Date: 10/27/11 03:24 am Title: Chapter 5
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thanks for reading! next chapter will be up saturday.
Date: 10/27/11 02:39 am Title: Chapter 5
Can't believe he called him! Some balls he has :P
Author's Response: i hope you mean that in a good way lol
Date: 10/27/11 01:27 am Title: Chapter 5
i love the last line i went, "Goddamit they ned to be together" :< Lol, -huggles and loves on you-
Author's Response: augh! too much love and huggles! lol thanks for reading!
Date: 10/27/11 12:28 am Title: Chapter 5
Never had Wendy's before, but if they are as good as this chapter, I'm definitely trying them someday.
Oh, Tom is so sweet. I can't wait for him to get back home sound and safe. And Gus, too.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: wendy's fries are awesome! and thanks for reading!
Date: 10/27/11 12:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Awwww...Tom called. Sorry, can't leave a longer comment. my brain is still sleeping.
Author's Response: my brain's asleep too, and i'm at work! lol
Date: 10/26/11 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
I would hope reviews were far superior to Wendy's french fries. Now that they changed to 'all natural with sea salt' they suck.
This was a very nice chapter. It tickled me that Tom used his phone time to give Bill a ring. I thought it was very sweet.
Georg's right. Dump his ass. Hes been acting very...off. Not good boyfriendy at all. That was totally avoidance at the party,theres no reason he couldn't've taken Bill on the circuit with him. And a make up kit was a total cop out present. I got a make up kit for a girl that I didn't know, as a secret santa exchange...actually, now I think about it that might have been a nail kit....same concept though. In fact, mine took more thought, cuz I wasn't going to get her a make up kit when I didn't know what colors she liked to wear.
The heck was up Gordon's ass? It was christmas! You're not allowed to frown on christmas!! At least not whwen you have a family to spend it with.
I liked the peek into Tom's home life too. And I'm chuffed Gussi has a girl back home, and is gonna marry her.
Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: i agree they're not as good as they used to be, but they're still my favorite. and you're totally not allowed to frown on christmas! as for the scene with tom's family, that was a last minute add-in. i figured i was focusing so much on bill's family, why not add some of tom's. glad you enjoyed it. and yay, gussi has a woman!
Date: 10/26/11 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Geez, that Gordon. It's like he's not even present, with the way he's behaving.
Oh my gosh! What a pleasant surprise that Tom called him :DD
Tom and Gustav want to go home :(
Heh, I unexpectedly really liked that last line. It's sort of like what a narrator would say in a movie while it shows a certain expression on Bill's face. That visual came up for me :)
Author's Response: i love that you pointed that out, about picturing the expression on bill's face at the end. i picture things when i'm writing so it's great that you were able to picture it while you were reading. i pictured him with a mixture of sadness and confusion.
Author's Response: i love that you pointed that out, about picturing the expression on bill's face at the end. i picture things when i'm writing so it's great that you were able to picture it while you were reading. i pictured him with a mixture of sadness and confusion.
Date: 10/26/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, i meant, that the chapter was over xD
Author's Response: lol okay that makes more sense then
Date: 10/26/11 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love Wendy's french fries and I check for updates every freaken day on this.... thats how much Im loving it.
Author's Response: thank god! someone else who understands the wonderfulness that is wendy's! oh, and thanks for reading!
Date: 10/26/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww Tom called him! Eeeek. I love the pace of the progression of this story. I cannot wait for the next!
Also, you totally haven't been on twitter again haha. Even after you made it all pretty!
Author's Response: oh hush! i told you i'm rarely there. i tweeted today but i did it from my phone. anyhoo, back to the subject at hand. i'm glad you pointed out the pace of the story, i always worry about that so thanks.
Date: 10/26/11 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Omg! It was so adorable for Tom to call Bill! And then Bill thought of Tom while with is boyfriend.... they are just SO cute! Still enjoying this story very much! I'm actually getting more and more addicted to it with every new chapter! Keep them coming =P Thanks for this awesome update!
Author's Response: tom was inspired by the christmas spirit! as for your addiction, i'd say go to rehab...but then you might not read my story anymore. so just go with it!
Date: 10/26/11 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter! I loved that they got to talk on the phone, and I liked that Bill is, perhaps, starting to have some doubts about Michael. I can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: yeah michael's sorta being a douche, huh? thanks for reading!
Date: 10/26/11 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
awe! he called him! thats way cute if you ask me.
Author's Response: way cute...i agree! thanks!
Author's Response: way cute...i agree! thanks!
Date: 10/26/11 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just can't get enough of this story. Seriously, every time I sign on, I look for this one. To see if it was updated. I'm addicted.
Author's Response: another person addicted to my story...hmm, must be catching...
Date: 10/26/11 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww....I agree with Georg about Bill dumping Michael, he avoided Bill the whole night and only decided to give him a new years kiss when I have a feeling there was really no true love in it.
Author's Response: no true love? but that's just mean! anyhoo, thanks for reading!
Date: 10/26/11 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
aw hell naw! I smell trouble stirring! I love this story.. If I could hug I would XD
Author's Response: awesome! another user of the "aw hell naw!" expression. hugs to you too!
Date: 10/26/11 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
ZOMG I HOPE THEY BREAK UP.!
lolololol i love Bill and Tom in this.!
your characterizations are sooo good ^^
still loving this <3
so update soon, again :D
xx
Author's Response: so yeah i totally laughed at your first sentence. glad you're loving it, and next update will be saturday.
Date: 10/26/11 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahh I love it. I keep checking my tracked stories and hoping that it'll be reallyyyy long just so I can find out more lol
Author's Response: yeah i kinda suck when it comes to chapter length. i just type until what i wanted to happen has happened. but hey it's all about quality and not quantity, right? thanks for reading!
Date: 10/26/11 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
i was tempted not to review, since you compared reviews to such an unworthy food, but oh well. ;) YAY michael finally did something wrong. knew he was a dolt. all he wants is some ass, thanks for the shit makeup...lol shows what's on his mind...and the ass grab. glad bill thought of tom finally. i'm kinda upset about this being over, tho, since NOTHING else is updating. like seriously, what's with these people? you'd think they were as busy as me, or something...>.>
Author's Response: okay first of all...wendy's french fries are a gift from God! just sayin...and don't fret (did i just say fret?) the story's not over yet!
Date: 10/26/11 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww..Bill & Tom finally got to hear each others voices xD I'm with Geo..dump him! Haha. Love this!! Can't hardly wait for more.
Author's Response: yeah that geo's a pretty smart guy huh?