter 4
why did Bill send tom deodorant? xD OM I like it so much I can't wait to see them meet each other
Author's Response: well it's not like tom can just run down to walgreens and buy his own lol it's just one of many random but necessary things bill sent him
Date: 10/24/11 07:23 am Title: Chapter 4
omg!!! he almost killed him!!! but he didn't know...and now he does...that was really sweet that bill sent him a care package...and that gus was there to save tom...
Author's Response: hero!gustav!
Date: 10/23/11 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Please continue. Your doing a great job!!!
Author's Response: thanks very much! i plan to!
Date: 10/23/11 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
haha omg bill you almost killed him lol..poor thing and gustav is so paranoid .. lovely chapter
Author's Response: thanks crazybitch!
Author's Response: thanks crazybitch!
Date: 10/23/11 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
I was worried about Tom's reaction when Bill told him he was gay, but I see there was nothing to worry about! Yahh!
Author's Response: oh no, just one more thing to like about bill! lol
Date: 10/23/11 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think them 'meeting' and corresponding via letters is a cool idea. I like the idea of a kick-ass soldier Tom. :)
Author's Response: kick-ass soldier tom. sounds like a really cool action figure.
Date: 10/23/11 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
holy fuck i finally got to read it! YAY! *does a dance* simply amazing, once again!
slim jims are really fucking good to! wish i had one right...and a gatorade *pouts*
lol rather it be pee, then having the shit scared out of you xD
Author's Response: don't slimmy jims totally rock? i could eat my body weight in those things! thanks for reading!
Date: 10/23/11 08:01 am Title: Chapter 4
So I think a fair warning is in order, i have a strong tendency to randomly ramble when I write reviews, probably because I tend to do that in real life as well - first sentence is a perfect example. Anyways, I really like this. i am happy that I decided to read it. I had passed it over a couple of times, not thinking much of the introduction but then decided on one of those days where not much was going on and I needed random entertainment that I should read (I read safe from harm, so knew your style). And I love it. I am impatiently waiting for your updates, hoping that you will get the days wrong so I can get the chapters early. I want to know when Bill is splitting with Michael. I want to know if Tom is going to get injured. I want to know when they are meeting. I want to know everythin and then three days is a long time to wait. when I see that the chapters are only about 2000 words long I am like - nooo. And yet 2000 is actually long it is just that I am never ready for it to end when it does. So in other words I would totally wish you made longer chapters and that you would update several times every day but that is wishful thinking and I know that. However, the suspense is killing me. Keep up the good work, I will keep checking everyday for an update because one never knows ;)
Author's Response: first of all, i love long rambling reviews cuz i tend to be like that in real life too. so please, ramble away. and there's nothing wrong with wishful thinking, it just means the story excites you and you really want to see how it progresses. so thank you! i love that you enjoy it that much. and saturday-wednesday is the longest part of my week, believe me! i love updating!
Date: 10/23/11 04:57 am Title: Chapter 4
woot woot. :] luv itttttt:3
Author's Response: woo hoo! thanks for reading!
Date: 10/23/11 01:11 am Title: Chapter 4
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading!
Date: 10/22/11 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story! :D Gawwh, Tom as a corporal :DDD I'm dying just thinking about it:DDD It was sweet of Bill, sending all those things to Tom! ^^ And haha, I can't wait to read more of Bill's reaction when Tom 'wrote' him that he nearly killed him :PP Haha, update soon please :-DDD
Author's Response: glad you like it so much! next update wednesday.
Date: 10/22/11 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm really loving this story! its amazing, i keep imagining tom kaulitz in uniform, **Drules slightly** anyway!! ,massive love for you! xx
Author's Response: i do so love a man in uniform
Date: 10/22/11 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
*gasp* Attempted murder of a Corporal!!! Thats pretty bad. Lol
Wonderful chapter. Something seemed...off with Mike in this chapter don't know if it was just cuz he was drunk or what...
I think it was really sweet of Bill to send Tom a christmas care package. And he made sure to send him everything, or near abouts.
Being mugged for his processed meat product...*chuckles*
Keep up thr fantatic work. Can't wait to see more! *hugs*
Author's Response: thanks very much for reading!
Date: 10/22/11 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh! I would most definitely pee my pants. I like scary movies, but haunted houses and the like are just not my cup of tea. I'm such a jumpy person!
Btw, I followed you on twitter. You have not reciprocated the love. I'm just gonna go sulk in the corner now. K bye.
Author's Response: dude! i'm barely ever on twitter! but cuz its you i'll go follow you. but seriously, the best way to follow me is facebook. or gmail. oh, and i totally peed my pants tonight. just a little though. not a full blown gusher like my friend.
Date: 10/22/11 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww that's so sweet of Bill =D Whew close call thanks to Gustav =)
Author's Response: gustav is tom's guardian angel
Date: 10/22/11 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lmao! That thing with the peanuts was hilarious. Great chapter! Can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: and the whole peanut allergy thing was just a random thing i decided to add on a whim. glad i did!
Date: 10/22/11 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
aw no fair, i wanna go get scared!its too expensive to go anywhere fun here...closest halloween haunt is the Queen Mary Dark Harbor, and it's $34...plus I have a class Halloween night from 7-9.30pm. Lovely....anyway, love that Bill got Tom a present, and they both have pics of each other to beat off to...uhhh...and I keep hoping that Michael is doing something bad, but not yet...lol. maybe his mental health day was ALL A CLEVER RUSE FOR HIS CHEATING McCHEATYPANTS! haha, i'm out to hate him, he's in Tomi's way
Author's Response: WHAT??? they're not beating off to each other's pictures! that's outrageous! they're both good virtuous boys and...oh, who am i kidding??? they're guys! lol sorry to tell you, but michael's mental health day was really just a mental health day.
Author's Response: WHAT??? they're not beating off to each other's pictures! that's outrageous! they're both good virtuous boys and...oh, who am i kidding??? they're guys! lol sorry to tell you, but michael's mental health day was really just a mental health day.